meri deewanagi ki

by saahill on March 25, 2012, 09:23:02 AM
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woh puchte hain hadh mujse meri deewanagi ki main kehta hun mujhe saanson chhin jaye jo ishq tumse na rahe

Woh puchte hain hadh mujse meri khawaishon ki , main kehta hun meri jindagi khatam jo teri khawaish na rahe .

 Woh puchte hain hadh mujse meri dillagi ki .main kehta hun jo tere naam se na dadhke to dil mein dadhkan na rahe
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2012, 09:43:11 AM »
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Saahil Ji, Bahut Umda Kaha. In the first line, if "meri saansen" comes instead of "mujhe saanson" will not be better, suggestion only
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woh puchte hain hadh mujse meri deewanagi ki main kehta hun mujhe saanson chhin jaye jo ishq tumse na rahe

Woh puchte hain hadh mujse meri khawaishon ki , main kehta hun meri jindagi khatam jo teri khawaish na rahe .

 Woh puchte hain hadh mujse meri dillagi ki .main kehta hun jo tere naam se na dadhke to dil mein dadhkan na rahe
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2012, 09:48:09 AM »
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khob.........
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2012, 01:18:35 PM »
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saahil ji zaraa line ko chhotee rakho aadmeee kho jaataa hai padhne men.
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ok saini ji
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