Meri duniya

by neha verma on November 03, 2012, 05:01:16 PM
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zindagi yu badal jaegi socha na tha
is mod per le aegi socha na tha
humne band mutthi me sare sapne ked to kie hue the
ki kahi koi mere sapno ko tod na de
un khuli hui aankho se udte hue sapno ki dor
thame hui thi meri saanse
jee rahi thi apni duniya apni masti me
apni marzi se...

kabhi idhar kabhi udhar har taraf  chhaii hui thi me
tohfo ki bauchar thi
mehak utha tha mere dil ka gharonda
fursat hi nahi thi kisi alag duniya ko dekhne ki
kisi apne ko dekhne ki...


naye naye sapne apni aur kheenche hue the mujhe
dosto ka sath,bado ka vishwas..
meri khwahishein badh rahi thi pal pal
chooth raha tha mera vidyalaya
mere dost, mere shikshak
mera ghar, mera shehar
mano kisi mala me piroye hue
moti gir girker khatm hote ja rahe ho
naya bhavishya gadne ko


fir shuru hua karwaan mera
naya shehar naya ghar naye log
naya college naye dost
ek alag si duniya...
jo har roj nayi musibatein lekar ati
kabhi college band to kabhi scooty..
kabhi class nahi to kabhi hum nahi
fir shuru hua daur dosto ka, masti ka
fir chahakane lagi me apni nayi duniya me....


mila khushiyo ka sansar mujhe
hua aagaaz ik farishte ka
meri choti si duniya me
paanv nahi the zameen per mere
udd rahi thi hawaon me swacchand hokar
dekha tha jise sapno me
socha tha jiske bare me tanhaiyo me
HAAN mila vesa hi ik dost mujhe
thoda seedha,thoda ajeeb
per laga mujhe apne jaisa hi
kiya usne izhaar jab
chaha nahi tha mene pyar tab...
is dosti ka koi aur bhi pehlu hoga
socha nahi tha mene tab
thodi si gup shup thodi si hansi thoda mazak
chal rha tha sath sath..
samjha rha tha ishare me kuch
bata rha tha meri manzil ko


lagi baatein pyari uski mujhe
lagne laga pyara vo bhi tab
na jane kaise aur badal gai duniya meri
chaha to bahut ki kar du
apna haal-e-dil  bayaan
per dimag aur dil ki is kashmakash
me reh gai ulajh ker
aur ker diya
   IQRAR-E-ISHQ bayaan
khushi nahi gum tha mujhe ki
kyu hua iqrar-e-ishq bayaan
roya tha sawan sath mere
samajh nahi aa raha tha ki
karna kya chahti thi bayaan use
din aur raato me uske sapne the
ccheena jisne chain mera
sikhaya jisne noor-e-ishq mujhe
karti hu ab shukriya use
ki milaya khud se khud hi ko mujhe
nazrein meri tham gai use milne k liye
baaton se jisne churaya mujhe
HASRAT-E-ISHQ ban gaye vo mere liye
intzaar hai mujhe unke deedar ka
ki aega vo din
hoga vo shamil meri duniya me
thamega mere hatho ko
lega baahon me mujhe..
aur kahega
     TUM HI HO MERE LIYE..........



ye meri zindagi ka pehla anubhav tha jise panno per ukerne ki koshish ki thi...kuch saal pehle....kahi kahi per angreji shabd bhi prayog kiye hai uske liye kshama chahti hu..asaha hai mere naadan umar k anubhav apko pasand aye....
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 05:42:17 PM »
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm bahut dinoN ke baad kisi ka bilkul seedhe dil se likha hua padh raha huN aur kisi bilkul naye likhne wale se rubaru huN, ek baat kahuNga ki zindagi ke tajurbe aur likhne ka hunar umra se nahi aate, aur aaj ke zamane me jo poetry hoti hai usme angrezi ke lafzon ka prayog shamya hai...

main aapki jazbaaton aur kosish dono ki kadra karta huN, bilkul khud ka sa laga isme, pita ji ke transferabe job se mujhe v kuch aise tajurbe hue, aur meri v pehli kavita zindagi ke mere anubhav ke bare me hi thi, aage v umeed karta huN isi imaandaari ke sath aap apne jazbaat bayaaN karti raheNgi... is kosish ke liye meri taraf se ek rau...
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 06:02:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ghayal ji...Rau k liye nahi balki isliye ki apne seedhe saral vicharo ko mehsus kiya...aur ye kavita bhi unhi dino ki hai jb mere papa ka transfer ho gaya tha....naya shehar bilkul bhi acha nahi lgta tha...usi samay ke kuch khatthe meethe anubhav hai ye
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2012, 12:44:03 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2012, 01:23:44 AM »
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aapkee is bebaak adaaygee par dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2012, 03:11:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
naya hai par bahut umda hai dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2012, 05:53:11 AM »
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 Welcome Banner Welcome Smiley  neha  to YOINDIA
            very nice creation .....keep writing.
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2012, 06:10:11 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Beahd Saral Komal Aur Pyar Bhare Shabdo Me Apne Dil Ke Khyalato Ko Baya Kiya Hain.......Hats Of Creation Neha Ji...

Ek Rau Meri Taraf Se Kabul Kijiyega ......
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2012, 07:39:05 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyawad kaushal ji
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«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2012, 04:03:09 PM »
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seedhe seedhe shabdon mein sidhi sidhi baat bahut hi umda creation dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
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