Meri Har Ghazal MeN Aajkal Itni Mithaas Kyon Hai Bhala "Khwaish"

by khwaish on September 24, 2012, 03:35:49 PM
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Teri Tasveer Ko Seene Se Laga Baithe Hai
Aaj Hum Khud Ko Bhoola Baithe Hai...!!!!


Yeh kalaam Vakaai Ek Tasveer Par Likhi gayi Hai..
Isliye Main Uss Tasveer Ka Bahut Bahut Shukar-Guzaar Hoon...


Chehra To Hai Khoob,  Zulfein Bhi Kamaal Ke..!!!!!
Chand Ko Rakh Diya Ho Kisi Ne Aasman Se Nikaal Ke

Ab Hum To Aap Par Apna Dil Haar Baithe Hai Huzoor..!!!!!!
Rakhna Iss Gareeb Ke Dil Ko Zarra Sambhaal Ke

Aapki Tasveer Ko Main Aaj Peharo Dekhta Rahaa..!!!!!
Naa Jane Kitne Khwab,Maine Rakhe Hai Dil meN Paal Ke

Khabar Hai Humein , Ke Aapka Dil Bhee Kuch Kehta Hai.!!!
Par Kehte Ho Aap Har Baat Ko Bade Hi  Dekh-Baal Ke

Meri Har Ghazal MeN Aajkal Itni Mithaas Kyon Hai Bhala??
Log Yuhi kehte Hai "Khwahish" Ke Jumle Hai Be-Misaal Ke


               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2012, 03:46:08 PM »
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Bahut   pyari  peshkash  hai... Pyar  ki  zubaan  mein
bola  gaya   har lafz  meethha  hota  hai .  Aur  phir
zubaan-e-Khwaish  to  hai  hi  pyar  bhari . Ghazlein
kyun  na  mithhi  hon . Bahut  khoob , khwaish ji, aur
bahut  bahut mubarakbaad  aur  duaaein . Hasan.
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2012, 03:47:33 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2012, 03:52:24 PM »
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Very Nice!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2012, 03:53:17 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurt aur meethe shabdo se saja qalaam... aur khawahish ji aapne likha hai to iski mithas apne aap hi duguna ho jati hai bahut hi lajawab umda creation

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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2012, 04:43:22 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsoorat peshkash.  Applause Applause Applause Applause
mubarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2012, 04:51:57 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish jee
Sach me bahut umda likha hai.
tasveer ka kamaal..
khoobsurti aur pyaar us tasveer men nahee..ye to aapki nazar men hai..
ham to yahee dua karenge ..aap use aur dhyaan se dekhe aur nit naye kalaam likhe aur bazm ki shobha badhaye.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2012, 05:19:54 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 24, 2012, 03:35:49 PM
Teri Tasveer Ko Seene Se Laga Baithe Hai
Aaj Hum Khud Ko Bhoola Baithe Hai...!!!!


Yeh kalaam Vakaai Ek Tasveer Par Likhi gayi Hai..
Isliye Main Uss Tasveer Ka Bahut Bahut Shukar-Guzaar Hoon...


Chehra To Hai Khoob,  Zulfein Bhi Kamaal Ke(ki)..!!!!!
Chand Ko Rakh Diya Ho Kisi Ne Aasman Se Nikaal Ke

Ab Hum To Aap Par Apna Dil Haar Baithe Hain Huzoor..!!!!!!
Rakhna Iss Gareeb Ke Dil Ko Zarra Sambhaal Ke

Aapki Tasveer Ko Main Aaj Peharo icon_scratch Dekhta Rahaa..!!!!!
Naa Jane Kitne Khwab,Maine Rakhe Hai Dil meN Paal Ke

Khabar Hai Humein , Ke Aapka Dil Bhee Kuch Kehta Hai.!!!
Par Kehte Ho Aap Har Baat Ko Bade Hi  Dekh-Baal Ke

Meri Har Ghazal MeN Aajkal Itni Mithaas Kyon Hai Bhala??
Log Yuhi kehte Hain "Khwahish" Ke Jumle Hain Be-Misaal Ke


               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

gud Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2012, 12:32:43 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2012, 02:59:57 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2012, 05:48:32 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 24, 2012, 03:35:49 PM
Teri Tasveer Ko Seene Se Laga Baithe Hai
Aaj Hum Khud Ko Bhoola Baithe Hai...!!!!


Yeh kalaam Vakaai Ek Tasveer Par Likhi gayi Hai..
Isliye Main Uss Tasveer Ka Bahut Bahut Shukar-Guzaar Hoon...


Chehra To Hai Khoob,  Zulfein Bhi Kamaal Ke..!!!!!
Chand Ko Rakh Diya Ho Kisi Ne Aasman Se Nikaal Ke

Ab Hum To Aap Par Apna Dil Haar Baithe Hai Huzoor..!!!!!!
Rakhna Iss Gareeb Ke Dil Ko Zarra Sambhaal Ke

Aapki Tasveer Ko Main Aaj Peharo Dekhta Rahaa..!!!!!
Naa Jane Kitne Khwab,Maine Rakhe Hai Dil meN Paal Ke

Khabar Hai Humein , Ke Aapka Dil Bhee Kuch Kehta Hai.!!!
Par Kehte Ho Aap Har Baat Ko Bade Hi  Dekh-Baal Ke

Meri Har Ghazal MeN Aajkal Itni Mithaas Kyon Hai Bhala??
Log Yuhi kehte Hai "Khwahish" Ke Jumle Hai Be-Misaal Ke


               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2012, 08:12:57 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 24, 2012, 03:46:08 PM
Bahut   pyari  peshkash  hai... Pyar  ki  zubaan  mein
bola  gaya   har lafz  meethha  hota  hai .  Aur  phir
zubaan-e-Khwaish  to  hai  hi  pyar  bhari . Ghazlein
kyun  na  mithhi  hon . Bahut  khoob , khwaish ji, aur
bahut  bahut mubarakbaad  aur  duaaein . Hasan.


Saheb Aapne Itni Taareef kardi Jiske Main Bilkul Bhi Laayak nahi..

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Saheb..!!! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2012, 08:17:30 AM »
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Uffffffff aapke likhne ki jo adaaye hai Khwaish ji mujhe toh zinda maar gaya.superb. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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