**<>**Meri jaan meri dost**<>**

by kritika sharma on November 17, 2010, 02:59:36 PM
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कितनी अधूरी और अकेली है मेरी जिंदगी
तुम दोनों के साथ कितनी पूरी है मेरी जिंदगी
मेरी हर ख़ुशी तुम्हारी लिए और तुम्हारे साथ है
तुम्हारे हर गम पे सिर्फ मेरा हक़ है ना की तुम्हारा
हर गम सह सकती हूँ इस दुनिया का ..
बस तुम्हारी आँखों का एक आँसूं भी बर्दास्त नहीं कर सकूँगी मैं
तुम दोनों ही तो हो जो मेरी रूह मैं और नस नस मैं समायी हो
लोग कहते है कि उन्होंने परियों को नहीं देखा ...........
पर मैंने तो देखा दो परियों को देखा है ........
ये मेरी खुश नसीबी है कि वो दो परियाँ मेरी दोस्त है
वो दोनों मेरी सब कुछ है मेरी दोस्त और मेरी प्यारी बेटियाँ
**रीतू और चिंकी** .....
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2010, 05:18:34 PM »
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kritika...aapne kya likha pta nhi mere mobile sirf 00000000 ka symbol hi aya or me padh hi nhi saka kuch:(
aisa ku hua i donno..
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aaine ke piche ik chehra sujana tha,
jisko sirf mujhe lubhana tha..
mai kya karta samjh nahi paya,
bahut socha to jaana wo koi khab purana tha...
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2010, 04:12:05 AM »
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..i think aapke mobile me hindi support nahi karti isliye aapko ye show nahi hui ..
nd thank for nice shayari  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2010, 06:35:44 AM »
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bahut achha likha he kritika ji~
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2010, 07:18:46 AM »
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hmm shayd Hindi support nhi krta mera mobile:(
ek achhi peshkash padhne se banchit rah gaya mai..
nd thanx...Anamika ji
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2010, 07:40:03 AM »
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shukriya abhi ji ..
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2010, 08:17:55 AM »
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Bahut khoob kritika ji bahut pyar bhara hai apki kavita mein apki dosto k liye bahut khushnaseeb log hote hai jinhe sache dost milte hai,khuda aap teeno ki sodti ko har buri nazar se bachaye..god bless u..take care...Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2010, 08:30:42 AM »
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Aapne Apni Betiyon Ko Apna Sabse Acha Dost Bana Liya..

Duniya mein Isse Ache Dost kahin Mil bhi nahi Sakte..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas..

Bahut bahut Khoob Kritika Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: November 18, 2010, 08:34:41 AM »
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Bahut he mamta se out-prout hain Kritika ji aapke bhaav.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
Betiyen sach mai hoti he hain pyaar-dulaar k laayak.....Bahut khush-naseeb hain aap jo aapko do-do pariyon ka mila saath hai......

os ki bundo ki tarah hoti hai betiya,
maa baap ki dulari hoti hai betiya,
jaan se pyari hoti hai betiya,
maa baap k dard me hmdard hoti hai betia,
roshan karega beta to bs ek hi kul ko
2 2 kul ki laaj hoti hai betiya,
heera hai agar beta to sacha moti hai betiya
kanto ki raha pr chalti h betiya,
auro ki raha me ful banti hai betiya,
kahne ko parayi amanat hai betiya,
par beto se bhi apni hoti hai betiya,
....................not mine.................
Quote from: kritika sharma on November 17, 2010, 02:59:36 PM
कितनी अधूरी और अकेली है मेरी जिंदगी
तुम दोनों के साथ कितनी पूरी है मेरी जिंदगी
मेरी हर ख़ुशी तुम्हारी लिए और तुम्हारे साथ है
तुम्हारे हर गम पे सिर्फ मेरा हक़ है ना की तुम्हारा
हर गम सह सकती हूँ इस दुनिया का ..
बस तुम्हारी आँखों का एक आँसूं भी बर्दास्त नहीं कर सकूँगी मैं
तुम दोनों ही तो हो जो मेरी रूह मैं और नस नस मैं समायी हो
लोग कहते है कि उन्होंने परियों को नहीं देखा ...........
पर मैंने तो देखा दो परियों को देखा है ........
ये मेरी खुश नसीबी है कि वो दो परियाँ मेरी दोस्त है
वो दोनों मेरी सब कुछ है मेरी दोस्त और मेरी प्यारी बेटियाँ
**रीतू और चिंकी** .....
  love4 love4
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«Reply #9 on: November 18, 2010, 08:56:28 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley बहूत ही सुंदर भावनाएँ हैं आपकी...ईश्वर आपकी दोनो परियों को सलामत रखे  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: November 18, 2010, 08:58:04 AM »
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thanks u brokenbyluv ji shukriya ......!!

khwaish ji and anaamika ji..SHUKRIYA Applause
 PAR ritu chinki is my best friend ...par halat kuch aese aaye humari life me ki mujhe unhe apni betiyan banana padha ..Or wo meri jindgi ka sabse sahi faisla tha...!!

MERI ZINDGI KA SAHARA WO HAI
MERI ANDERI DUNIYA KA UJALA WO HAI

WO HAI MERI DOST MERI JAAN **RITU CHINKI**
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«Reply #11 on: November 18, 2010, 08:59:49 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 18, 2010, 08:56:28 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley बहूत ही सुंदर भावनाएँ हैं आपकी...ईश्वर आपकी दोनो परियों को सलामत रखे  Usual Smile

shukriya Bekarar ji !!
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«Reply #12 on: November 18, 2010, 09:23:36 AM »
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Quote from: kritika sharma on November 18, 2010, 08:58:04 AM
thanks u brokenbyluv ji shukriya ......!!

khwaish ji and anaamika ji..SHUKRIYA Applause
 PAR ritu chinki is my best friend ...par halat kuch aese aaye humari life me ki mujhe unhe apni betiyan banana padha ..Or wo meri jindgi ka sabse sahi faisla tha...!!

MERI ZINDGI KA SAHARA WO HAI
MERI ANDERI DUNIYA KA UJALA WO HAI

WO HAI MERI DOST MERI JAAN **RITU CHINKI**


Tou kya hua kritika ji waise tou dosti se bada aur koi rishta nhi hai iss jahan mein per agar sahi mayino mein dosto se hi rishte jud jaye tou sone per suhaga hota hai..khush rahiye aap,ritu ji aur chinki ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 18, 2010, 10:31:41 AM »
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Kaash muje bhi aap apni ek dost bana leti.....Kritika-ji... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Mast likha hai ji......dil ko chhu gaya.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Kya ritu chinki ko aapne adopt kiya hai ?
...par halat kuch aese aaye humari life me ki mujhe unhe apni betiyan banana padha ..Or wo meri jindgi ka sabse sahi faisla tha...!!

Kuchh aur roshni daliye na.....
Quote from: kritika sharma on November 17, 2010, 02:59:36 PM
कितनी अधूरी और अकेली है मेरी जिंदगी
तुम दोनों के साथ कितनी पूरी है मेरी जिंदगी
मेरी हर ख़ुशी तुम्हारी लिए और तुम्हारे साथ है
तुम्हारे हर गम पे सिर्फ मेरा हक़ है ना की तुम्हारा
हर गम सह सकती हूँ इस दुनिया का ..
बस तुम्हारी आँखों का एक आँसूं भी बर्दास्त नहीं कर सकूँगी मैं
तुम दोनों ही तो हो जो मेरी रूह मैं और नस नस मैं समायी हो
लोग कहते है कि उन्होंने परियों को नहीं देखा ...........
पर मैंने तो देखा दो परियों को देखा है ........
ये मेरी खुश नसीबी है कि वो दो परियाँ मेरी दोस्त है
वो दोनों मेरी सब कुछ है मेरी दोस्त और मेरी प्यारी बेटियाँ
**रीतू और चिंकी** .....
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«Reply #14 on: November 18, 2010, 10:35:38 AM »
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Why god created daughters?

When god created daughters,
He took very special care to find
The precious treasures that could make
Them sweet and fair

He fashioned them from sugar
And a little bit of spice.............
He gave them a sunny laughter
And everything thats nice!!

God smiled when he made daughters
He was glad
As..........he had created love and happiness
For every mum and dad

................not mine.............
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