-----/// Meri mohabbat /// ----- Hriday

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dil mera paththar ka nahi kaanch ka hai meri jaanaa,
shayad tumne mere is dil ko thik se nahi pehchaanaa,

dekh ke jiski tasveer mohabbat kar baithe tum sanam,
shayad us chehre to tumne ab tak thik se nahi jaanaa,

kuch asar hai tumhaari nashili aawaaz me kya bataaun,
sunne ko tumhaari aawaaz banaataa hoon rozz bahaanaa,

jabse dekha hai tumhaaraa chehra tasveer mein maine,
main ban gayaa hoon tumhaari surat ka koi deewaanaa,

milo kabhi mujhse to jee bhar ke pyaar karlu tumhe,
mushkil hoga tab tumhaaraa mujhse duur jaa paanaa,

tamanna hai mere dil mein bhi ki milun tumse ek baar,
aur milke chaahunga tumhe sadaa ke liye apna banaanaa,

yun to main kehta nahi kisi se ki pyaar tumse hai kitna,
poochhe koi to kahun, do jism ka ek jaan ho jaise ban jaanaa...

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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2012, 11:29:49 AM »
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waah Hriday ji bahut khoob dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2012, 11:33:28 AM »
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very nice sir one rau
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2012, 11:43:27 AM »
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Beautifull
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2012, 12:30:24 PM »
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Romantic! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aap bohat kam 4 liners sher post karte hai...Us ka bhi apna kuch alag maza hai....
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2012, 12:50:04 PM »
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Bahut acche
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2012, 04:22:34 PM »
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baht pyari kalaam Hriday ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2012, 04:44:17 PM »
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hriday ji aapki har peshksh mein ek alag hi kashish hoti hai romance ho ya dard.... aapke hriday se hi nikalta hai...........is rachna ke liye dhero daad aur bahut bahut mubarakbad......... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2012, 06:06:53 PM »
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dil mera paththar ka nahi kaanch ka hai meri jaanaa,
shayad tumne mere is dil ko thik se nahi pehchaanaa,

dekh ke jiski tasveer mohabbat kar baithe tum sanam,
shayad us chehre to tumne ab tak thik se nahi jaanaa,

kuch asar hai tumhaari nashili aawaaz me kya bataaun,
sunne ko tumhaari aawaaz banaataa hoon rozz bahaanaa,

jabse dekha hai tumhaaraa chehra tasveer mein maine,
main ban gayaa hoon tumhaari surat ka koi deewaanaa,

milo kabhi mujhse to jee bhar ke pyaar karlu tumhe,
mushkil hoga tab tumhaaraa mujhse duur jaa paanaa,

tamanna hai mere dil mein bhi ki milun tumse ek baar,
aur milke chaahunga tumhe sadaa ke liye apna banaanaa,

yun to main kehta nahi kisi se ki pyaar tumse hai kitna,
poochhe koi to kahun, do jism ka ek jaan ho jaise ban jaanaa...

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gud one
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2012, 06:28:36 PM »
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majbur kar dete ho likhne pe... ab  kya karun de diya reply... mastam mast likha haoi kp..... zabardasttttttttt 
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ye teri baatein bhi ajeeb hai jaana
roz karte ho koi na koi naya bahaana..

ladte ho jhagadte ho satate ho mujhe
fir dhundh lete ho manane ka naya bahanaa..

bas karo ye aadat tumhari achchi nahin
kabhi pad jayega tumhe mujhse maar khana..

abke jo kiya tumne fir koi naya bahana
main chali jaungi tumse durr o jaane jaana

dhundhte rehna fir tum har gali galiA
pukaarte rehna ke iss baar chali aao jaana... tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2012, 08:19:38 PM »
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Kasak ji...yaa "Kasak- Mere dil ki"...Aap hi kaho aise kaise itna duur duur rahoge aap... aanaa hi padegaa.... aapke saath ke bina kuch adhura adhuraa saa lagta hai... aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi aur aapne itna pyaaraa saa jawab diyaa iske liye thanks to nahi bolne waalaa main... chalo aapke is masstt zabardastt waale kavita ka jawaab apne andaaz me de deta hoon....!!!

aaye ho is baar paas to na duur jaanaa tum,
jaake mujhse duur mujhe na yun sataanaa tum,

waadaa karta hoon koi bahaanaa naa banaaunga,
judaa hoke mujhse kabhi mujhe na rulaanaa tum,

na ladunga, na jhagdunga, na sataaunga tumhe,
aaye ho paas to saath mere ab reh jaanaa tum,

reh chuka bahut tanha akele, ab na reh paaunga,
is paagal ka ab zindagi bhar saath nibhaanaa tum...

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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2012, 08:44:13 PM »
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Khumar bhari iss kalam kay liye,
dhero daad Kapil dost..
Wakei bahaut pyaar bhari kalam hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2012, 03:30:30 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2012, 10:26:47 AM »
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Bahut Badhiya Peshkash Hriday jee.
Daad Aur Rau Haazir hai

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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2012, 05:51:02 PM »
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Muhabbat bhari kalaam likhne me koi aapka saanee nahee.
bahut khoob hriday jee..
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