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Meri Payal
Meri Payal ki jhankaar
Rahi hai tujhe pukaar
Aaa bhi ja ‘O’mere pyarr
Naa kara ab aur intezaar
Meri payal tujhse kuchh bole
Dil ke raaz wo aaj hai khole
Mera tan-man sab hai dole
Jiya mora khaye hitchkole
Payal bole chham chham 2
Jhanjhria bole runjhun 2
Kangna bole khan-khana-khan
Purva bole san-sana-san san
Koi geet gaaye gun-gun 2
Main jhoomu sun-sun 2
Meri payal tujhe pukaare
Aaa bhi ja ‘O’ pyarr mere
-koyal-
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O wow .. such a Innocent Poetry written by you and its lovely... I like the effort made by you... Keep writing.... Bahoot Khoob!... Main bhi likhungi ... thode break ke baad aaj bahoot busy hun...  |
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2010, 10:35:30 AM » |
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Wah wah Koyal ji aapki run jhun kavita ne kamaal kar diya. Bahut shandaar creation hai aapki. Payal ke madhyam se bahut kuchh kehne ki koshish ki hai. Nice and marvelous poetry.
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2010, 12:18:10 PM » |
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KYA BAAT HAI KOYAL JI.....
TERI PAYAL KI JHANKAR BATA DETI HAI TERA HAAL
JO TU BATANE ME SHARMATI HAI MERE YAAR
CHAM CHAM KARTI JAB TU CHALTI HAI
TERI PAYAL TERE DIL KE HAR RAAZ UGALTI HAI
MACHALTE HAI JISKE LIYE TERE ARMAAN
TERI PAYAL CHAM CHAMATI ME LETI HAI USKA NAAM
TERI PAYAL KI DUN SUNKAR JO TERE PEECHE PEECHE AATA HAI
WO TERA HI NAHI--"TERI PAYAL" KA BHI DEWAANA HAI....
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2010, 01:43:05 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Koyal JI Bahut Hi Sunder Creation hai Aapka
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2010, 01:55:56 PM » |
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Divya-di aabhaar maanti hu main aapka...... Poem ki tariff v hosla-afzahi karne k liye.....  O wow .. such a Innocent Poetry written by you and its lovely... I like the effort made by you... Keep writing.... Bahoot Khoob!... Main bhi likhungi ... thode break ke baad aaj bahoot busy hun... |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 01:57:15 PM » |
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Riyaz-bhai aapko pasand aayee meri mehnat safal hui... Wah wah Koyal ji aapki run jhun kavita ne kamaal kar diya. Bahut shandaar creation hai aapki. Payal ke madhyam se bahut kuchh kehne ki koshish ki hai. Nice and marvelous poetry.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2010, 01:58:25 PM » |
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Aakaash-ji aapka tehe dil se shukriya.... |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2010, 02:00:22 PM » |
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Cara-ji aap k kya kehne haazir jawaab ho.... KYA BAAT HAI KOYAL JI.....
TERI PAYAL KI JHANKAR BATA DETI HAI TERA HAAL
JO TU BATANE ME SHARMATI HAI MERE YAAR
CHAM CHAM KARTI JAB TU CHALTI HAI
TERI PAYAL TERE DIL KE HAR RAAZ UGALTI HAI
MACHALTE HAI JISKE LIYE TERE ARMAAN
TERI PAYAL CHAM CHAMATI ME LETI HAI USKA NAAM
TERI PAYAL KI DUN SUNKAR JO TERE PEECHE PEECHE AATA HAI
WO TERA HI NAHI--"TERI PAYAL" KA BHI DEWAANA HAI....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2010, 02:01:22 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Rishi-bhai.... Bahut Khub Koyal JI Bahut Hi Sunder Creation hai Aapka
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2010, 05:01:13 AM » |
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Wah Koyal ji.mindblowing creation.bahut bahut khoob.excellent.hats off
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2010, 10:34:11 AM » |
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Thanks Madhu-di..... Wah Koyal ji.mindblowing creation.bahut bahut khoob.excellent.hats off
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