{{Meri Tamanna}}........... {Angel}

by angel4u on May 07, 2009, 02:55:41 AM
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Again one of my lengthy poem. So posting in two parts.

Khuda Kare Ke Meri Bas Yehi Ek Aakhri Tamanna Puri Ho Jaye,
Zindagi Ki Kashti Hai Talatum Mein, Teri Chahat Ka Kinara Mil Jaye,

Chaand Utar Aata Hai Zameen Ko Chumne Chandni Bankar,
Tumhara Pyaar Bhi Meri Rooh Mein Bas Yunhi Utar Jaye,

Gam Ki Kaali Raat Kitni Hi Gehri Mere Ird Gird Aye Sanam,
Ladkhadaye Jo Qadam Tareeqiyon Mein, Tumhara Saaya Hamein Sambhaal Jaye,

Bikhra Hui Kali Thi Main Hawa Ke Jhonke Se Bhi Chot Lagti Thi,
Muskurane Lage Hai Har Zakhm Mere, Marham Banke Jab Se Tum Aaye,

Sadayein Laut Aati Thi Meri Is Patharke Sheher Pathar Se Takrake,
Ab Lagta Hai Jaise Har Saans Meri Koi Khobsurat Nagma Khoobsurat Gaaye,

Ab Koi Aur Kyon Dekhe Tumhe, Koi Aur Kyon Kare Baat Tumse,
Yehi Tamanna Hai Ke Tumhe Har Ghadi Har Pal Bas Hum Nazar Aaye,

Kabhi To Yun Paas Aao Sanam Dil Pe Qaaboo Kho Baithe,
Saanson Ki Raftaar Mein Koi Halchal Si Mach Jaaye,

Sune Ek Dusre Ki Dhadkanein Dhadkano Se Bas Ab,
Itni Badh Jaye Nazdikiyan Ke Saaya Bhi Na Darmiyaan Aaye,


Contd....
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 02:57:01 AM »
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Part 2....

Ye Baarish Ki Boondein Jo Chhue Mere Gaalon Ko,
Aisa Lage Koi Bheegi Si Chhuwan Tumhari Hamein Bhigo Jaaye,

Kuch Ehsaas-O-Jazbaat Lete Hai Angdaiyan Kayi Sadiyon Se,
Na Jaane Kyon In Ehsaason Ko Hum Alfaaz Na De Paaye,

Khol Diya Hai Humne Palkon Ka Darwaza, Aankhon Mein Dekho Jaanam,
In Mein Na Jaane Kitne Khwaabon Ke Mehmaan Basne Aaye,

Tumhare Aqs Ko Hum Apni Aagosh Mein Sametna Chahe,
Samne Jo Tumhe Paye To Tumse Nazrein Bhi Churayein, Sharmaye,

Dekhe Tumhe Jaise Kayi Zamane Guzar Gaye, Ab To Aa Jao,
Bechain Si, Madhosh Si In Aarzuon Ko Kuch To Qarar Aa Jaye,

Tum Zindagi Mein Aa Gaye To Badgumaan Phira Karenge Hum Bhi,
Bano Jo Tum Humsafar Mere Khoye Hue Raston Ko Manzil Mil Jaye,

Thak Ke Choor Ho Gayi Hun, Mar Mar Ke Jee Li Zindagi Bahut,
Mera Wajood Ab Tumhare Pyaar Ki Chhanv Mein Sustana Chahe,

Tumse Juda Hone Ke Khayal Se Hi Kaanp Jaati Hai Har Saans Meri,
Ab Saanson Ke Darmiyan Bhi Koi Fasla Na Rahe, Aao Aaj Ek Dusre Mein Kuch Yun Sama Jaye...
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 03:00:45 AM »
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bahut khoob angel ji.
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 03:02:36 AM »
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Thanks Madhuwesh. For sparing the time and reading it Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 03:07:15 AM »
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Lengthy kahan yaar bahut accha likhti hai aap...
Part 1 & 2... excellant  Applause Applause Daad hazir hai angel dear... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 03:35:27 AM »
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Yet another beautiful composition
Very Good Angel, very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 05:13:28 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Angel di... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2009, 06:16:59 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Itni Khoobsurat Poetry Ke kya Kahoon..Bahut Bhaut ache..aap Poetry ki lenght ko lekar pareshaan naa hoya karo..poetry ki izzat karne wala,samajhna wala yeh nahi kahega ki poetry lambi thi..woh to yehi kahega ke Poetry bahut Khoobsurat thi..
Beautiful One...
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2009, 06:44:46 AM »
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Aaye Haye..!! Kya Baat hai Angel.. Bahut hi Pyaare Ehasaas Likhe Hain aapne..!! Lajawab-Behtreen-Khubsoorat...... Shayad yeh Lafz Kam Padenge aapki is Poem ki tareef Me.. Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2009, 09:30:56 AM »
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WOW..Gud One.....
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2009, 03:13:33 PM »
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Beautiful ...Its so beautiful  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Angel
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2009, 04:19:41 PM »
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Lengthy kahan yaar bahut accha likhti hai aap...
Part 1 & 2... excellant  Applause Applause Daad hazir hai angel dear... Usual Smile


Oh... aapki pyaari pyaari taarif ka bahut bahut shukriya mohtarma Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2009, 04:20:04 PM »
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Yet another beautiful composition
Very Good Angel, very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI

THank you so much Sarvesh Ji... tongue3)
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2009, 04:20:26 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Angel di... Applause

Shukriya Rahim
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2009, 04:21:47 PM »
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Aaye Haye..!! Kya Baat hai Angel.. Bahut hi Pyaare Ehasaas Likhe Hain aapne..!! Lajawab-Behtreen-Khubsoorat...... Shayad yeh Lafz Kam Padenge aapki is Poem ki tareef Me.. Bahut khooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Aapke in khoobsurat alfaazon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. aapne itna keh diya bas hamare liye bahut hai Usual Smile
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