{{Meri Tamanna}}........... {Angel}

by angel4u on May 07, 2009, 02:55:41 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 07, 2009, 04:23:21 PM »
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Quote from: badnaam_shayar on May 07, 2009, 09:30:56 AM
WOW..Gud One.....

Hey so nice to see you after such a long time on YOINDIA. kahan kho gaye the??   sad11 sad11
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«Reply #16 on: May 07, 2009, 04:24:30 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 07, 2009, 06:16:59 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Itni Khoobsurat Poetry Ke kya Kahoon..Bahut Bhaut ache..aap Poetry ki lenght ko lekar pareshaan naa hoya karo..poetry ki izzat karne wala,samajhna wala yeh nahi kahega ki poetry lambi thi..woh to yehi kahega ke Poetry bahut Khoobsurat thi..
Beautiful One...

Thank you so much Khwaish, your appreciation is always a source of inspiration for me, but sometimes you really need time to read such poem. and i m glad that i still have friends here who spare time for me and my works Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: May 07, 2009, 04:26:36 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 07, 2009, 03:13:33 PM
Beautiful ...Its so beautiful  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Angel

Thank you sooo much talat for so much patient reader Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 08, 2009, 02:41:41 AM »
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Ek tamanna aisi thi ke tujh mein kho ke tujh se hi ho jaayein,
tu jo chahe hum apni zindagi tere naam fanaa kar jaayein,
chal chalein khwahishon ki ek aisi gali mein mere humdam,
jahan teri aagosh ka aashiyaana ho aur hum apna ghar basayein...
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«Reply #19 on: May 08, 2009, 02:50:59 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 08, 2009, 02:41:41 AM

Ek tamanna aisi thi ke tujh mein kho ke tujh se hi ho jaayein,
tu jo chahe hum apni zindagi tere naam fanaa kar jaayein,
chal chalein khwahishon ki ek aisi gali mein mere humdam,
jahan teri aagosh ka aashiyaana ho aur hum apna ghar basayein...


Lovely lines dear Angel... (Kiske liye hai yeh Tamanna?  tongue3)
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«Reply #20 on: May 08, 2009, 02:58:34 AM »
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Thi... ab nahi hia...
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«Reply #21 on: May 08, 2009, 03:03:33 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 08, 2009, 02:58:34 AM
Thi... ab nahi hia...


Aisa nahi kehte.. Teri sari tamanna poori ho yehi dua hai meri.
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«Reply #22 on: May 08, 2009, 03:04:43 AM »
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tujhe bhi pata hia nahi hogi, kya pata iske baad post kar bhi paun ke nahi yoindia pe...

chal take care...
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«Reply #23 on: May 08, 2009, 03:07:18 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 08, 2009, 03:04:43 AM
tujhe bhi pata hia nahi hogi, kya pata iske baad post kar bhi paun ke nahi yoindia pe...

chal take care...

Tujhe bahut jaldbazi hai na aisa waisa karne ka  Is it SO!


Kabhi Shaam Kabhi Aanchal Ka Kinara Dena,
Mein Agar Doob Ke Ubhroon To Sahara Dena,

Teri Ulfat Mein Mukammal Hoon Har Pehlu Se,
Mujhe Dard Bhi Dena To Saara Dena,

Main Tujhe Ghum Ke Samandar Mein Kinara Doonga,
Tu Mujhe Hijr Ke Tufaan Mein Sitara Dena,

Main Teri Yaad Ke Sehra Mein Kahi Rehti Hoon,
Kabhi Aana To Halka Sa Ishaara Dena,

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«Reply #24 on: May 08, 2009, 03:08:46 AM »
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Jab pata ho kisiko kuch fark nahi padnewala hia to kya karein...
chal koi nahi. . . . .

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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2009, 03:40:46 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Huzena sis.... khuda kare apki tamanna zarur poori ho... or apko saari khushiya mile Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: May 08, 2009, 03:42:13 AM »
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Roja sis ne kaafi avhi sharing ki Thumbs UP
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«Reply #27 on: May 08, 2009, 02:04:09 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 08, 2009, 03:08:46 AM
Jab pata ho kisiko kuch fark nahi padnewala hia to kya karein...
chal koi nahi. . . . .


Padnewale hai ya nahi ye sab kyu tu sochti hai... Bas tu likhna... hum hai aur dekh kitne log hai padne k liye. Koyi khaas ka intezar hai kya? Be cool.... plz
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«Reply #28 on: May 09, 2009, 12:14:27 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 07, 2009, 02:55:41 AM
Again one of my lengthy poem. So posting in two parts.

Khuda Kare Ke Meri Bas Yehi Ek Aakhri Tamanna Puri Ho Jaye,
Zindagi Ki Kashti Hai Talatum Mein, Teri Chahat Ka Kinara Mil Jaye,

Chaand Utar Aata Hai Zameen Ko Chumne Chandni Bankar,
Tumhara Pyaar Bhi Meri Rooh Mein Bas Yunhi Utar Jaye,

Gam Ki Kaali Raat Kitni Hi Gehri Mere Ird Gird Aye Sanam,
Ladkhadaye Jo Qadam Tareeqiyon Mein, Tumhara Saaya Hamein Sambhaal Jaye,

Bikhra Hui Kali Thi Main Hawa Ke Jhonke Se Bhi Chot Lagti Thi,
Muskurane Lage Hai Har Zakhm Mere, Marham Banke Jab Se Tum Aaye,

Sadayein Laut Aati Thi Meri Is Patharke Sheher Pathar Se Takrake,
Ab Lagta Hai Jaise Har Saans Meri Koi Khobsurat Nagma Khoobsurat Gaaye,

Ab Koi Aur Kyon Dekhe Tumhe, Koi Aur Kyon Kare Baat Tumse,
Yehi Tamanna Hai Ke Tumhe Har Ghadi Har Pal Bas Hum Nazar Aaye,

Kabhi To Yun Paas Aao Sanam Dil Pe Qaaboo Kho Baithe,
Saanson Ki Raftaar Mein Koi Halchal Si Mach Jaaye,

Sune Ek Dusre Ki Dhadkanein Dhadkano Se Bas Ab,
Itni Badh Jaye Nazdikiyan Ke Saaya Bhi Na Darmiyaan Aaye,


Contd....

very nice angel ji bhut hi khoob likha hai.................
aapki is ghazal par ek shair yaad aa rha hai aapki taraf hi nazr kiye daita hun jo ki is ghazal ki tarjumaani karega...mashaallah bhut hi ahca likha hai aapne.........keep it up

khuda kre ke mohabbat mai wo maqaam aaye
kisi kaam lu.n lab pe tumhara naam aaye
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«Reply #29 on: May 09, 2009, 04:42:46 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 08, 2009, 04:20:19 AM
Waah kya kahen behad acha likha hai aapne Angel ji..jaise bagh se subah ke phool chun lie gaye hon..ek yaadgar nazm likhi hai aapne

Tarif ke liye shukriya @kaash ji..
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