MERI VEHSHAT SAMBHAL JAYE AGAR TUM MILNE AAJAO.........................AARISH

by Aarish on December 06, 2012, 06:33:27 AM
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DostoN Javed Akhtar saheB ki ek ghazal hai.

 
Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Ye mausam hi badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

is shair ke pehle misre ko lekar gireh lagane ki koshish ki hai

halaNki us mayar ki ghazal nahi ho payee.lekin ye misra hi

itna khoobsurat laga ki bina kuch likhe raha nahi gaya.

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Sitare mand haiN saare padi hai chandni maddham,

Nazara ye badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Teri furqat meN likhne ka hunar hi bhool baitha huN,

Mukammal ho ghazal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


ZamiN se aasmaN tak bas tujhe hi dhoNdta huN maiN,

Meri vehshat sambhal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Mujhe milne wo jab aaye khudaya khair karlena,

kahiN dam na nikal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Ruki haiN teri aamad pe jo ye saNse haiN "Aarish" ki

Meri Ye mauT tal Jaye age tum Milne aajao,


Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,





                "Aarish"
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2012, 06:43:43 AM »
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wah, thanx for sharing
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2012, 06:46:37 AM »
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DostoN Javed Akhtar saheB ki ek ghazal hai.

 
Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Ye mausam hi badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

is shair ke pehle misre ko lekar gireh lagane ki koshish ki hai

halaNki us mayar ki ghazal nahi ho payee.lekin ye misra hi

itna khoobsurat laga ki bina kuch likhe raha nahi gaya.

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Sitare mand haiN saare padi hai chandni maddham,

Nazara ye badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Teri furqat meN likhne ka hunar hi bhool baitha huN,

Mukammal ho ghazal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


ZamiN se aasmaN tak bas tujhe hi dhoNdta huN maiN,

Meri vehshat sambhal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Mujhe milne wo jab aaye khudaya khair karlena,

kahiN dam na nikal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Ruki haiN teri aamad pe jo ye saNse haiN "Aarish" ki

Meri Ye mauT tal Jaye age tum Milne aajao,


Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,





                "Aarish"

excellent ghazal,sir
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2012, 06:54:20 AM »
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Bahut khoob , Aarish .  Bahut  achhi  ghazal  kahi  hai . Bahut rawaani  hai  hazal  mein . Javed  Akhtar  saheb ke misre ko bhi khoob nibhaya hai . Abhi  parson 4 Dec . ko Hydeabad mein Time Festival mein Javed sb aur Shabana ji ka act kiya hua eik  play ' Kaifi aur Main' bhi dekhne ko mila aur Kaifi sb ki khubsurat nazmein bhi sunne ko mileen.aapki is ghazal ne wo yaad phir taaza kardi.
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2012, 07:01:16 AM »
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Shukriya aarish ji, aapki vo line theek se nahi padhi, vastav mein gazal badhiya banee hai, dhero dad
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2012, 07:08:42 AM »
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DostoN Javed Akhtar saheB ki ek ghazal hai.

 
Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Ye mausam hi badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

is shair ke pehle misre ko lekar gireh lagane ki koshish ki hai

halaNki us mayar ki ghazal nahi ho payee.lekin ye misra hi

itna khoobsurat laga ki bina kuch likhe raha nahi gaya.

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

 Applause Applause Applause


Sitare mand haiN saare padi hai chandni maddham,

Nazara ye badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Teri furqat meN likhne ka hunar hi bhool baitha huN,

Mukammal ho ghazal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Wah Wah!!!  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


ZamiN se aasmaN tak bas tujhe hi dhoNdta huN maiN,

Meri vehshat sambhal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Wah!


Mujhe milne wo jab aaye khudaya khair karlena,

kahiN dam na nikal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Ruki haiN teri aamad pe jo ye saNse haiN "Aarish" ki

Meri Ye mauT tal Jaye age tum Milne aajao,

Bohat Khub!!  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



                "Aarish"


Bohat Bohat hi Khub!!!! Ek Behtareen Ghazal, Baar baar padne ko dil chahta hai...Ek se bad kar ek ashaar hai..!! Dhero Dad!!!

 love9 love9 love9 love9 love9 This Ghazal is full of love!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2012, 07:19:37 AM »
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wah, thanx for sharing
thanks prashad jee , but this is not a sharing, thankyou
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2012, 07:20:23 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut pyaari gazhal likhi hai aapne tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi bahut khoob dheron daad qubool kare
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Aarish
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2012, 07:22:43 AM »
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excellent ghazal,sir

bohut shukriya marhoom jee  , bohut nawazish, and plz plzdont call me sir m ur brother
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2012, 07:38:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob , Aarish .  Bahut  achhi  ghazal  kahi  hai . Bahut rawaani  hai  hazal  mein . Javed  Akhtar  saheb ke misre ko bhi khoob nibhaya hai . Abhi  parson 4 Dec . ko Hydeabad mein Time Festival mein Javed sb aur Shabana ji ka act kiya hua eik  play ' Kaifi aur Main' bhi dekhne ko mila aur Kaifi sb ki khubsurat nazmein bhi sunne ko mileen.aapki is ghazal ne wo yaad phir taaza kardi.

bohut shukriya sir aapke comments hamesha mere liye bais E masarrat aur sabaq amez hote haIN jab aap tareef karte haiN to lagta hai waqai kuch achcha likha gaya hai.. bohut bohut shukriya ,....
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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2012, 07:43:56 AM »
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Bohat Bohat hi Khub!!!! Ek Behtareen Ghazal, Baar baar padne ko dil chahta hai...Ek se bad kar ek ashaar hai..!! Dhero Dad!!!

 love9 love9 love9 love9 love9 This Ghazal is full of love!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohut bohut shukriya shireen jee , bohut khushi hui k aapko ghazal pasand aayi , samajh lijiye ki mehnat wasool ho gai... shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2012, 07:44:16 AM »
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Aarish bhaai dil khush kar diya aapne.
badi hi khoobsurti se nibhaaya hai aapne.
maza aa gaya..
poore 28 marks.
bas aise hi likhte rahiye
DAAD deta huN aapko.
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«Reply #12 on: December 06, 2012, 07:53:28 AM »
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DostoN Javed Akhtar saheB ki ek ghazal hai.

 
Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Ye mausam hi badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

is shair ke pehle misre ko lekar gireh lagane ki koshish ki hai

halaNki us mayar ki ghazal nahi ho payee.lekin ye misra hi

itna khoobsurat laga ki bina kuch likhe raha nahi gaya.

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Sitare mand haiN saare padi hai chandni maddham,

Nazara ye badal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Teri furqat meN likhne ka hunar hi bhool baitha huN,

Mukammal ho ghazal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


ZamiN se aasmaN tak bas tujhe hi dhoNdta huN maiN,

Meri vehshat sambhal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Mujhe milne wo jab aaye khudaya khair karlena,

kahiN dam na nikal jaye agar tum milne aajao,


Ruki haiN teri aamad pe jo ye saNse haiN "Aarish" ki

Meri Ye mauT tal Jaye age tum Milne aajao,


Dil E nadaN behal jaye agar tum milne aajao,

Tamanna phir machal jaye agar tum milne aajao,





                "Aarish"
speechless... its excellent.. keep it up ..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2012, 08:09:27 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut pyaari gazhal likhi hai aapne tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi bahut khoob dheron daad qubool kare

shukriya aqsh jee bohut nawazish , shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2012, 08:19:35 AM »
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Aarish bhaai dil khush kar diya aapne.
badi hi khoobsurti se nibhaaya hai aapne.
maza aa gaya..
poore 28 marks.
bas aise hi likhte rahiye
DAAD deta huN aapko.
Bohut shukriya mukesh bhai , bohut din baad aaj aap nazar aaye yoindia par koi ghalti ho gai kya humse. jo aap aajkal dooooooor dooooooor rehte haiN...
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