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WO AAYE MERI YAADON ME EK KHUMAAR BANKAR
RAH TAKTE RAHEN HUM WO AAYE TO MAGAR INTJAAR BANKAR
HAR MUSAFIR SE PUCHTE RAHE HUM UNKA PATA
SUBNE DAAMAN CHDALIYA ANJAAN BANKAR
LIKHE JO TAMAM KHAT MAINE UNKI YAAD ME
WO BHI LAUT AAYE MERE GUNHGAAR BANKAR
KAR DIYE KITNE HI UJALE MAINE UNKE NAAM PAR
WO AAYE MERE NASEEB ME SYAH RAAT BANKAR
MUJHE UMR BHAR PYAS RAHI UNKI NAZR-E-INAYAT KI
WO AAYE TO MERE DAR PAR MAGAR KHUD TALBGAR BANKAR
MAINE HAR AAHAT KO UNKI DASTAK HAI YE MEHSUS KIYA
WO GUJAR GAYE MERE KARIB SE MAGAR EKSAAYA BANKAR [/color]
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 07:37:08 AM » |
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sorry mai kuch bhi nahi parh saka  " sab laal laal dikhe hai mujhko koi shabd na dikhe hai mujhko fir bhi daad hai aur khus raho ye dua hai tujhko " thanx " |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 08:12:04 AM » |
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ab padhiye nirala ji ab mast dikh raha hai
a very good poem kamal ji..keep writing this way
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 08:14:40 AM » |
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behad khubsurat peshkash he kamal ji........
ese hi aachi post karte rahiye......
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2011, 01:12:35 PM » |
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Thanku very much K mam.
aapke kaaran hume Kamal ji ka ye umda peshkash parhne ko mila:)
Kamal ji aapki khubsurat aur dar ke ehsaaso se bhari poem par dil se daad ji.
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2011, 01:52:35 PM » |
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thanku kasak ji and MG
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2011, 01:57:35 PM » |
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YE LAL RANG MERE DIL KE DARD KA HAI JO BEKABU HOKAR ALFAZ BANKAR KAGAZ PAR UTAR AAYA HAI .
HAR KISI SE DARD KO DEKHA NAHI JATA NIRALA JI
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 02:04:39 PM » |
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hmm
sahi baat hai ji.
agar mera mobile allow karta to shayd me bhi aapka dard dekh leta.
khair---
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wo aankh kahan se lau yara
dikha de jo dard dil ka ---
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 05:31:11 PM » |
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darde dil ke liye nazar ki nahi zazbaat ki jarurat hai
mujhe aapki daad se jyada mere nagme padte waqt aapki thodi ehtiyat ki jarurat hai
don't mind
thanks
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2011, 06:43:11 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Kamal JI
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2011, 06:52:49 PM » |
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Nice one Kamal ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2011, 08:39:04 AM » |
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Kamal ji--ehtiyat bartenge ji aapke nagmo ko padhte waqt.
aur haan ye ' don't mind '
mera style hai--kab churaya aapne !!!
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don mind
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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2011, 09:03:46 AM » |
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ye style aapka hi rahaga mein to aapse aapke andaz me baat karne ki nkoshish ki hai ,gustakhi maqf kuch bura laga ho to
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2011, 09:11:49 AM » |
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haha bura kab lagta hai Nirala ko !! jab koi gustakhi na kare tab bura lagta hai  "" wo insaan hi kya jisse-- koi gustakhi hi na kar sake !!! "" thanx " |
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2011, 09:20:14 AM » |
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khub nirala ji aur
wo insaan bhi kya jo nir ki tarhe gustakhiyon par haha na kar sake
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