meri zindgi mil gayi

by kaushikbhawna008 on April 02, 2008, 05:17:52 AM
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dekha jab unhe to chehre pe hasi khil gayi
aisa laga jaise mujhe meri zindgi mil gayi

chale jo saath wo mere kadam se kadam mila k
aisa laga jaise mujhe meri manzil mil gayi

raahon me hazaar kaante the lekin
paakar unka saath meri zindgi ki har kali khil gayi

zindgi meri pyasi thi pyaar paane k liye
chaha jo unhone aisa laga jaise saagar sang nadi mil gayi

"bhawna" bohut kush hai sanam tujhe paakar
tujhe paakar aisa laga jaise mujhe khuda ki khudaai mil gayi

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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2008, 09:03:51 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob bhawna... bahoot acha likha hai apne!!! Good job!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2008, 08:40:36 AM »
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hi,
bhawna ji mujhe aapka shayrana andaz acchha lagta hai.
aapki lines padhker lagta hai ki kahin kisi ka dil toot raha hai.
meri shubh kamnaye aapke saath hai aise hi acchha likhte rahiye

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