Merra haseen sa ajnabi...R...

by brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 08:20:14 PM
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Har pal har lamha khoya rehta hai merri chah mein,
uska har tasavur mujhe uske kareeb le jata hai,

jab main ajati hu samne tou chaunk jata hai,
merre jane k baad mujhe bulane k bahane banata hai,

yu tou bekrar rehta hai merri jhalak pane ko,
jab main nazre milati hu tou itrake dikhata hai,

merri baato se uski muskaan hazar guna badh jati hai,
per merri gair hazari mein merre ghar ko dekh vo ansu bahata hai,

bechain reheta hai mujhse milne k liye,
paas aate hi apni chaht se har baar merri bekrari badhata hai,

nadaan hai sayana bhi hai aur merri jaan bhi,
kabhi baate ansuni kar deta hai tou kabhi bahut apnapan jatata hai,

o merre yaaro aesa hi hai merra haseen sa ajnabi..
jo mujhe satata hai manata hai tou kabhi haule se aake sine se lag jata hai......
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 08:42:11 PM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Geet ji.hmm apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne.mindblowing creation.bahut pasand aayi.keep up the good work Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:ye R ka matlab mujhe samajh mein nahi aayi. Giggle Giggle tongue3 love9
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 08:53:05 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji n madhu ji..

madhu ji ye R ka hi Rang hai merri lekhi mein..merre ajnabi k naam ki shuruwat bhi R se hoti hai aur khtam bhi R pe hi hota hai uska naam......
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 11:25:05 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji. Aapki saari kavitaayein mohabbat se nahayi hui hoti hain jisme se gulaabon ki mehek aati hai... aur isbaar bhi har bar ki tarah chahat ki khoobsurti ko shabdon me baandha hai... bahut khoob... thanx to "R" jo aapki in khoobsurat kavitaon ki wajah hain...

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kya kahein kuch aisa lagta hai aajkal,
ki hum khud se hi juda ho chale hain,

kaise kahen tumhe hum apne dil ka haal,
kuch paagal deewaane se ho chale hain,

saamne hoti ho to samajh kuch aata nahi,
lagta hai jaise apne hosh kho chale hain,

dur hote ho to dhundte hain tumhe hum,
jaise ki hum apne dil ko hi haar chale hain,

jaane kya asar hai tumhari aankhon mein,
lagta hai hum madhosh se ho chale hain,

tumhare aa jaane se kuch aisa asar ho raha hai,
lagta hai hum mohabbat sa kuch kar chale hain...
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2010, 11:40:45 PM »
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Wow bahut khoob Kapil ji,very lovely and romantic lines. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 12:26:44 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 08:20:14 PM
Har pal har lamha khoya rehta hai merri chah mein,
uska har tasavur mujhe uske kareeb le jata hai,

jab main ajati hu samne tou chaunk jata hai,
merre jane k baad mujhe bulane k bahane banata hai,

yu tou bekrar rehta hai merri jhalak pane ko,
jab main nazre milati hu tou itrake dikhata hai,

merri baato se uski muskaan hazar guna badh jati hai,
per merri gair hazari mein merre ghar ko dekh vo ansu bahata hai,

bechain reheta hai mujhse milne k liye,
paas aate hi apni chaht se har baar merri bekrari badhata hai,

nadaan hai sayana bhi hai aur merri jaan bhi,
kabhi baate ansuni kar deta hai tou kabhi bahut apnapan jatata hai,

o merre yaaro aesa hi hai merra haseen sa ajnabi..
jo mujhe satata hai manata hai tou kabhi haule se aake sine se lag jata hai......


Bahut sundar peshkash hai Geet Ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2010, 12:28:57 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 07, 2010, 11:25:05 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji. Aapki saari kavitaayein mohabbat se nahayi hui hoti hain jisme se gulaabon ki mehek aati hai... aur isbaar bhi har bar ki tarah chahat ki khoobsurti ko shabdon me baandha hai... bahut khoob... thanx to "R" jo aapki in khoobsurat kavitaon ki wajah hain...

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kya kahein kuch aisa lagta hai aajkal,
ki hum khud se hi juda ho chale hain,

kaise kahen tumhe hum apne dil ka haal,
kuch paagal deewaane se ho chale hain,

saamne hoti ho to samajh kuch aata nahi,
lagta hai jaise apne hosh kho chale hain,

dur hote ho to dhundte hain tumhe hum,
jaise ki hum apne dil ko hi haar chale hain,

jaane kya asar hai tumhari aankhon mein,
lagta hai hum madhosh se ho chale hain,

tumhare aa jaane se kuch aisa asar ho raha hai,
lagta hai hum mohabbat sa kuch kar chale hain...

Wah! Kapil , bahut hi behatreen response hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2010, 05:58:34 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai        Brokenbyluv ji......

Mera haseen sa ajnabi
mooh se kaheta kuch na kabhi
milta hai mujhko woh jabhi
kahe deta hai aankhon se apni dil ki lagi

har waqt milne ko mujhko tarasta hai
jab bhi milta hai bahut sharmata hai
nazren kaheti to hai woh mujhse pyar toh karta hai
lekin na jaane kyun woh mujhse kahene ko darta hai
ajeeb sa "Mera haseen sa ajnabi"
aisa ashiq maine dekha na kabhi......
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2010, 11:38:05 AM »
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Thank u so much Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 07, 2010, 11:40:45 PM
Wow bahut khoob Kapil ji,very lovely and romantic lines. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2010, 11:38:40 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2010, 12:28:57 AM
Wah! Kapil , bahut hi behatreen response hai
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bohat bohat khoob bbl ji....bohat bohat khoob kaha hai aapne bohat hi umda..
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bohat khoob likha hai. klaskar ji and cara ji.... Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya Saurabh ji...!!!

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 10, 2010, 05:27:20 AM
bohat bohat khoob bbl ji....bohat bohat khoob kaha hai aapne bohat hi umda..
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bohat khoob likha hai. klaskar ji and cara ji.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2010, 12:11:45 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji cara ji rajesh ji and saurabh ji...

cara ji aur kapil ji bahut khubsurat alfaz likhe hai aap dono ne...


Main jab use dekhti hu tou darr nhi lagta,
aur uske paas naa hone se sahi bhi sahi nhi lagta,

jab hoti hu uske saaye mein har gum bhul jaati hu,
per hoker usse juda ye dil kahiin nhi lagta,

jaane kal kya hoga jab jag zaahir hoga ye pyar hamara,
agar mile uska sath umar bhar k liye tou ruswai se bhi darr nhi lagta,

ajeeb si uljhan ne gher rakha hai mujhe,
use na sochu tou jina khaali lagta hai aur uske sang kuch mushkil nhi lagta,

ya khuda kar de tu use merre hawale..
warna sab kuch mil bhi jaye mujhe per vo sath nhi tou kuch bhi haasil haasil nhi lagta......
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2010, 12:28:17 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 08:20:14 PM
Har pal har lamha khoya rehta hai merri chah mein,
uska har tasavur mujhe uske kareeb le jata hai,

jab main ajati hu samne tou chaunk jata hai,
merre jane k baad mujhe bulane k bahane banata hai,

yu tou bekrar rehta hai merri jhalak pane ko,
jab main nazre milati hu tou itrake dikhata hai,

merri baato se uski muskaan hazar guna badh jati hai,
per merri gair hazari mein merre ghar ko dekh vo ansu bahata hai,

bechain reheta hai mujhse milne k liye,
paas aate hi apni chaht se har baar merri bekrari badhata hai,

nadaan hai sayana bhi hai aur merri jaan bhi,
kabhi baate ansuni kar deta hai tou kabhi bahut apnapan jatata hai,

o merre yaaro aesa hi hai merra haseen sa ajnabi..
jo mujhe satata hai manata hai tou kabhi haule se aake sine se lag jata hai......


Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 10, 2010, 12:11:45 PM
bahut bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji cara ji rajesh ji and saurabh ji...

cara ji aur kapil ji bahut khubsurat alfaz likhe hai aap dono ne...


Main jab use dekhti hu tou darr nhi lagta,
aur uske paas naa hone se sahi bhi sahi nhi lagta,

jab hoti hu uske saaye mein har gum bhul jaati hu,
per hoker usse juda ye dil kahiin nhi lagta,

jaane kal kya hoga jab jag zaahir hoga ye pyar hamara,
agar mile uska sath umar bhar k liye tou ruswai se bhi darr nhi lagta,

ajeeb si uljhan ne gher rakha hai mujhe,
use na sochu tou jina khaali lagta hai aur uske sang kuch mushkil nhi lagta,

ya khuda kar de tu use merre hawale..
warna kuch bhi mil jaye mujhe per vo nhi tou kuch bhi haasil nhi lagta......



Bahutttttttttt Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas...

Vaakai Khusboo Bikherte hue Kavitaye Likhi Hai Geetji Aapne..

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Klaskar Ji Aur Caraji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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