Merra haseen sa ajnabi...R...

by brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 08:20:14 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 17, 2010, 11:28:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob Geet ji and Kapil ji.great and touching lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #31 on: May 17, 2010, 11:29:24 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob...!!!

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rishton me bandhe ho to aetbaar karna sikho,
sapno ke poore hone ka intzaar karna sikho,

yaki nahi hai mujhpe aur kehti ho mujhe apna,
pehle mere aetbaar pe to aetbaar karna sikho,

main kaise behne du un aankhon se anmol moti,
zaraa tum apni muskaan se to pyaar karna sikho,

haan main jaanta hoon ki alag hai hamari raah,
zaraa tum aake meri raahon pe to safar karna sikho,

kehti ho ki main tumhaare liye khuda ka farmaan hoon,
aur kuch nahi to pehle us khuda pe to aetbaar karna sikho...



Wah wah kapil ji JSt KAMAL>>>>>>
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«Reply #32 on: May 17, 2010, 11:30:31 PM »
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Har pal har lamha khoya rehta hai merri chah mein,
uska har tasavur mujhe uske kareeb le jata hai,

jab main ajati hu samne tou chaunk jata hai,
merre jane k baad mujhe bulane k bahane banata hai,

yu tou bekrar rehta hai merri jhalak pane ko,
jab main nazre milati hu tou itrake dikhata hai,

merri baato se uski muskaan hazar guna badh jati hai,
per merri gair hazari mein merre ghar ko dekh vo ansu bahata hai,

bechain reheta hai mujhse milne k liye,
paas aate hi apni chaht se har baar merri bekrari badhata hai,

nadaan hai sayana bhi hai aur merri jaan bhi,
kabhi baate ansuni kar deta hai tou kabhi bahut apnapan jatata hai,

o merre yaaro aesa hi hai merra haseen sa ajnabi..
jo mujhe satata hai manata hai tou kabhi haule se aake sine se lag jata hai......


Vry Vry Gud!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #33 on: May 17, 2010, 11:48:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... aapka ek baar fir se YO  me swaagat hai... main samajh sakta hoon kuch logo ka bartaaw thik nahi raha... par haath ki paancho ungliyaan barabar nahi hoti... q dusron ke liye apne interest se muh modna... yahaan sab ek jaise nahi hain... thanx a lot for coming back... !!!

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«Reply #34 on: May 17, 2010, 11:55:26 PM »
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Thanx Kapil........
Its ok Hota hai kabhi kabhi ....
Anywyz thnx a lot!!!!!!!!

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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... aapka ek baar fir se YO  me swaagat hai... main samajh sakta hoon kuch logo ka bartaaw thik nahi raha... par haath ki paancho ungliyaan barabar nahi hoti... q dusron ke liye apne interest se muh modna... yahaan sab ek jaise nahi hain... thanx a lot for coming back... !!!

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«Reply #35 on: May 17, 2010, 11:58:38 PM »
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Thank u so much Usual Smile

Thanx Kapil........
Its ok Hota hai kabhi kabhi ....
Anywyz thnx a lot!!!!!!!!

Yh im Bak !!!!!!!!
(u insit me tht's y)
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«Reply #36 on: May 20, 2010, 12:32:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya neel ji n madhu ji...
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«Reply #37 on: May 20, 2010, 12:46:02 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob...!!!

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rishton me bandhe ho to aetbaar karna sikho,
sapno ke poore hone ka intzaar karna sikho,

yaki nahi hai mujhpe aur kehti ho mujhe apna,
pehle mere aetbaar pe to aetbaar karna sikho,

main kaise behne du un aankhon se anmol moti,
zaraa tum apni muskaan se to pyaar karna sikho,

haan main jaanta hoon ki alag hai hamari raah,
zaraa tum aake meri raahon pe to safar karna sikho,

kehti ho ki main tumhaare liye khuda ka farmaan hoon,
aur kuch nahi to pehle us khuda pe to aetbaar karna sikho...





Kiya tha kisi pe aetbaar per ab vo aetbaar naa raha,
merre ishq ka koi naam-o-nishan naa raha,

uski chaht mein bitaye the kayi suhane din,
uske jane k baad waisa aasman naa raha,

ankho mein sapno ki ladiyo pirote thakti nhi thi,
ab pehle jaisa koi armaan naa raha,

mhbt se bahut door hai merri manzil,
koi sath chale merre bhi aesa karwan naa raha,

merri duniya mein khushi ki leher tou aa gyi,
per apni mhbt k sang udd saku neel gagan mein aesa koi jahan naa raha.......
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«Reply #38 on: May 21, 2010, 12:03:24 AM »
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bahut bahut sundar.... bahut dard hai aapke in shabdon me... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne.....!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dil hamara khoobsurat haadso ka shikaar hota hai,
nazrein mil jaati hai aur dil se iqraar hota hai,

kuch palon ki hasi mazaak aur kuch palon ka saath,
ho wo bahut kam par lagta hai wo apna sa hota hai,

mumkin nahi ki har rishte ko har baar haasil mile,
kuch rishton ka kabhi kabhi anjaam adhura hota hai,

ye na samajhna tum ki ek haar se sab khatam ho gaya,
har andheri raat ke baad hi roshan sawera hota hai,

ye na socho ki jo gaya wo wapas nahi aa sakta kabhi,
dil se agar duwa maango to wo hamesha poora hota hai,

humein rulaane waala bhi wahi hai jisne humein banaya,
uske ghar me der ho sakta hai par andher nahi hota hai...


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«Reply #39 on: May 21, 2010, 12:08:12 AM »
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Bahut dard hai aapke lines mein Geet ji really touched,Kapil ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya. Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #40 on: May 21, 2010, 12:27:22 AM »
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Gud 1 kApil .......

Bhut khoobsorat Andaz ....... & gud reply Brokenluv......

Bhut acha rang jama rakha hai continue...........
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«Reply #41 on: May 21, 2010, 12:28:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Bahut dard hai aapke lines mein Geet ji really touched,Kapil ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya. Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #42 on: May 21, 2010, 12:34:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...!!!

Gud 1 kApil .......

Bhut khoobsorat Andaz ....... & gud reply Brokenluv......

Bhut acha rang jama rakha hai continue...........
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«Reply #43 on: May 21, 2010, 10:46:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya madhuji n neel ji...
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«Reply #44 on: May 21, 2010, 10:57:08 AM »
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bahut bahut sundar.... bahut dard hai aapke in shabdon me... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne.....!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dil hamara khoobsurat haadso ka shikaar hota hai,
nazrein mil jaati hai aur dil se iqraar hota hai,

kuch palon ki hasi mazaak aur kuch palon ka saath,
ho wo bahut kam par lagta hai wo apna sa hota hai,

mumkin nahi ki har rishte ko har baar haasil mile,
kuch rishton ka kabhi kabhi anjaam adhura hota hai,

ye na samajhna tum ki ek haar se sab khatam ho gaya,
har andheri raat ke baad hi roshan sawera hota hai,

ye na socho ki jo gaya wo wapas nahi aa sakta kabhi,
dil se agar duwa maango to wo hamesha poora hota hai,

humein rulaane waala bhi wahi hai jisne humein banaya,
uske ghar me der ho sakta hai par andher nahi hota hai...




shukriya kapil ji...nce reply...


Is iqrar-e-mhbt ne mujhe barbaad kar diya,
ab kya haasil hai mujhe jab merre lab sile hai,

jab kaha tha apne dil ka haal bhari mehfil mein,
tab bhi badnaam thi aaj chup hu tou bhi logo ko mujhse gile hai,

kabhi milte hai kabhi bichad jate hai,
na jane ye kis kism k kaafile hai,

uspe koi haq bhi nhi hai merra,
per jane usi se kyun ye apnepan k silsile hai,

aaj tak behti hawa k sang khushbu nhi aayi,
merre angan mein is baar jane kaise phool khile hai,

beparda nhi merri koi bhi hasrat uske saamne..
phir bhi usi ki barbaadi k saare iljaam mujhe hi kyun mile hai.........

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