Merra haseen sa ajnabi...R...

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«Reply #60 on: May 28, 2010, 09:42:23 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 28, 2010, 08:29:12 AM
bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji... humein bahut khushi mili ki aapne apna waqt nikaalke hamare is thread ko thoda sa waqt diya aur ise pasand kiya...!!!

aur maafi maangke humein sharminda na karein. Hume bahut achcha laga jo aapne bhi apne kalam se do line yahaan likha. Aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

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tute huye wo ret ke ghar the unko dil na samajhna tum,
        do pal ka wo saath jo tha usko chahat na samajhna tum,

    rag rag me bas mohabbat rahe, dard ki koi jagah na ho,
            tuta hua wo khwaab hi tha, use zindagi na samajhna tum...


Quote from: klaskar on May 28, 2010, 08:38:05 AM
Humein ye jaanke bahut achcha laga ki hamari baaton se aapki uljhan sulajhne lagi. Kuch to faida hua hamare likhne ka. Hota yahi hai hum kisi ko chahte hain aur wo humein thukra deta hai to humein aur mohabbat pe vishwas nahi rehta. Aur hum kisi aur ki mohabbat ko nahi samajh paate ya bharosa nahi karte.


main bhi ye samajh sakta hoon dil ka tootna kya hota hai,
zindagi maut tab ban jati hai aur dil har lamha rota hai.

Par koi hota hai jo humein khud se bhi jyaada chahta hai. Kyun hum kisi aur ke gunaah ki saja kisi aur ko de. Yahi soch ke humein koshish karna chahiye ki hum kisi bhi haal me kisi aur ka dil na tutne de... Usual Smile

jyada ho gaya ... bahut padha liya....aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai...  Laughing hard

bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... too good...!!!
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kyun tum usko yaad karti ho jo tumko hi nahi chahta hai,
kyun uski yaadon me koi yun har lamha aansu bahata hai,

beete huye us waqt ko bhulaake aaj is pal ko sajana hai,
mohabbat kisko kehte hain is jahaan ko aaj dikhaana hai,

koi to hai jo tumhaare liye har lamhaa betaab rehta hai,
zamaane ke zulm ko sehte hue bhi wo kuch na kehta hai,

baari ab hai imtihaan ki, tumne khuda se kiya waada hai,
dekhna hai kiss hadd tak wo waada poora ho paata hai,

chaha hai agar sachche dil se to saath uska nibhana hai,
apne har ghum ko chhipake uske aansuon ko mitana hai,

mera to ye samajhna hai mohabbat hi khuda ki ibadat hai,
sath mehboob ka de na sako to bhala wo kaisi chahat hai.




Nice responses Kapil
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«Reply #61 on: May 28, 2010, 09:53:37 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji very touching lines,great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #62 on: May 28, 2010, 12:32:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 28, 2010, 09:42:23 AM

Nice responses Kapil
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«Reply #63 on: May 28, 2010, 12:33:56 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 28, 2010, 09:53:37 AM
Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji very touching lines,great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #64 on: June 08, 2010, 07:05:51 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 28, 2010, 08:25:23 AM
bahut khoob likha hai aur ek dum sach baat likha hai aapne...!!!

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shukriya kapil ji...
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«Reply #65 on: June 08, 2010, 09:18:54 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 28, 2010, 08:38:05 AM
Humein ye jaanke bahut achcha laga ki hamari baaton se aapki uljhan sulajhne lagi. Kuch to faida hua hamare likhne ka. Hota yahi hai hum kisi ko chahte hain aur wo humein thukra deta hai to humein aur mohabbat pe vishwas nahi rehta. Aur hum kisi aur ki mohabbat ko nahi samajh paate ya bharosa nahi karte.


main bhi ye samajh sakta hoon dil ka tootna kya hota hai,
        zindagi maut tab ban jaati hai aur dil har lamha rota hai.

Par koi hota hai jo humein khud se bhi jyaada chahta hai. Kyun hum kisi aur ke gunaah ki saja kisi aur ko de. Yahi soch ke humein koshish karna chahiye ki hum kisi bhi haal me kisi aur ka dil na tutne de... Usual Smile

jyada ho gaya ... bahut padha liya....aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai...  Laughing hard

bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... too good...!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


kyun tum usko yaad karti ho jo tumko hi nahi chahta hai,
  kyun uski yaadon me koi yun har lamha aansu bahata hai,

beete huye us waqt ko bhulaake aaj is pal ko sajana hai,
  mohabbat kisko kehte hain is jahaan ko aaj dikhaana hai,

koi to hai jo tumhaare liye har lamhaa betaab rehta hai,
  zamaane ke zulm ko sehte hue bhi wo kuch na kehta hai,

baari ab hai imtihaan ki, tumne khuda se kiya waada hai,
  dekhna hai kiss hadd tak wo waada poora ho paata hai,

chaha hai agar sachche dil se to saath uska nibhana hai,
  apne har ghum ko chhipake uske aansuon ko mitana hai,

mera to ye samajhna hai mohabbat hi khuda ki ibadat hai,
  sath mehboob ka de na sako to bhala wo kaisi chahat hai.



ji bahut sachi aur gehri baate kahi hai apne kapil ji aur ye bhi sahi hai ki agar pehle kisi ne mhbt mein dhokha diya ho tou uske kiye ki sazaa hame kisi dusre ko nhi deni chahiye...


Behte rahe hai ek patte ki tarah is mhbt ki naaw mein,
ab lagne laga hai ki pahuch hi jayenge ishq ki chaaw mein,

der se hi sahi koi tou humsafar mila hai,
jisse sirrf alfazo ka hi nhi sanso ka bhi silsila hai,

haan abhi kuch duriya hai hamare darmiya,
per mehsus karti hu hawao mein uski betaabi ki narmiya,

vo ek ishara kar de tou har doori mita du main,
kitna chahta hai use merra dil use bhi bata du main,

raaho per uske saaye ka intezaar rehta hai mujhe,
kitne bekrar hai vo merre liye har lamha kehta hai mujhe,

uski dhadkano ki awaaz main apne kaano mein sunti hu,
sang uske ek khushaal jivan k sapne main bunti hu,

bus ab ye intezaar ho jaye khtam phir hum bhi kisike humnawa ho jayenge,
bhoola kar apne saare dard-o-gam uski zulfo k saaye mein chain se so jayenge......
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«Reply #66 on: June 20, 2010, 09:35:59 PM »
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Bilkul sahi kaha aapne Geet ji aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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kisi ke gunaahon ki sazaa kisi aur ko nahi de sakte,
    kisi ki bewafai ke kaaran ishq ko dard nahi keh sakte,

ishq to meetha nasha hai to saanso me samaa jaata hai,
    ek baar mar jaane se ishq ko zeher to nahi keh sakte,

kisi hawa ke jhaunke se dil tutke bikhar sakta hai,
    par har hawa ke jhaunke ko toofaan to nahi keh sakte,

hote hain kuch log jo pyaar chhal ke liye karte hain,
    par har aashiq ko iske liye bewafaa to nahi keh sakte,

khata wo hamari thi use waqt pe pehchaan na sake hum,
    par iske liye hum khudko gunehgaar to nahi keh sakte...
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«Reply #67 on: June 22, 2010, 08:05:49 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 07, 2010, 08:20:14 PM
Har pal har lamha khoya rehta hai merri chah mein,
uska har tasavur mujhe uske kareeb le jata hai,

jab main ajati hu samne tou chaunk jata hai,
merre jane k baad mujhe bulane k bahane banata hai,

yu tou bekrar rehta hai merri jhalak pane ko,
jab main nazre milati hu tou itrake dikhata hai,

merri baato se uski muskaan hazar guna badh jati hai,
per merri gair hazari mein merre ghar ko dekh vo ansu bahata hai,

bechain reheta hai mujhse milne k liye,
paas aate hi apni chaht se har baar merri bekrari badhata hai,

nadaan hai sayana bhi hai aur merri jaan bhi,
kabhi baate ansuni kar deta hai tou kabhi bahut apnapan jatata hai,

o merre yaaro aesa hi hai merra haseen sa ajnabi..
jo mujhe satata hai manata hai tou kabhi haule se aake sine se lag jata hai......
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«Reply #68 on: June 22, 2010, 03:39:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya waqif ji...
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«Reply #69 on: June 23, 2010, 04:30:11 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 20, 2010, 09:35:59 PM
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne Geet ji aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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kisi ke gunaahon ki sazaa kisi aur ko nahi de sakte,
    kisi ki bewafai ke kaaran ishq ko dard nahi keh sakte,

ishq to meetha nasha hai to saanso me samaa jaata hai,
    ek baar mar jaane se ishq ko zeher to nahi keh sakte,

kisi hawa ke jhaunke se dil tutke bikhar sakta hai,
    par har hawa ke jhaunke ko toofaan to nahi keh sakte,

hote hain kuch log jo pyaar chhal ke liye karte hain,
    par har aashiq ko iske liye bewafaa to nahi keh sakte,

khata wo hamari thi use waqt pe pehchaan na sake hum,
    par iske liye hum khudko gunehgaar to nahi keh sakte...

shukriya kapil ji...


Ye sach hai ki har prem kahani adhuri nhi hoti,
ye bhi sach hai ki jahan mein ishq ki kami nhi hoti,

ek dil se zakham kha kar toot jana tou bewakufi hai,
mumkin hai mhbt ka asman mil jaye har pal naseeb mein zameen nhi hoti,

muskurana tou padta hai har haal mein rehkar bhi,
warna ishq ki virani mein rehkar bhi zindgi shabhnami nhi hoti,

mhbto mein manzil ka haasil hona thoda mushkil sa lagta hai,
kyunki chahto ki raahe hamesha tilismi nhi hoti,

aksar faslo se rishte aur bhi gehre ho jate hai,
aur sache sathi ki judai se ankho mein kabhi gum ki nami nhi hoti.........
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«Reply #70 on: June 29, 2010, 12:30:38 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... abhi humse kuch ban nahi raha hai... jaise hi ban paayega hum jawaab likhenge aur post karenge....!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 23, 2010, 04:30:11 PM
shukriya kapil ji...


Ye sach hai ki har prem kahani adhuri nhi hoti,
ye bhi sach hai ki jahan mein ishq ki kami nhi hoti,

ek dil se zakham kha kar toot jana tou bewakufi hai,
mumkin hai mhbt ka asman mil jaye har pal naseeb mein zameen nhi hoti,

muskurana tou padta hai har haal mein rehkar bhi,
warna ishq ki virani mein rehkar bhi zindgi shabhnami nhi hoti,

mhbto mein manzil ka haasil hona thoda mushkil sa lagta hai,
kyunki chahto ki raahe hamesha tilismi nhi hoti,

aksar faslo se rishte aur bhi gehre ho jate hai,
aur sache sathi ki judai se ankho mein kabhi gum ki nami nhi hoti.........
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«Reply #71 on: June 29, 2010, 01:11:02 AM »
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Bohat Khoob BrokenByLuv & Kapil Nice Reply.. Applause
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«Reply #72 on: June 29, 2010, 01:30:47 AM »
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ITANE LOGON KI JUGALBANDI!BAHUT HI BEHTAREEN!KAPIL JI, GEET JI ,SHIHAB JI BAHUT ACHCHE!
DARD-E-DIL EK HAI BAYAAN APNA APNA.....
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«Reply #73 on: June 29, 2010, 01:35:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Aryaan ji...!!!

Quote from: Aryaan on June 29, 2010, 01:11:02 AM
Bohat Khoob BrokenByLuv & Kapil Nice Reply.. Applause
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«Reply #74 on: June 29, 2010, 01:36:19 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mamta ji...!!!

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ITANE LOGON KI JUGALBANDI!BAHUT HI BEHTAREEN!KAPIL JI, GEET JI ,SHIHAB JI BAHUT ACHCHE!
DARD-E-DIL EK HAI BAYAAN APNA APNA.....
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