Merra pyar...

by brokenbyluv on July 21, 2009, 07:51:18 PM
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Merra pyar tapte registan mein barish ki ek bund jaisa hai,
ek panchi ki pehli udaan jaisa hai,
ek sukhi daali pe khilte hue patte jaisa hai,
jalti dhoop mein thande saaye jaisa hai..
merra pyar hi shayad merri manzil hai,
jo merri ankho mein muskurahat jaisa hai......
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2009, 02:21:35 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 21, 2009, 07:51:18 PM
Merra pyar tapte registan mein barish ki ek bund jaisa hai,
ek panchi ki pehli udaan jaisa hai,
ek sukhi daali pe khilte hue patte jaisa hai,
jalti dhoop mein thande saaye jaisa hai..
merra pyar hi shayad merri manzil hai,
jo merri ankho mein muskurahat jaisa hai......


hahaaaa.... bahut accha likha hai. Ab hum jaan gaye aap ka pyar kaisa hai.. Usual Smile Nice lines... Keep up. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2009, 05:31:10 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 21, 2009, 07:51:18 PM
Merra pyar tapte registan mein barish ki ek bund jaisa hai,
ek panchi ki pehli udaan jaisa hai,
ek sukhi daali pe khilte hue patte jaisa hai,
jalti dhoop mein thande saaye jaisa hai..
merra pyar hi shayad merri manzil hai,
jo merri ankho mein muskurahat jaisa hai......


very touchy brokenbyluv
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2009, 06:54:49 PM »
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shukyiya aaina ji...
shukriya roja ji...ye sach hai merra pyar aisa hi hai...
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2009, 07:03:49 PM »
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bahut khoob bbl ji...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2009, 07:05:00 PM »
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 Thankyou ! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2009, 09:55:01 AM »
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Bahut Accha Likha Hai Dost.. Nice One.. Applause


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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2009, 07:14:09 PM »
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shukriya mann ji......
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2009, 07:19:04 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 21, 2009, 07:51:18 PM
Merra pyar tapte registan mein barish ki ek bund jaisa hai,
ek panchi ki pehli udaan jaisa hai,
ek sukhi daali pe khilte hue patte jaisa hai,
jalti dhoop mein thande saaye jaisa hai..
merra pyar hi shayad merri manzil hai,
jo merri ankho mein muskurahat jaisa hai......


wah wah bahut khoob BBL ji.. wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2009, 07:31:02 PM »
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 Thankyou !
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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2009, 12:33:32 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 21, 2009, 07:51:18 PM
Merra pyar tapte registan mein barish ki ek bund jaisa hai,
ek panchi ki pehli udaan jaisa hai,
ek sukhi daali pe khilte hue patte jaisa hai,
jalti dhoop mein thande saaye jaisa hai..
merra pyar hi shayad merri manzil hai,
jo merri ankho mein muskurahat jaisa hai......


Wah wah its very touchyyyyyy lovly  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2009, 12:46:30 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob BBL ji,really touching n mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2009, 08:13:16 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot Khoob BBL ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2009, 08:20:54 AM »
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Shukriya pari ji madhu ji n sophi ji...notworthy
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