Merre ajnabi...

by brokenbyluv on January 21, 2010, 06:51:49 PM
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Yu achanak merre daaman mein khushiya bharne wale ajnabi,
tu merri dhadkan banta jaa raha hai,

merri shanath kahiin kho gyi thi iss jahan mein,
tu mujhe khud se rubaru karta jaa raha hai,

apni masum nigaho se aur apni natkhat baato se,
tu merri ruh mein tadap bharta jaa raha hai,

kis jahan ka musafir hai tu mujhe ye tou bata jaa..
jo mujhe bina jaane apni zindgi mein shaamil karta jaa raha hai......
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2010, 07:23:50 PM »
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thnx alot shihab ji...
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2010, 02:56:47 AM »
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Hmm kiya baat hai Geet ji,bahut hi khoob,lovely creation.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2010, 05:32:48 AM »
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Wah wah bahot achhi poem hai BBL ji. Lafzon ka shandaar istemaal kiya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2010, 06:44:24 AM »
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Nice Geet Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2010, 05:02:44 PM »
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thnx alot madhuji,riyazji, n rishiji,for giving ur time to my thread.....bahut bahut shukria...
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2010, 06:57:19 PM »
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Jab bhi likhti ho Geet lajawaab likhti ho...jai ho.!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping SmileyApplause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kiss ajnabi ke khayalo mai kho gayee thee Geet-di tu
Kaun hai wo jo tujhse he tujh ko rubaru kara raha hai

Kaunse swapanlok se hai aaya ,tujh ko bhi nahi bataaya
Khushiyon se bhar k tera daaman,tujhko bas me kar liya

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 21, 2010, 06:51:49 PM
Yu achanak merre daaman mein khushiya bharne wale ajnabi,
tu merri dhadkan banta jaa raha hai,

merri shanath kahiin kho gyi thi iss jahan mein,
tu mujhe khud se rubaru karta jaa raha hai,

apni masum nigaho se aur apni natkhat baato se,
tu merri ruh mein tadap bharta jaa raha hai,

kis jahan ka musafir hai tu mujhe ye tou bata jaa..
jo mujhe bina jaane apni zindgi mein shaamil karta jaa raha hai......
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2010, 08:01:37 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Geetji Applause Applause Applause
I Hope Aapka Ajnabi Aapko Jald Hi Mil Jaye All D Best  Thumbs UP
Nice Reply Sihab Bhai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2010, 09:05:12 PM »
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thnx alot shihab ji,koyal , pank ji thnx alot...

shihab ji laut k jawab dungi..take cre...
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2010, 12:35:05 PM »
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Haay Pyar Ka Naya Naya Ehsas Bhi Kamaal Hota Hia Yaar.

Bahot Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Borkenbyluv Ji Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2010, 01:19:13 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 22, 2010, 06:57:19 PM
Jab bhi likhti ho Geet lajawaab likhti ho...jai ho.!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping SmileyApplause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kiss ajnabi ke khayalo mai kho gayee thee Geet-di tu
Kaun hai wo jo tujhse he tujh ko rubaru kara raha hai

Kaunse swapanlok se hai aaya ,tujh ko bhi nahi bataaya
Khushiyon se bhar k tera daaman,tujhko bas me kar liya

thnx sweetu...n nce lines too...

Vo waisa hai jaise ek phool ki kali hoti hai,
uske aane se merra rom rom khil jata hai,
kabhi agar lagta hai vo mujhse door hai..
tou palke band karti hu aur vo nigaho mein mil jata hai......
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2010, 01:21:38 PM »
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waah waah .. u r simply rocking geet

keep it up !!!
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2010, 01:24:59 PM »
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hey thnx alot priya...
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2010, 01:42:02 PM »
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Wah wah BBL ji very nice creation. Bahut achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Keep it up.
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2010, 02:04:53 PM »
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thnx alot riyaz ji...
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