Merre ajnabi...

by brokenbyluv on January 21, 2010, 06:51:49 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2010, 06:24:42 PM »
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Thanks a lot Geet-di........and nice lines again... Applause Applause Applause

Wo ab tak Ajnabi hai jo tere khayalon mai chhaya hai
Jiska aksh aankhen band karte he saamne tere aata hai

Us ajnabi k jikra se tera rom rom pulkit ho uthta hai
Bataa sakhee kya haale dil hoga tera jab wo rubru hoga


Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 24, 2010, 01:19:13 PM
thnx sweetu...n nce lines too...

Vo waisa hai jaise ek phool ki kali hoti hai,
uske aane se merra rom rom khil jata hai,
kabhi agar lagta hai vo mujhse door hai..
tou palke band karti hu aur vo nigaho mein mil jata hai......
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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2010, 06:41:59 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Borkenbyluv Ji And Koyal Ji....


  Tune Mujhse Din Men Khwab Bunwa Liye
  Tune Raaton Mein B Apna Asar Kar Diya

  Pehle To Ye Kbhi Ehsas Na Hua Tha Hume
  Aey Mere Ajnabee Yeh Tune Kya Kar Diya..!
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«Reply #17 on: January 24, 2010, 06:43:21 PM »
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Bahut khoob Geet ji,Koyal ji,HumDum ji.lovely lines.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: January 24, 2010, 06:57:49 PM »
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Thanks Hum_Dum ji.....

Quote from: HUM_DUM on January 24, 2010, 06:41:59 PM
Bahut Khoob Borkenbyluv Ji And Koyal Ji....


  Tune Mujhse Din Men Khwab Bunwa Liye
  Tune Raaton Mein B Apna Asar Kar Diya

  Pehle To Ye Kbhi Ehsas Na Hua Tha Hume
  Aey Mere Ajnabee Yeh Tune Kya Kar Diya..!
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«Reply #19 on: January 24, 2010, 07:00:20 PM »
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Thanks Madhu-di for appreciating my lines.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: madhuwesh on January 24, 2010, 06:43:21 PM
Bahut khoob Geet ji,Koyal ji,HumDum ji.lovely lines.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: January 24, 2010, 07:12:03 PM »
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Thnx alot madhu ji,koyal n hum dum ji bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai apne....Applause Applause  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 
Jis pal vo merre kareeb hoga,
sach mano merra haal bahut ajeeb hoga,
na muskura paungi na use palko pe saja paungi..
bus smjh lungi ki us pal merra pyar sab se khushnaseeb hoga...
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«Reply #21 on: January 25, 2010, 08:30:40 AM »
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Kamaal ke likha aapne bhi Shihab ji,bahut hi khoob.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: January 25, 2010, 08:41:11 AM »
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Waah Bhai Waah. Kyaa baat hai.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai hai Geet.

Aur kya khoob Mehfil saji hai.. Bahoot Khoob

Good WOrk Koyal, Hum DUM, Shihab !

Main B likhungi thodi der baad... Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: January 25, 2010, 01:06:03 PM »
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Shukriya Geet-di.....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 24, 2010, 07:12:03 PM
Thnx alot madhu ji,koyal n hum dum ji bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai apne....Applause Applause  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 
Jis pal vo merre kareeb hoga,
sach mano merra haal bahut ajeeb hoga,
na muskura paungi na use palko pe saja paungi..
bus smjh lungi ki us pal merra pyar sab se khushnaseeb hoga...
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«Reply #24 on: January 25, 2010, 01:07:34 PM »
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Thanks a lot Divya-di.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: Sophi on January 25, 2010, 08:41:11 AM
Waah Bhai Waah. Kyaa baat hai.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai hai Geet.

Aur kya khoob Mehfil saji hai.. Bahoot Khoob

Good WOrk Koyal, Hum DUM, Shihab !

Main B likhungi thodi der baad... Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: January 25, 2010, 01:35:29 PM »
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thnx alot sophi ji... notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #26 on: January 26, 2010, 01:37:31 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 21, 2010, 06:51:49 PM
Yu achanak merre daaman mein khushiya bharne wale ajnabi,
tu merri dhadkan banta jaa raha hai,

merri shanath kahiin kho gyi thi iss jahan mein,
tu mujhe khud se rubaru karta jaa raha hai,

apni masum nigaho se aur apni natkhat baato se,
tu merri ruh mein tadap bharta jaa raha hai,

kis jahan ka musafir hai tu mujhe ye tou bata jaa..
jo mujhe bina jaane apni zindgi mein shaamil karta jaa raha hai......

Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Lajawab alfaaz likhe Hain aapne.. Agar Is Qalaam Me Sacchai Hai aapne to Hum yehi dua karte Hain ki wo Ajnabhi jaldi hi aapne Zindgi Me aaye... Applause Applause



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«Reply #27 on: January 26, 2010, 02:09:34 PM »
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haayee........kitna pyaara likha hai aapne bbl ji...wonderful... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

bahut khoob koyal... Hum Dum ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sahihab ji kamaal ki lines likhi hai aapne.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: January 26, 2010, 06:44:04 PM »
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Dhanyawaad puja-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Quote from: Nikhaar on January 26, 2010, 02:09:34 PM
haayee........kitna pyaara likha hai aapne bbl ji...wonderful... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

bahut khoob koyal... Hum Dum ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sahihab ji kamaal ki lines likhi hai aapne.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #29 on: January 27, 2010, 03:57:50 PM »
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thnx alot mann ji apki duao k liye..sachai hai ya nhi ye tou padhne wale hi bata sakte hai maine tou bus apne jazbbat apni kavita mein likh diye hai..milne bichadne ka tou pata nhi haan har faisle sirrf uper wale pe chhod diya hai..kayi baar zindgi mein aese mod ajate hai jab hame saare faisle uper wale pe chhodne padte hai....thnx once again...

thnx alot nikhar ji..notworthy
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