Merri zaat...

by brokenbyluv on October 24, 2010, 12:35:25 PM
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Apni mhbt per tou mujhe aaj bhi naaz hai,
per shayad abhi waqt mujhse bahut naraaz hai,

suna hai merra ashiya suni hai merri muskaan bhi,
khushi bhi kuch door hai mujhse jane ye kaisa raaz hai,

yu tou dikhaye bahut sapne kismat ne,
poora ek bhi nhi kiya ye zindgi bahut dhokhebaaz hai,

kabhi ek dard uthta hai ishq ka kabhi sukoon rehta hai,
alag alag ehsas hai har lamhe mein mhbt ka bhi kya khoob andaaz hai,

koi hulchul nhi lag rahi abhi merri shayari mein,
mujhe hai yakin pahuch jayegi us tak ye jo merre pyar ki awaaz hai,

tham si jati hai dhadkane kisiki yad se,
per deed nhi ho pata nigaho ko is baat se zara aetraaz hai,

jitna chahe jalale jitna chahe azmaale duniya..
yakinan iss GEET ki zaat mhbt mein hamesha hi jaanbaaz hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2010, 10:50:32 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut hi pyaara .. bahut umda...

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aaj raat andheri hai to kya roshan sawera ho hi jaayega,
aaj tumse waqt naraaz hai to kya kal meherbaan ho hi jaayega,

aaj suni har raah hai to kya hua kal koi humsafar mil hi jaayega,
aaj aankhon me aansoo hai to kya hua kal dard khatam ho hi jaayega,

aaj koi sapna adhura hai to kya hua kal har khwab poora ho hi jaayega,
aaj tumhaare labz khaamosh hain to kya hua kal inme koi gazal saj hi jaayega,

dhunti hai aaj ye aankhen kisiko, kal uska deedar ho hi jaayega,
tadap hai usse milne ki seene me to kya hua kal usse mulaquat ho hi jaayega,

aaj har "Geet" me dard hai to kya hua kal kisi "Hriday" ko pyaar aa hi jaayega,
aaj ki dhalti shaam andheri hai to kya hua kal sawere suraj aasmaan me aa hi jaayega...
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2010, 10:06:37 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 24, 2010, 12:35:25 PM




Apni mhbt per tou mujhe aaj bhi naaz hai,
per shayad abhi waqt mujhse bahut naraaz hai,

suna hai merra ashiya suni hai merri muskaan bhi,
khushi bhi kuch door hai mujhse jane ye kaisa raaz hai,

yu tou dikhaye bahut sapne kismat ne,
poora ek bhi nhi kiya ye zindgi bahut dhokhebaaz hai,

kabhi ek dard uthta hai ishq ka kabhi sukoon rehta hai,
alag alag ehsas hai har lamhe mein mhbt ka bhi kya khoob andaaz hai,

koi hulchul nhi lag rahi abhi merri shayari mein,
mujhe hai yakin pahuch jayegi us tak ye jo merre pyar ki awaaz hai,

tham si jati hai dhadkane kisiki yad se,
per deed nhi ho pata nigaho ko is baat se zara aetraaz hai,

jitna chahe jalale jitna chahe azmaale duniya..
yakinan iss GEET ki zaat mhbt mein hamesha hi jaanbaaz hai.........

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut khoob Geetji..

Ohi Humesha Di Tarah Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan!!!

Tuadi Gal Hi Kuch Hor Hai.. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 04:07:24 PM »
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Bahut bahut shurkiya kapil ji,shihab ji n khwaish ji..

kapil ji bahut khoob reply kiya hai apne...bahut khoob...
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2010, 06:20:03 AM »
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Aapki Is Nazm ki Taareef Ke Liye Mere Paas Lafz Nahi Hain Geet Ji..!!

Bas yeh Taaliyaan Hain.. In Taaliyon ke sath Daad Kubool kijiyega.. !! icon_thumleft

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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2010, 07:33:57 AM »
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woww geet di mast lkha he bahut badhiya ...

i like the way all words are goin ...

feel hi bahut pyara hai...lage raho dher sarii daad~
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2010, 04:46:04 PM »
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Bahut bahut aur bahut shukriya mann ji n abhi...Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2010, 08:06:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 25, 2010, 04:07:24 PM
Bahut bahut shurkiya kapil ji,shihab ji n khwaish ji..

kapil ji bahut khoob reply kiya hai apne...bahut khoob...
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2010, 02:31:24 PM »
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Welcome ji...
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«Reply #9 on: October 28, 2010, 03:24:41 PM »
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inn lafjon ki tarif k liye lafj nahi ...... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....
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«Reply #10 on: October 28, 2010, 03:33:00 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya nikhaar ji........
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