Milan Aur Judai

by neelgold on April 09, 2010, 10:54:58 PM
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Raat ki Tanhiyon main App ko Yaad karte hai
Aap ka jikar chand sitron main karte hai
Log hum se aksar yeh kethe hai ,
Hum khwabo main b Aap ka Naam pukara karte hai

Intzar hoga shyed aap ko bi,
 Ho sakta hai izhar na karte ho
Log kuch bi bloe hume yeh yakin ni hai
Ki App hum se pyar na karte ho

Milan jarori nahi har riste main
Par yeh bi jarori nahi har riste ka Anth Judai ho
Milan hai to Janat naseeb samzo,
Agar nahi to fir Jaag Hansai bi na ho

Milna aur bichdna to kismat ka khel hai
Anzaam kuch bi ho koi gum nahi
paar mohbat ki is duniya main kabhi ruswai na ho !!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2010, 11:06:59 PM »
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Wah! Neel Ji
Bahut umda lekhni hai aap ki
Likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2010, 11:10:55 PM »
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Thanx Rajesh ji ...
Really thanx a lot ..
Likhna nai aata yaha se sab ko dekh ke seekh rehi hoon ..

But thnx for ur appericiation!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2010, 11:23:31 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne Neel... really too good. main kin shabdon me aapke is kavita ki taarif karun soch raha hoon. 3rd para mujhe sabse pyara laga. bahut bahut khoob Neel. It's simply superb. sahi me aapke likhne ki ek alag hi shaily hai. bahut khoob likhti hain aap.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mohabbat ka anjaam to hamesha haseen hota hai,
kabhi hum nahi samajhte , kabhi mohabbat nahi samajhta hai..
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 06:09:43 AM »
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Bahot achhi poem hai Neel ji. Keep writing.
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 02:16:10 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai       Neelgold ji.....


Milan aur judai toh naseeb ka khel hota hai
isiliye koi juda hota hai, kiska mel hota hai
kisika pyar mile na mile magar dosti hamesha bani rahe
rishton mein darar na aaye yahi toh rishton mein aitbar hota hai..
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 03:59:15 PM »
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bahut hi khoob neel ji...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2010, 11:31:17 AM »
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bahut khoob neelji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2010, 01:40:39 PM »
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OMG itni tarif .....
THanx ......

Ur lyns r also tooooooo gudddddddddddddd
Relly Thanx
Quote from: klaskar on April 09, 2010, 11:23:31 PM
Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne Neel... really too good. main kin shabdon me aapke is kavita ki taarif karun soch raha hoon. 3rd para mujhe sabse pyara laga. bahut bahut khoob Neel. It's simply superb. sahi me aapke likhne ki ek alag hi shaily hai. bahut khoob likhti hain aap.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mohabbat ka anjaam to hamesha haseen hota hai,
kabhi hum nahi samajhte , kabhi mohabbat nahi samajhta hai..
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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2010, 01:41:46 PM »
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THnx Riyaz.........
Thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quote from: riyaz106 on April 10, 2010, 06:09:43 AM
Bahot achhi poem hai Neel ji. Keep writing.
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2010, 01:48:17 PM »
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Kya baat hai Cara Ji ..... Thnx ..
Vry vll said .....

Judai ho to b tum Gum na karna,
Apne Dost(Mohabat) ke liye kabhi ankhian Num na karna,
Dosti Juda bi ho to b Dilo main diyae ki tarh Jalti hai...
Tum isski Lo(Roshni) kabhi Kum na Karna
Quote from: cara on April 10, 2010, 02:16:10 PM
Wah kya baat hai       Neelgold ji.....


Milan aur judai toh naseeb ka khel hota hai
isiliye koi juda hota hai, kiska mel hota hai
kisika pyar mile na mile magar dosti hamesha bani rahe
rishton mein darar na aaye yahi toh rishton mein aitbar hota hai..
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2010, 01:54:21 PM »
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Kapil App ke liye..

Mohbat karta hai to Anjam ki parva na kaar..
Mohbat juda bi to b tu gum na kaar.....

Quote from: klaskar on April 09, 2010, 11:23:31 PM
Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne Neel... really too good. main kin shabdon me aapke is kavita ki taarif karun soch raha hoon. 3rd para mujhe sabse pyara laga. bahut bahut khoob Neel. It's simply superb. sahi me aapke likhne ki ek alag hi shaily hai. bahut khoob likhti hain aap.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mohabbat ka anjaam to hamesha haseen hota hai,
kabhi hum nahi samajhte , kabhi mohabbat nahi samajhta hai..
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2010, 01:55:12 PM »
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Thanx Nikhaar & SUresh ji
Relly lots of thanx

 ji ......
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 11, 2010, 11:31:17 AM
bahut khoob neelji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2010, 06:39:32 PM »
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Thanx Neel...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 11, 2010, 01:40:39 PM
OMG itni tarif .....
THanx ......

Ur lyns r also tooooooo gudddddddddddddd
Relly Thanx
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2010, 06:43:18 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai aapne....

Mohabbat hota wo nasha hai jisme mohabbat k siwa kuch nahi hota,
Chahe mohabbat me taajmahal banado par mohabbat se wo haseen nahi hota....

Quote from: neelgold on April 11, 2010, 01:54:21 PM
Kapil App ke liye..

Mohbat karta hai to Anjam ki parva na kaar..
Mohbat juda bi to b tu gum na kaar.....
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