Milan ki aas.............. (Sona)

by neelgold on September 24, 2010, 10:45:07 PM
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Ek zamana ho gaya tumko mile hue,Kuch bi kehe aur kuch sune hue
ek baar to fir se pukar jao tum,Ah ke fir se gale se laga jao tum
 
Koi gila, shikva  ya shkiyaat na karenge, par mudat ho gaye koi shikva sune hue
Fir se mera nakhra utha jao tum, Main roothi hoon ah ke mana jao tum
aah ke fir se gale.....

Do meethe bol to bol do ab , sadyian ho gaye koi geet sune hue
Ek bar  fir se voh dhun gungunao tum, kano main fir se voh nagma suna jao tum
aah ke fir se......

Bethe hai milan ke intzaar main , saalo guzar gaye tume se bichde hue
ab to ek pyari se zalak dikha jao tum, Aah ke fir se voh AAS bandha jao tum
 Ek baar fir se pukar jao tum,
ah ke fir se gale se laga jao tum ....
 
........SONA..........
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2010, 10:53:53 PM »
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Wow Neel ji.heart touching and mindblowing cretion.bahut pasand aayi aapke poem.kitne sawaal hai aapke mann mein,jawab hi nahi milti kabhi kabhi in sawalo ka.excellent.sirf dard nazar aa rahi hai.keep it up.hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2010, 10:56:35 PM »
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MY GOD madhu ji itni tareef ......... thanks a lot ......

Baat sochne ki hai

HUme sawalo ke jawab milte hai kaha
Jawab jo bi milte hai voh sawalo main hi ulze hue hote hai

Tons of thnx tym diya aapne Aur itni sari tareef ki ....Usual Smile

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 24, 2010, 10:53:53 PM
Wow Neel ji.heart touching and mindblowing cretion.bahut pasand aayi aapke poem.kitne sawaal hai aapke mann mein,jawab hi nahi milti kabhi kabhi in sawalo ka.excellent.sirf dard nazar aa rahi hai.keep it up.hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2010, 11:27:21 PM »
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Wah! bahut khoob Neel Ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2010, 11:30:52 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoobsurti se apni bechaini ko shabdon me utaara hai.. bahut khoob likha hai.. khelti khelte jab aap achanak se chup ho gayi tabhi mujhe samajha a gaya tah ki kuch special aane waala hai YO pe aur bahut hi special aaya ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2010, 12:13:11 AM »
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Neel Jee aadaab!

behad khoob likha hai aapne..... Ahsaas o khayaal bhi umdaa lage hume aur bayaani bhi.... Dil daad kabool kijiye...

Aise hi likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2010, 02:54:41 AM »
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Bohta Khoob Neelgold Ji.
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2010, 07:01:02 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        NEELGOLD JI......

EK ZAMANA HO GAYA HUMKO TUMSE BICHDE
SACH KAHUN TAB MANN MEIN IK PYAAS THEE
AUR AAJ BHI MERE MANN MEIN WAHI PYAAS HAI
KE LAUT KAR AAJAAO TUMSE "MILAN KI AAS" HAI....
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2010, 07:22:34 AM »
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wah ji bahut khoob he ..mast ekdam~
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2010, 03:51:36 PM »
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Neel Ji Behad Khubsoorat aur Dil Ko Chhoo Jane Wali Peshkash Hai aapki.. Aaj Pahali baar aapko Padhne ke Mauka Mila.. aur Basssss aapke Alfaazon ke Kaayal ho gaye.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause

Mohabbat Bhari Is Pyari si Peshkash Ke Liye Daad Kubool karen Dil se.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2010, 05:49:56 PM »
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bohot badiya..keep it up !!
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2010, 07:35:24 PM »
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shukriya ji ...jeet ji

Quote from: maninder.jeet.singh on September 25, 2010, 05:49:56 PM
bohot badiya..keep it up !!
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2010, 07:43:50 PM »
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Thanks Rajesh

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 24, 2010, 11:27:21 PM
Wah! bahut khoob Neel Ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2010, 08:20:44 PM »
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Ek adhuree pyaas jo mann ko adheer tou kar jaati hai par....
Swabhimaan kahu ya Aham ya Jidd....jo rukaavat bahn jaati hai....
Chah milan ki dono taraf hai par pehle kaun pukaare....?
Es communication k gap me...jindagi k routine me barso beet gaye....

Sonaji dil ko chhuti hui ye aapki rachna behad achhi hai jeeeeeeeee Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Na unse aaya gayaa na tumse bulaaya gayaa
Likh likh k khaton ko pani me bahaaya gayaa

Pyaar se jayaada oonche ho gaye aham dilo ke
Naa tum se jhuka gayaa naa unnse jhuka gayaa



Quote from: neelgold on September 24, 2010, 10:45:07 PM
Ek zamana ho gaya tumko mile hue,Kuch bi kehe aur kuch sune hue
ek baar to fir se pukar jao tum,Ah ke fir se gale se laga jao tum
 
Koi gila, shikva  ya shkiyaat na karenge, par mudat ho gaye koi shikva sune hue
Fir se mera nakhra utha jao tum, Main roothi hoon ah ke mana jao tum
aah ke fir se gale.....

Do meethe bol to bol do ab , sadyian ho gaye koi geet sune hue
Ek bar  fir se voh dhun gungunao tum, kano main fir se voh nagma suna jao tum
aah ke fir se......

Bethe hai milan ke intzaar main , saalo guzar gaye tume se bichde hue
ab to ek pyari se zalak dikha jao tum, Aah ke fir se voh AAS bandha jao tum
 Ek baar fir se pukar jao tum,
ah ke fir se gale se laga jao tum ....
 
........SONA..........
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2010, 08:21:49 PM »
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Hey bagwaan Kapil ....... yeh tumne kya kiya yaar..
i alwys xpect reply from u wid ur beautiful creation ... tum har baar reply shaer main karte ho ......aaaj kya ho gaya ji ..

Vaise itne ache comnt ke liye thnx hai ji ...
kabool kizyega

vaise vaiting for ur reply ... dis is nt kapil's raply .. wat u say ?

Quote from: klaskar on September 24, 2010, 11:30:52 PM
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bahut khoobsurti se apni bechaini ko shabdon me utaara hai.. bahut khoob likha hai.. khelti khelte jab aap achanak se chup ho gayi tabhi mujhe samajha a gaya tah ki kuch special aane waala hai YO pe aur bahut hi special aaya ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!!
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