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«Reply #15 on: September 25, 2010, 08:23:39 PM » |
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Parwaaz ji .....
Appki daad ke liye dil se shukriya hai ji
Jab aap dil se daad dete hai na voh dil taak hi poonchti hai ji ..
shukriya ...
Keep smiling .......
Neel Jee aadaab!
behad khoob likha hai aapne..... Ahsaas o khayaal bhi umdaa lage hume aur bayaani bhi.... Dil daad kabool kijiye...
Aise hi likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez..... 
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«Reply #16 on: September 25, 2010, 08:24:33 PM » |
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Hi Yash ..... Wc to Yo Thanks a lot for ur compliment... Bohta Khoob Neelgold Ji.
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«Reply #17 on: September 25, 2010, 08:26:55 PM » |
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Cara ji ...... Kya baat hai ji ... Bhut umda kaha aapne ..
Roz yeh AAs toot jati hai aur hum roz isko bandha jate hai
Har roz tum nahi aate ho aur hum roz Ashq baha jate hai
WAH KYA BAAT HAI NEELGOLD JI......
EK ZAMANA HO GAYA HUMKO TUMSE BICHDE
SACH KAHUN TAB MANN MEIN IK PYAAS THEE
AUR AAJ BHI MERE MANN MEIN WAHI PYAAS HAI
KE LAUT KAR AAJAAO TUMSE "MILAN KI AAS" HAI....
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«Reply #19 on: September 25, 2010, 08:34:04 PM » |
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thnax Abhi
wah ji bahut khoob he ..mast ekdam~
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«Reply #20 on: September 25, 2010, 08:38:21 PM » |
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yes, this isn't Kapil's style. Reply bana nahi. bante hi reply karunga. Hey bagwaan Kapil ....... yeh tumne kya kiya yaar..
i alwys xpect reply from u wid ur beautiful creation ... tum har baar reply shaer main karte ho ......aaaj kya ho gaya ji ..
Vaise itne ache comnt ke liye thnx hai ji ...
kabool kizyega
vaise vaiting for ur reply ... dis is nt kapil's raply .. wat u say ?
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«Reply #21 on: September 25, 2010, 08:41:16 PM » |
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aap bhi shayar ho gaye ... pehchaana hume ?
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«Reply #22 on: September 25, 2010, 08:42:07 PM » |
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MY God Anaam Ji .... FIDA....
Kya reply diya aapne .....
aab iksa reply bi koi sakta hai sochne ki baat hai yaar main to choti si simple se words main likhne vali bechari kya reply doon ...let me think ..
Fasle itne badh gaye ki fir teh kar hi na paye hum
Na do kadam unno ne badya aur na hi kadam utha paye hum
dooryian itni badi ki fir voh ek deewaar ban gaye
Usse na fir voh todh paye aur na hi todh paye hum...
Ek choti si khosish........
bt THanks ji bhut bhut aapka.......
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«Reply #23 on: September 25, 2010, 08:43:11 PM » |
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Pehchan kon ? yaar yeh game hume nahi aata aap hi bata do na kon ho aap ? aap bhi shayar ho gaye ... pehchaana hume ?
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«Reply #24 on: September 25, 2010, 08:44:10 PM » |
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vaiting dear
yes, this isn't Kapil's style. Reply bana nahi. bante hi reply karunga.
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«Reply #26 on: September 26, 2010, 07:55:30 AM » |
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Mast reply kiya he Sonaji aapne.....Wah kya baat he jeeeeeeeeeeeeee  Fasle-Dooriyen-Deewar bhi rok na paaye Pyaar ki pyaas
Dil kay kisee kone me palti rahi hamesha ek Milan ki aas
Naa jaane kab woh din aayega,jo mujhe tujhse milaayega
Sochhta hu kya intezaar me he saara jeevan beet jaayega
MY God Anaam Ji .... FIDA....
Kya reply diya aapne .....
aab iksa reply bi koi sakta hai sochne ki baat hai yaar main to choti si simple se words main likhne vali bechari kya reply doon ...let me think ..
Fasle itne badh gaye ki fir teh kar hi na paye hum
Na do kadam unno ne badya aur na hi kadam utha paye hum
dooryian itni badi ki fir voh ek deewaar ban gaye
Usse na fir voh todh paye aur na hi todh paye hum...
Ek choti si khosish........
bt THanks ji bhut bhut aapka.......
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«Reply #27 on: September 26, 2010, 05:46:37 PM » |
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thanks a lot Badal ji bahut khub sona ji  |
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«Reply #28 on: September 26, 2010, 06:03:43 PM » |
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Wah ji Wah ..... Bhut khoob likha aapne..
Ek tere milan ki aas main aaj talak ahain hum bharte hai
Har subh aur sham sirf tere Intzaar hum karte hai
Hath main bethe hai har paal jalte hue diye le ke
Inki Lo se tere liye roshan haar dar-o- deewar hum karte hai
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«Reply #29 on: September 26, 2010, 07:00:23 PM » |
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Thanks Shihab ji ....
Ys apki kami to mehsos ho rehi thi ...
Der aye dursat aaye ....
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bohat Khoob Neel Ji
Mafi Chahta Hun Derri Se DekhneKe Liye...
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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