milan ki bekarari __"Raahi"

by Rahi2001 on September 08, 2010, 10:45:56 AM
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janm janmon se tha milne ka intajaar hamen
aaj mile hai yakin khud pe hota nahi

uska aanaa ke jaise ho gayi subah jindagi me
chant gayegam mere gamon ko maine toka nahi

har pal chhu ke use mai ye yakin karta hu
samne baithe hai wo aankhon ko bharosa nahi

kaid karlon unhen in aankhon ko tasveer bana don
kal kya ho pata nahi maine b socha nahi

e-waqt ruk jara uski aagosh me mujhe jane de
bahut kiya hu intajaar mai sadiyon se sota nahi

jism-o-dil ka milan ho raha hai ab yaron
waqt aur haalaat ne aaj hamen rooka nahi

aansu ab bhi bah rahe hai meri aankhon se  
mujhe kasam hai magar aaj mai rota nahi

hai nasha uske muskurate labon par "Rahi"
chadh raha hai surur hosh mai khota nahi



~~~~~~~Raahi~~~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2010, 10:54:13 AM »
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bahut achche Rahi ji.. bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2010, 11:00:30 AM »
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Waah behad khubsurat ehsas hai raahi ji aur utni hi khubsuarti se apne likha b hai........
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2010, 08:24:02 PM »
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Rahi jee aadaab ......!

kafi achche khayaal bayaN kiye hai janab... Kuch aik ashaar bahut umdaa rahe daad Janab......

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har pal chhu ke use mai ye yakin karta hu
samne baithe hai wo aankhon ko bharosa nahi

kaid karlon unhen in aankhon ko tasveer bana don
kal kya ho pata nahi maine b socha nahi

aansu ab bhi bah rahe hai meri aankhon se 
mujhe kasam hai magar aaj mai rota nahi

hai nasha uske muskurate labon par "Rahi"
chadh raha hai surur hosh mai khota nahi



~~~~~~~Raahi~~~~~~~~

Bahut khoob likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2010, 08:42:26 PM »
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Rahi ji ......... Kya baat hai janab .......

Bhut khoob ...........
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2010, 05:07:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob Raahi Ji
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