Milke Wo Mujhse...

by Iqtedar on July 23, 2013, 06:38:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2013, 01:32:38 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoob iqtedar bhai..happy9
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«Reply #16 on: July 24, 2013, 06:46:27 AM »
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Milke wo mujhse mujhko masroor kar diye
Sab doston may mujhko maghroor kar diye
this is not clear to me,sir
Basti ka ek shaqs bhi mujhse na tha waqhif
Ab saarey shahr may mujhe mashoor kar diye

Ab unke bina pal ko bhi main ji nahi sakta
Kuch is tarha se mujhko wo majboor kar diye

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.


good one,sir
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«Reply #17 on: July 24, 2013, 10:24:06 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #18 on: July 24, 2013, 01:19:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #19 on: July 24, 2013, 05:40:57 PM »
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Dear Ravi Sagar ji, Bansi Dhameja ji, Nashwani bhai, M. Bahayaat ji, PoonamA ji, Prasad ji - sabka bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: July 24, 2013, 05:47:24 PM »
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good one,sir
Bhai Bahayaat - don't be confused, this Saher/Shahr or Shaher is my city "Hyderabad" Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Bhai thanks for your comments...
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«Reply #21 on: July 25, 2013, 12:54:42 AM »
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Bhai Bahayaat - don't be confused, this Saher/Shahr or Shaher is my city "Hyderabad" Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Bhai thanks for your comments...


mr. iqtedar,
 its very nice that you are hailing from hyderabad .

but actually my concern is about the ist sher that i could not under stand the very sher .please explain if not a troublesome for you. thank you,sir
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«Reply #22 on: July 25, 2013, 07:02:36 PM »
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mr. iqtedar,
 its very nice that you are hailing from hyderabad .

but actually my concern is about the ist sher that i could not under stand the very sher .please explain if not a troublesome for you. thank you,sir
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Bhai I will try to explain the whole...
Milke wo mujhse mujhko masroor kar diye
(unka milna mere liye baas-e-masaraat raha, main masroor hogaya)
Sab doston may mujhko maghroor kar diye
(mere circle se jab unhon ne mera inteqhab kiya to mujh may ghuroor aagaya ke main sab se behtar hoon, aur is eshaas ne mujhe apne group/doston may maghroor bana diya)
Basti ka ek shaqs bhi mujhse na tha waqhif
(locality ka koi bhi shaqs mujhe janta pahechata nahi tha)
Ab saarey saher may mujhe mashoor kar diye
(par unko paane ke baad unki tawasut se mujhe saara shaher janne laga, unki wajhe se main mashoor hogaya)
Ab unke bina pal ko bhi main ji nahi sakta
(ab ek pal bhi main unke baghaer ji nahi sakta)
Kuch is tarha se mujhko wo majboor kar diye
(unka ishq mujhe itna bebas/lachaar aur majboor kardiya ke main unke bina ji nahi sakta)

i think it's ok - waese jab ham ashaar likhte hain, tab ki sonch agar kisi ko batane ki himmat ya jurrat karen to ek sher ke khulase ke liye ek din bhi kam pad jayega - kyonke jab sher likha jaata hai tab dil aur dimagh ki kaefiyat hi kuch aur hoti hai, aur us kaefiyat ko bayan karna aasaan kaam nahi hota...
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