~*Milna hai tumse yeh kahte hain*~

by honeyrose on June 05, 2008, 06:27:29 AM
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Buhat muskhil se iss muhabbat ko chhupaya
Intezaar karte karte humne iss muhabbat ko rulaya
 
Milna hai tumse yeh kahte hain hum dilse
Kuch na chaahun main muhabbat mile hamen sirf tumse
 
Kaanch ki chudiyan pahna do apne haathon se ab to
Kalaiyaan taras rahin iss intazaar men kab se ab to
 
Japti hun tumhara naam na maangun kuchh tumhare siwa
Jee nahin paaungi men ab tere pyar ke bina
 
Aankhon men basa hai tumhara hi dilnasheen chahra
Khushi hogi agar banaado mujhe apne aangan ki mahima
 
labon pe aaya hai sharam ka taraana dekho zara sajna
Kis roz karoge mere man men basera batlao zara sajna
 
Har waqt dekhte hain aapki tasveer laga kar dilse
Bas "Honeyrose" ka tan man hua aapke naam dilse
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2008, 07:13:45 AM »
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very good jayadi
ab pata chala ki aap pyar se kitna pyar karti hain
good work
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2008, 08:59:08 AM »
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very good jayadi
ab pata chala ki aap pyar se kitna pyar karti hain
good work
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Shukriya diya sis..Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2008, 09:13:26 AM »
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good work honeyrose ji
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2008, 01:13:46 PM »
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Thanks kaushikbhawna ji..


Mere dard ki geheraiyon ko kab samaj paoge
Ek na ek din meri muhabbat ko aapnaoge

Tadapte rahe aapni muhabbat ko kab samaj paoge
Zindagi ka safar nahi kathe kah na paayenge

Bhoolne si bhi na humhe tum bhoola paoge
Mere dard ki geheraiyon ko kab samaj paoge
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2008, 06:07:45 PM »
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Wonderful jee wonderful,,,  aap ne to record tod diye...
Yunhi sab ko hilado...
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2008, 05:56:13 AM »
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Wonderful jee wonderful,,,  aap ne to record tod diye...
Yunhi sab ko hilado...

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Shukriya Syed aapka..Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2008, 06:15:38 AM »
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Buhat muskhil se iss muhabbat ko chhupaya
Intezaar karte karte humne iss muhabbat ko rulaya
 
Milna hai tumse yeh kahte hain hum dilse
Kuch na chaahun main muhabbat mile hamen sirf tumse
 
Kaanch ki chudiyan pahna do apne haathon se ab to
Kalaiyaan taras rahin iss intazaar men kab se ab to
 
Japti hun tumhara naam na maangun kuchh tumhare siwa
Jee nahin paaungi men ab tere pyar ke bina
 
Aankhon men basa hai tumhara hi dilnasheen chahra
Khushi hogi agar banaado mujhe apne aangan ki mahima
 
labon pe aaya hai sharam ka taraana dekho zara sajna
Kis roz karoge mere man men basera batlao zara sajna
 
Har waqt dekhte hain aapki tasveer laga kar dilse
Bas "Honeyrose" ka tan man hua aapke naam dilse

Thanks kaushikbhawna ji..


Mere dard ki geheraiyon ko kab samaj paoge
Ek na ek din meri muhabbat ko aapnaoge

Tadapte rahe aapni muhabbat ko kab samaj paoge
Zindagi ka safar nahi kathe kah na paayenge

Bhoolne si bhi na humhe tum bhoola paoge
Mere dard ki geheraiyon ko kab samaj paoge



very nice wordings....bahoot khoob honey ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2008, 06:19:58 AM »
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wah di wah..kya khoob likha hai aapne... bahot hi acha hai ..bas yun likhte raho...
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2008, 06:35:10 AM »
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very nice wordings....bahoot khoob honey ji

Shukriya bekarar ji aap bhi kuch likhte to khushi hoti


wah di wah..kya khoob likha hai aapne... bahot hi acha hai ..bas yun likhte raho...

Shukriya punam dear aapka aap bhi kuch likhte to khushi hoti dear...
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2008, 10:37:37 AM »
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Thanks kaushikbhawna ji..


Mere dard ki geheraiyon ko kab samaj paoge
Ek na ek din meri muhabbat ko aapnaoge

Tadapte rahe aapni muhabbat ko kab samaj paoge
Zindagi ka safar nahi kathe kah na paayenge

Bhoolne si bhi na humhe tum bhoola paoge
Mere dard ki geheraiyon ko kab samaj paoge


bahut khoob jaya di
aapne bahut accha likha hai
i m flatterred!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2008, 11:01:18 AM »
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bahut khoob jaya di
aapne bahut accha likha hai
i m flatterred!!!

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Shukriya diya dear..
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2008, 05:43:44 PM »
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Kya baat kahi dilse, bohot khoob honeyrose ji.


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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2008, 08:44:21 AM »
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Kya baat kahi dilse, bohot khoob honeyrose ji.




Shukriya Sayyid Randeri ji..
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2008, 01:22:16 PM »
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Buhat muskhil se iss muhabbat ko chhupaya
Intezaar karte karte humne iss muhabbat ko rulaya
 
Milna hai tumse yeh kahte hain hum dilse
Kuch na chaahun main muhabbat mile hamen sirf tumse
 
Kaanch ki chudiyan pahna do apne haathon se ab to
Kalaiyaan taras rahin iss intazaar men kab se ab to
 
Japti hun tumhara naam na maangun kuchh tumhare siwa
Jee nahin paaungi men ab tere pyar ke bina
 
Aankhon men basa hai tumhara hi dilnasheen chahra
Khushi hogi agar banaado mujhe apne aangan ki mahima
 
labon pe aaya hai sharam ka taraana dekho zara sajna
Kis roz karoge mere man men basera batlao zara sajna
 
Har waqt dekhte hain aapki tasveer laga kar dilse
Bas "Honeyrose" ka tan man hua aapke naam dilse


Wah wah Honeyrose really appreciable lines.... dilse keh rahi hu jee... Very Very good work.
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