Milvaado yaa Mitaado:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

tamanna1

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Yeh Kaisa imtehaan he
Yeh kaisa shiksha he

Jab meri zindagi mein
unke saat rehna na mumkin tha
tho hum dono ko
milaaya kyun

Dil mein humare
pyaar jagaaya kyun

Ab tho hum bichadgaye
beech raste pe khade
Yaadon ke sahare
Unse door rehkar besahaare

Yeh kaisa khel he
O Upar waale
Yeh kaisa khel he
tera

thoda tho rehem kar

Agar hum zindagi mein
Phir se khushiyon ke saat jeena ho

Tho humko unse milvaado
Jinko hum apni jaan maante he

Agar humare naseeb mein
Bichadnaa hi likhaa
tho
Thoda rehem karo
Unke har yaad ko
Humare dil aur dimaag se mitaado

Ab marzi teri hai
Milvaado yaa mitaado


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sarfira

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Re: Milaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2011, 04:35:39 PM »

bahot ache--

thoda spellings thik kar lijiye bas


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tamanna1

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Re: Milvaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2011, 04:41:31 PM »

sarfira ji..

Please help keejiye...kahan spellings change karna he muje aur correct spellings bathaayine na please.


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saahill

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Re: Milvaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2011, 05:10:16 PM »

acha likha hai apne real ehsas


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Re: Milvaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2011, 05:47:25 PM »

bahut khub

Quote from: tamanna1 on September 15, 2011, 04:07:53 PM

Yeh Kaisa intehaam he
Yeh kaisa shiksha he

Jab meri zindagi mein
unke saat rehna na mumkin tha
tho hum dono ko
milaaya kyun

Dil mein humara
pyaar jagaaya kyun

Ab tho hum bichadgaye
beech raste pe kade
Yaadon ke sahare
Unse door rehkar besahaare

Yeh kaisa khel he
O Upar waale
Yeh kaisa khel he
tera

thoda tho rehem kar

Agar hum zindagi mein
Phir se khushiyon ke saat jeena ho

Tho humko unse milvaado
Jinko hum apni jaan maanthe he

Agar hummare naseeb mein
Bichadnaa hi likaahe
tho
Thoda rehem karo
Unke har yaad ko
Hummare dil aur dimaak se mitaado

Ab marzi teri he
Milvaado yaa mitaado


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tamanna1

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Re: Milvaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2011, 08:12:01 AM »

saahill ji aur manoj ji....shukriyaa....and thanks a lot for liking it

sarfira ji...keh rehe the kuch spelling mistakes he...aap mein se koyi muje help keejiye please correct karne ke liye....I am not that good...HELP


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mkv

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Re: Milvaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2011, 09:33:36 AM »

Imtehaan, khade, tho nahi to, maante, humare, likhaa, dimaag, marzi hai,
Accha likha hai, sabhi ehsaas bahut acche hai.


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tamanna1

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Re: Milvaado yaa Mitaado

«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2011, 04:31:21 PM »

mkv ji....thank you very much for taking the time and pointing out the spellings and helping me with the right ones...Thanks once again
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