Mizaaz Tumhari Udaasi Ka

by Nirbhay on March 01, 2007, 06:41:53 PM
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Kya baat hai ki tum itni udaas udaas sii ho
Paas paas ho tum par kyun pyaas pyaas sii ho
Hum karein pyaar ek dooje se toot kar
Kuch aaisa sama baandhey aaj kuch aisi raat ho
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2007, 05:46:52 PM »
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Puzzled !  Puzzled !
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2007, 08:23:51 PM »
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He missed a small word..

Kya baat hai ki tum itni udaas udaas sii ho
Paas paas ho tum par kyun pyaas pyaas sii ho
Hum karein pyaar ek dooje se toot kar
Kuch aaisa sama baandhey aaj kuch aisi raat  sii ho


But isn't for Khumar ae Ishq section ?
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2007, 08:41:41 PM »
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Moving from Occassion specific poetry to Khumar-e-Ishaq
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2007, 04:16:39 AM »
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Aaila.. tongue3 :D

Thanks Sirjee and Pooja Di!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2007, 04:22:12 AM »
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agge likho kuch aor tongue3
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2007, 04:33:45 AM »
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Aagey Ki Baat kuch iss Tarah se hai ki..

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Hai Khoobsurat Zindagi Bohat, Aor tum bhi Bohat Khush Sii Ho
Likhta hoon ye shayari mein, Ke tum mere Khwabon Jaisii Hi Ho
Aour Kya Likhne Hain Jazbaat-ae-Muhabaat Mere
Ye Dil hai abb Tumara, aor tum iski Dhadkan Sii Hoo..
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2007, 05:07:38 AM »
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Beautiful.... =D>

Especially the second one... Usual Smile it is providing a base to your first poetry...  Now.. First one seems complete...
But still... lot more could be added.. Usual Smile

Good Thoughts... Neer...
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2007, 05:18:17 AM »
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ki ho gaya.. kisne behka diya tumhe?

Waise Good one Neer.. bahoot badiya... !
both are good !
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2007, 10:02:18 AM »
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Bohat Dhanyawaad, Divya & Shikha!!!!

Itne time baad ye topic raise hua, ppl are appreciating this, I am very very happy for this feedback :D :D :D
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2007, 12:17:32 PM »
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Quote from: "Nirbhay"
Kya baat hai ki tum itni udaas udaas sii ho
Paas paas ho tum par kyun pyaas pyaas sii ho
Hum karein pyaar ek dooje se toot kar
Kuch aaisa sama baandhey aaj kuch aisi raat ho






 Shocked      Puzzled !
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2007, 07:50:51 PM »
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As Salam O Alaikum All...Wow Nice nirbhay ji....


Meri Zindagi Mai jaise Koi Arman si ho.
Kehti hai Arzoo dil ko tum hi to is ki akhri tamanna si ho.
jis ko dekh k milti hai khushi HAsu ko.
mere labo pe saji wo muskan si ho.....!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2007, 07:56:24 PM »
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Is Udasi mai b chupi Teri Yaad Si Hai.
door to wo hai par dil k pass si hai.
Pyaar karna apne naseeb mai kahan.
Pyaar Ki Raste mai thokar aisi hi khai hai....!!!!

Nirbhay ji ye ap k phele shair ka jawab......
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2007, 04:22:10 AM »
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Kabil-e-Tareef, Hasu!!

Heartiest Welcome @ Yo world, please introduce yourself to us @ :arrow: http://yoindia.com/forums/tarruf-yoindia-sae-give-your-introduction-vf137.html
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«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2007, 01:39:20 PM »
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Quote from: "Nirbhay"
Aagey Ki Baat kuch iss Tarah se hai ki..

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Hai Khoobsurat Zindagi Bohat, Aor tum bhi Bohat Khush Sii Ho
Likhta hoon ye shayari mein, Ke tum mere Khwabon Jaisii Hi Ho
Aour Kya Likhne Hain Jazbaat-ae-Muhabaat Mere
Ye Dil hai abb Tumara, aor tum iski Dhadkan Sii Hoo..


ahaa... kya bath hai nirbhay

Aur toda kareeb ho jata
Pyar tera naseeb ho jata

Rang tera ajeeb ab dekhu
Rang mera ajeeb ho gaya

Pyar tera agar mujhe milta
Bada khushnaseeb ho jata

Janti gar gareeb pyare hai
Mai kasam se gareeb ho jata

Phool hai "Roja" ek dali ke
Kyu alag hai naseeb ho jata?


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