Mohabaat Karne Kee Tips......Koyal

by KOYAL46 on March 16, 2011, 02:19:20 PM
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Mohabaat karne kee tips  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Nigaho se gazal aur labo se mere shayri
Churakar shayaron mai naam likhwa liya

Seene mai tune apne sheesha rakha
Aksh mera uss mai quid kar k rakha

Dil ko bacha k sheesha tudwaa diya
Tukde hazaar kiye kahin ka na rakha

Nahak he naam mera badnaam kiya
Dil ko mujhse kahaan chhupa kar rakha

Julfo me ulajh kar meri tum barbaad huye
Mohabaat me tum ayse na-kaamyaab huye

Kisi naajneen k naajo-nakhare jab Uthaaoge
Tab mohbaat karne ki kuchh tips tum Paaoge
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 02:46:25 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Mohabaat karne kee tips  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Nigaho se gazal aur labo se mere shayri
Churakar shayaron mai naam likhwa liya

Seene mai tune apne sheesha rakha
Aksh mera uss mai quid kar k rakha

Dil ko bacha k sheesha tudwaa diya
Tukde hazaar kiye kahin ka na rakha

Nahak he naam mera badnaam kiya
Dil ko mujhse kahaan chhupa kar rakha

Julfo me ulajh kar meri tum barbaad huye
Mohabaat me tum ayse na-kaamyaab huye

Kisi naajneen k naajo-nakhare jab Uthaaoge
Tab mohbaat karne ki kuchh tips tum Paaoge

Koyal Ji !! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhuu gaye ... bahut umdaa likha hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 03:30:55 PM »
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badi hi sakht jarurat thi koyal ji esi poetry ki muje

thx apne de di........

it is wonderful ji........ese hi likhti rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2011, 03:47:40 PM »
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Sweetu pata nhi chala terri kavita kahan se kahan ja rahi hai per padhne mein maza bahut aya...keep writing these kind of joyfull words..take care..
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2011, 04:56:03 AM »
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bahut khub koyalji....

 Applause Applause
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parth goyani
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2011, 05:28:38 AM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai apne...........
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2011, 10:00:24 AM »
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Anshumali ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya.....aap yu he saath dete rahiye hum yu he likhte rahenge..... wave

Koyal Ji !! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhuu gaye ... bahut umdaa likha hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2011, 07:52:27 AM »
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Are Wah Sweet Sis.. Kya Baat Hai.. Bahut Pyaare Tips hain yaaar.. Hahahaha.. Bahut Pyaare Ehasaas Likhe Hain.. Bahut Accha laga padh kar.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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