MOHABAT KA ASEER [Asghr

by Asghr on February 17, 2009, 07:57:36 PM
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IN DINO KISI KI MOHABAT KA ASEER HOOHN MAIN
WO MERI RANI HAI UHS KA VAZEER HOOHN MAIN
JO KISI K PYAR MAIN JAL KAR RAKH HO CHUKA
AISA JALA HUA AIK SHREER HOOHN MAIN
MERE PYAR KO IK BAR AZMA KAR TO DAIKHAY
WO KYA JAANE WAFA KI AIK TASVEER HOOHN MAIN
MERE SAPNO MAIN WO AAH KAR KEHTI HAI
K UHS K KHWABOHN KI TABEER HOOHN MAIN
MUJE DUNIYA KI DAULAT SE BHLA KYA LAINA
PYAR KI DAULAT MANGNE WALA FAQEER HOOHN MAIN
AISA LAGTA HAI WO ABI MERE KAAN MAIN KEHE GI
ASGHR TOO MERA RANJAH TERI HEER HOOHN MAIN
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2009, 08:03:42 PM »
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wah wah wah yah khumar-e-Ishaq ki kavita Misc main kyun Asghr ji!!! Agar appko sahi lage to main ise khumar-e-Ishaq main move karna chahti hu!!!!!

Hamesha ki tarah simple shabd, gahre arth,,, bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne... ek ek shabd madhur sangeet ko mehsoos karata hua... bahoot khoob.. Good Work, Good Creation... Beautiful Thoughts.
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2009, 08:07:44 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 17, 2009, 08:03:42 PM
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wah wah wah yah khumar-e-Ishaq ki kavita Misc main kyun Asghr ji!!! Agar appko sahi lage to main ise khumar-e-Ishaq main move karna chahti hu!!!!!

Hamesha ki tarah simple shabd, gahre arth,,, bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne... ek ek shabd madhur sangeet ko mehsoos karata hua... bahoot khoob.. Good Work, Good Creation... Beautiful Thoughts.
plz do so ,i didnt think it was up to that standard, thanks Pooja ji.asghr
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2009, 08:09:26 PM »
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Moved in Khumar-e-Ishaq from Misc. By Pooja!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2009, 08:49:23 PM »
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Asghrji achha lika he aapne....per main "ASEER" ka matlab nahi samaz saki..
Poetry me bhav aap ke bahoot ulte hain...

kram ya sequence kuchh jacha nahi..
'JAL KAR RAKH....JALA HUA SHAREER"
Iske baad kya bacha jo koi dekhega ?

Fir Tasveer tou haquikat nahi, aur sapno ka kya bharosa ?
Faqeer se aaj ki Heer NAHI kahegi,use tou daulat se he  hai lena dena...

Fir bhi khayaal apne apne hai...Bura mat lagyega, ye tou yu hi teeka kar di maine....Aal kal jamaana he kuchh aysa hai !!!


Quote from: Asghr on February 17, 2009, 07:57:36 PM

IN DINO KISI KI MOHABAT KA ASEER HOOHN MAIN
WO MERI RANI HAI UHS KA VAZEER HOOHN MAIN
JO KISI K PYAR MAIN JAL KAR RAKH HO CHUKA
AISA JALA HUA AIK SHREER HOOHN MAIN
MERE PYAR KO IK BAR AZMA KAR TO DAIKHAY
WO KYA JAANE WAFA KI AIK TASVEER HOOHN MAIN
MERE SAPNO MAIN WO AAH KAR KEHTI HAI
K UHS K KHWABOHN KI TABEER HOOHN MAIN
MUJE DUNIYA KI DAULAT SE BHLA KYA LAINA
PYAR KI DAULAT MANGNE WALA FAQEER HOOHN MAIN
AISA LAGTA HAI WO ABI MERE KAAN MAIN KEHE GI
ASGHR TOO MERA RANJAH TERI HEER HOOHN MAIN
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2009, 08:57:38 PM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 17, 2009, 07:57:36 PM

IN DINO KISI KI MOHABAT KA ASEER HOOHN MAIN
WO MERI RANI HAI UHS KA VAZEER HOOHN MAIN
JO KISI K PYAR MAIN JAL KAR RAKH HO CHUKA
AISA JALA HUA AIK SHREER HOOHN MAIN
MERE PYAR KO IK BAR AZMA KAR TO DAIKHAY
WO KYA JAANE WAFA KI AIK TASVEER HOOHN MAIN
MERE SAPNO MAIN WO AAH KAR KEHTI HAI
K UHS K KHWABOHN KI TABEER HOOHN MAIN
MUJE DUNIYA KI DAULAT SE BHLA KYA LAINA
PYAR KI DAULAT MANGNE WALA FAQEER HOOHN MAIN
AISA LAGTA HAI WO ABI MERE KAAN MAIN KEHE GI
ASGHR TOO MERA RANJAH TERI HEER HOOHN MAIN

Ek baar phir se aapne bohot khoobsurat kalaam likha hai Asghr Ji....Is ke maa'ene gehre hain jinko samajhne ke liye insaan ko is ghazal ke ek ek sher ki gehraayi main jaana hoga.....aur tabhi har sher ka maqsad samajh aa sakta hai kisi ko.!!

Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, yunhi likhte rahen !!
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 09:05:53 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 17, 2009, 08:57:38 PM
Ek baar phir se aapne bohot khoobsurat kalaam likha hai Asghr Ji....Is ke maa'ene gehre hain jinko samajhne ke liye insaan ko is ghazal ke ek ek sher ki gehraayi main jaana hoga.....aur tabhi har sher ka maqsad samajh aa sakta hai kisi ko.!!

Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji, yunhi likhte rahen !!
CELMIRA JI YEH APNI PASAND KI BAAT HAI,KISI AIK KO KOI BAAT ACHI LAGTI HAI TO DOOSRE KO WO ACHI NAHIN LAGTI WO KEHTE HAIN NA YOU CANT PLZ EVERY BODY ALL THE TIME.ASGHR
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2009, 09:11:28 PM »
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Mohabbat in dino jawaa.n hai
Mehka hua sa gulistaa.n hai

Hara bhara ek darakht wo jaise,
Jahan agar ye registaa.n hai

(Darakht = tree)

Zindagi uske bin taareek hoti,
Uske wajood se darakshaa.n hai

(Taareek = Dark; Darakshaan = Bright)

Koi aur manzar aankhon main nahin
Har taraf wo hi jalwa-numaa.n hai !!
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2009, 09:20:20 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 17, 2009, 09:11:28 PM
Mohabbat in dino jawaa.n hai
Mehka hua sa gulistaa.n hai

Hara bhara ek darakht wo jaise,
Jahan agar ye registaa.n hai

(Darakht = tree)

Zindagi uske bin taareek hoti,
Uske wajood se darakshaa.n hai

(Taareek = Dark; Darakshaan = Bright)

Koi aur manzar aankhon main nahin
Har taraf wo hi jalwa-numaa.n hai !!
KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI MAZA AAH GYA YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY KHUDA AAP KO SDAA KHUSH RAKHE.ASGHR
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2009, 09:31:00 PM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya Asghr Ji, taareef ka bhi, aur duaaon ka bhi.
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2009, 10:39:10 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob celmira!!
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2009, 11:09:05 PM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 17, 2009, 07:57:36 PM

IN DINO KISI KI MOHABAT KA ASEER HOOHN MAIN
WO MERI RANI HAI UHS KA VAZEER HOOHN MAIN
JO KISI K PYAR MAIN JAL KAR RAKH HO CHUKA
AISA JALA HUA AIK SHREER HOOHN MAIN
MERE PYAR KO IK BAR AZMA KAR TO DAIKHAY
WO KYA JAANE WAFA KI AIK TASVEER HOOHN MAIN
MERE SAPNO MAIN WO AAH KAR KEHTI HAI
K UHS K KHWABOHN KI TABEER HOOHN MAIN
MUJE DUNIYA KI DAULAT SE BHLA KYA LAINA
PYAR KI DAULAT MANGNE WALA FAQEER HOOHN MAIN
AISA LAGTA HAI WO ABI MERE KAAN MAIN KEHE GI
ASGHR TOO MERA RANJAH TERI HEER HOOHN MAIN

gud one ashgar..Vazeer
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2009, 12:14:18 AM »
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thanks Padit ji.asghr
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2009, 12:35:18 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 18, 2009, 12:14:18 AM
thanks Padit ji.asghr

u most welcome asghr....
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2009, 08:37:34 AM »
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waah Kya Khoob Ahsgr Bhaiya, Bohat Bohat Badhiya,.

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