Mohabbat aur yakeen

by klaskar on April 17, 2010, 12:06:43 PM
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humein na maloom tha ki ishq itna mushkil hoga,
humein na maloom tha ki doori itna dard degi,
hum to samajh rahe the ki mohabbat k sahare jeewan guzaar lenge,
kise pata tha ki mohabbat hi ek din hamari jaan legi,

darte nahi hain hum jaan dene se,
par darte hain hamari jaan bhi ye baat jaan legi,
kuch kiye bina hum agar saath chhod jaate hain,
hamari jaan bhi humein bewafaa maan legi,

jeewan me ek pyaar hi to hai jispe humein aetbaar hai,
yakeen hai ek din wo hamara haath thaam legi,
lag jayegi gale hamare, saanso me saanse sama jayengi,
uski dhadkane bhi tab muskuraake bas hamara naam lengi...
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2010, 12:10:34 PM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Kapil
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2010, 12:13:08 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji.. aapke hausla afzai k liye bahut bahut shukriya... tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon main aapka...!!!

Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Kapil

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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2010, 12:55:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil ji,sirf dard hi dard nazar aa rahi hai.marvelous creation.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2010, 01:32:41 PM »
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Esiliye kehte hain soch samajhkar uthaya karo kadam..... Giggle Giggle Giggle DOH DOH DOH
Wah kya kehna aapka....Pyarr ko khel aur Jaan ko khilona samajhte ho.. Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More
Mubaarak ho Aashaon par he jeevan chala karte hain...."ek din wo..." tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
humein na maloom tha ki mohabbat itn(a)i mushkil hoga,hogi
humein na maloom tha ki doori itna dard degi,
hum to samajh rahe the ki pyaar ek khel hai jeewan me,
kise pata tha ki ishq hi ek din hamari jaan leg(i)a,

darte nahi hain hum jaan dene se,
par darte hain hamari jaan bhi ye baat jaan legi,
kuch kiye bina hum agar saath chhod jaate hain,
hamari jaan bhi humein bewafaa maan legi,

jeewan me ek pyaar hi to hai jispe humein aetbaar hai,
yakeen hai ek din wo hamara haath thaam legi,
lag jayegi gale hamare, saanso me saanse sama jayengi,
uski dhadkane bhi tab muskuraake bas hamara naam lengi...
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2010, 06:36:53 PM »
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Tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon aapka Madhu ji... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil ji,sirf dard hi dard nazar aa rahi hai.marvelous creation.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2010, 06:45:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji correction k liye. Par main un lines ko ab kaise likhun mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai... wo para please aap hi correct kar k likh dijiye... maine kuch change kiya hai 'mohabbat' aur 'ishq' ka position change kar diya hai.... shayad ab theek lage.... padh k batana aap...

Esiliye kehte hain soch samajhkar uthaya karo kadam..... Giggle Giggle Giggle DOH DOH DOH
Wah kya kehna aapka....Pyarr ko khel aur Jaan ko khilona samajhte ho.. Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More
Mubaarak ho Aashaon par he jeevan chala karte hain...."ek din wo..." tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2010, 11:13:35 AM »
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Aap he apni likhi lines padh lijiye kitna virodhabhaas hai inmai..... Giggle Giggle Giggle

Yakeen hai ek din wo.....
phir bhi kehte ho "ashayein bhi jhooti lagti hain... sab khatam ho chuka hai....



"hum to samajh rahe the ki pyaar ek khel hai jeewan me,"

jeewan me ek pyaar hi to hai jispe humein aetbaar hai,
yakeen hai ek din wo hamara haath thaam legi,
lag jayegi gale hamare, saanso me saanse sama jayengi,
uski dhadkane bhi tab muskuraake bas hamara naam lengi...
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haan samajh to rahe the khel par wahi humein chot pahucha gayi... ab to ashayein bhi jhooti lagti hain... sab khatam ho chuka hai...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2010, 08:10:41 PM »
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ab kya karun isme kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha... aapka kehna bhi bilkul sahi hai... aage se dhyaan rakhunga... isko shayad main aur sudhaar nahi paunga... bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!
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