Mohabbat Dilon Mein Zinda Ho To Zindagi Asaan Hai.........

by khwaish on May 18, 2009, 02:21:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 27, 2009, 06:37:48 AM »
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Haqeeqat Ke Rang Mein Jo Khil Jaaye,
Kuch Aise Khwaab Lagte Ho,
Khuda Ne Bakshi Hai Jo Zindagi Meri Duayon Ko,
Unn Duayon Ka Jawaab Lagte Ho....

Teri Hi Justujoo Hai, Teri Hi Aarzoo,
Zindagi Ke Har Panhe Par Zikr Hai Aapka,
Meri Zindagi Ki Kitaab Lagte Ho....

Bahut accha likha hai as usual... Accha laga padkar. Daad kabul kijiye
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«Reply #16 on: June 04, 2009, 04:21:23 PM »
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Khwaish,

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Bata nahin sakte aapki ye peshkash kitni gehri hai... Har lafz har line....jitni taareef karen kam.....Apne dil ek ehsaas ko aapne itni khoobsurti se lafzon main dhaala hai....Bohot bohot Khoob Dost...Humesha khush rahen !
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat,Ab Aapke Comments To Agar Naa Ho Meri Koi Bhi poetry Par To Aisa Lagne lagta hai ke shayad Meri Poetry Kuch Adhuri reh Gayi...

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«Reply #17 on: June 05, 2009, 04:51:53 PM »
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Bohat khoob Khwaish bas jo meri behan Talat ne kaha mera hi wahi kehna hain.....You are hatke dear.

bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid Bhai..
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«Reply #18 on: June 06, 2009, 12:20:10 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji... bahoot ki sunder Alfaz likhe hai.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #19 on: June 06, 2009, 12:39:12 PM »
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Haqeeqat Ke Rang Mein Jo Khil Jaaye,
Kuch Aise Khwaab Lagte Ho,
Khuda Ne Bakshi Hai Jo Zindagi Meri Duayon Ko,
Unn Duayon Ka Jawaab Lagte Ho....

Teri Hi Justujoo Hai, Teri Hi Aarzoo,
Zindagi Ke Har Panhe Par Zikr Hai Aapka,
Meri Zindagi Ki Kitaab Lagte Ho....

Mumkin Hai Kabhi Main Khud Se Fareb Karoon,
Par Tujhse Waffa Na Karoon To Mar Jaau!!!
Meri Inn Ankhon Ke Aaene Mein Chehra Hai Aapka,
Nazrein Kehti Hai Ke Aap Hi Husn-e-Aaftaab Lagte Ho....

Jab se Aaye Ho Zindagi Mein,
Mehak Utha Hai Yeh Gulshan Mera!!!
Mere Iss Kaanton Se Bhare Gulshan Mein,
Aap Hi To Ek mehakta Hua Gulaab Lagte Ho.....

Khushiyon Ki Talaash Mein,
Bhatakta Raha Main Dar-Badar,
Tujhe Paakar Mehsoos Hua Hai Kuch Yuh,
Ke Aap Hi Haasil-e-inthekaab Lagte Ho....

Kehte Hai log Ke Apne Nek Karmo Ka Bhi,
Hisaab Hota Hai Khuda Ke Paas!!
Aap hi Mere Nek Karmo Ka Falsafa Ho,
Aap Hi Woh Hisaab Lagte Ho....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Mohabbat Dilon Mein Zinda Ho To,
Zindagi Ka Safar Asaan Hai!!!
Aap Hi Suraj Ki Woh Pehli Kiran Ho,
Aap Hi Chandni Raat Ki Woh,
Chandni Mehtaab Lagte Ho....

         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

HUMARA KHAYAAL BHI AAPKE BAARE YEHI HAI
VERY NICE
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«Reply #20 on: June 10, 2009, 05:20:01 AM »
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wah wah wah wah....khwaish ji...
bahut bahut behtrin peshkash.....bahut khub likhte h aap
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji...

Bas Aap Saath Dete Rahe Aur hum likhte Rahenge..Thankyou Sooooo Much!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: June 12, 2009, 07:00:36 AM »
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BAHAUT KHOOB KHWAHISH.SB

Bahut Bahut Shukriya K.A Saheb ji..
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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2009, 06:15:29 PM »
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bahut hi achcha likhte hai aap Khwaish ji,aapke har ek alfaz me ashiqui hai
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«Reply #23 on: December 05, 2009, 04:08:05 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai as usual Bhaiya... Accha laga padkar. Daad kabul kijiye


Thankyou Soooooo Much behna.. icon_flower
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«Reply #24 on: December 05, 2009, 06:37:20 AM »
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Excellent creation Khwaish ji,nice thoughts,beautiful lines by Roja ji. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: December 05, 2009, 07:06:35 AM »
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Haqeeqat Ke Rang Mein Jo Khil Jaaye,
Kuch Aise Khwaab Lagte Ho,
Khuda Ne Bakshi Hai Jo Zindagi Meri Duayon Ko,
Unn Duayon Ka Jawaab Lagte Ho....

Teri Hi Justujoo Hai, Teri Hi Aarzoo,
Zindagi Ke Har Panhe Par Zikr Hai Aapka,
Meri Zindagi Ki Kitaab Lagte Ho....

Mumkin Hai Kabhi Main Khud Se Fareb Karoon,
Par Tujhse Waffa Na Karoon To Mar Jaau!!!
Meri Inn Ankhon Ke Aaene Mein Chehra Hai Aapka,
Nazrein Kehti Hai Ke Aap Hi Husn-e-Aaftaab Lagte Ho....

Jab se Aaye Ho Zindagi Mein,
Mehak Utha Hai Yeh Gulshan Mera!!!
Mere Iss Kaanton Se Bhare Gulshan Mein,
Aap Hi To Ek mehakta Hua Gulaab Lagte Ho.....

Khushiyon Ki Talaash Mein,
Bhatakta Raha Main Dar-Badar,
Tujhe Paakar Mehsoos Hua Hai Kuch Yuh,
Ke Aap Hi Haasil-e-inthekaab Lagte Ho....

Kehte Hai log Ke Apne Nek Karmo Ka Bhi,
Hisaab Hota Hai Khuda Ke Paas!!
Aap hi Mere Nek Karmo Ka Falsafa Ho,
Aap Hi Woh Hisaab Lagte Ho....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Mohabbat Dilon Mein Zinda Ho To,
Zindagi Ka Safar Asaan Hai!!!
Aap Hi Suraj Ki Woh Pehli Kiran Ho,
Aap Hi Chandni Raat Ki Woh,
Chandni Mehtaab Lagte Ho....

         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Very nice one indeed Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #26 on: December 15, 2009, 01:59:49 PM »
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Aapke har alfaaz mein mohabbat ka rang hi rang chalakta hai
Dil se kahe ek baat,hamein aapka mehboob bahut khushnasib lagta hai
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«Reply #27 on: December 15, 2009, 05:01:26 PM »
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Mohabbt dilon mai ho tou zindagi zannat lagti hai
Mitt jaaye mohabbt tou zindagi veeraan lagti hai
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«Reply #28 on: December 15, 2009, 05:19:46 PM »
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nice khawhsh ji ap ki is sitron mein kuch aese ahsaas paae jate hein jo dil mein nahi rooh ki gahraee tak utar jaate hein.... ap ki yeh khbsurat lines parh kar mujhe FAIZ AHMED FAAIZ sahab ka ek shair yaad aa gya k
Koi to baat hai "uss" mein "FAIZ"
Har khushi jis pe lutta di hum ne....!
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«Reply #29 on: December 15, 2009, 05:44:04 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji... bahoot ki sunder Alfaz likhe hai.. bahoot Khoob!

Thanks A Lot For Appreciating For Sophi.. icon_flower
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