-----/// Mohabbat ho jaane do /// ----- Hriday

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na roko khud ko tum ki aaj behek jaane do,
apni deewaangi ho hadd se guzar jaane do,
ye lamha aaya hai barso ke intezaar ke baad,
meri baahon me aake khud ko bikhar jaane do,

lag jao seene se mere tod ke bandhan saare,
baahon me aake mere dil ko dhadak jaane do,
aankhon se pila do aaj humein ki jhoom jaaye,
aankhon ke samundar me humein doob jaane do,

tod ke bandhan saare tum aaj aisa kuch kar jaao,
saanson me ghul ke tumhaare madhosh ho jaane do,
mehek jaayen tumhaari khushbu se hum aaj is tarha,
ki doobke tumhaari mohabbat me behosh ho jaane do,

chhoo lene do naazuk hothon ko mere hothon se,
apni julfon ke andheron me mujhe kho jaane do,
kuch karo aisa ki is raat ki subah na ho paaye,
aur mujhe tum apni baahon me hi aaj mar jaane do....

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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2012, 04:34:31 PM »
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Bahut khoob hriday ji
bas yu hi likhte rahiye.Applause

na roko khud ko tum ki aaj behek jaane do,
apni deewaangi ho hadd se guzar jaane do,
ye lamha aaya hai barso ke intezaar ke baad,
meri baahon me aake khud ko bikhar jaane do, Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2012, 04:03:54 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2012, 08:59:27 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya MKV ji....!!!

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Bahut khoob hriday ji
bas yu hi likhte rahiye.Applause

na roko khud ko tum ki aaj behek jaane do,
apni deewaangi ho hadd se guzar jaane do,
ye lamha aaya hai barso ke intezaar ke baad,
meri baahon me aake khud ko bikhar jaane do, Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2012, 07:39:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaa Parwaaz ji jo aapne ise waqt diya , padha aur pasand kiyaa... ji sahi kahaa aapne hum bhi bahut miss karte hain Kasak ji ko... unke saath likhne me kuch alag hi flow banta tha hamaara bhi... aajkal pata nahi kahaan gaayab ho gayi hain wo... ek baar fir se main dil se aapka shukriyaa adaaa karta hoon....!!!

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Kalaskar Jee Aadaab!


Aapke rangeeN mijaaz wale kalaam padhkar janab
aapko waise reply dene wale Kasak jee ki yaad
taazaa ho gayii... Usual Smile

Behad achche ahsaasat bayaaN kiye hai aapne...
Is dilkash kalaam par humari daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2012, 04:07:27 PM »
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boht khub hriday ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2012, 04:17:10 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saahill ji...!!!

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 27, 2012, 03:43:54 PM
na roko khud ko tum ki aaj behek jaane do,
apni deewaangi ho hadd se guzar jaane do,
ye lamha aaya hai barso ke intezaar ke baad,
meri baahon me aake khud ko bikhar jaane do,

lag jao seene se mere tod ke bandhan saare,
baahon me aake mere dil ko dhadak jaane do,
aankhon se pila do aaj humein ki jhoom jaaye,
aankhon ke samundar me humein doob jaane do,

tod ke bandhan saare tum aaj aisa kuch kar jaao,
saanson me ghul ke tumhaare madhosh ho jaane do,
mehek jaayen tumhaari khushbu se hum aaj is tarha,
ki doobke tumhaari mohabbat me behosh ho jaane do,

chhoo lene do naazuk hothon ko mere hothon se,
apni julfon ke andheron me mujhe kho jaane do,
kuch karo aisa ki is raat ki subah na ho paaye,
aur mujhe tum apni baahon me hi aaj mar jaane do....

*****HRIDAY*****


Hoye Hoye... Kya baat hai.. Itna Khumar .. kiske ke pyaar ka nasha chah gaya.. bahoot Bahoot Umda Hriday ji.. bahoot khoob !!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2012, 04:23:51 PM »
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hehehehehehehe ye to bas ek khayaal hai... apni aisi kismat kahaan... khair aapne ise padha , pasand kiya iske liye main aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon.. dil se....!!!

Quote from: Nysha on April 03, 2012, 04:19:57 PM

Hoye Hoye... Kya baat hai.. Itna Khumar .. kiske ke pyaar ka nasha chah gaya.. bahoot Bahoot Umda Hriday ji.. bahoot khoob !!!
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