mohabbat ki barsaat........sheba

by Sheba on April 17, 2012, 11:20:04 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2012, 07:06:34 AM »
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waaahhh--
kamaal h kamaal Sheba ji--
baht bht khoob khumaar hai sahiba--
baht pyara aur baht pyaraaa
daad daad daad
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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2012, 08:00:32 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 17, 2012, 11:30:45 AM
bahut khoob sheba ji.. Maqta ghajab ka hai. Vaise sabhi ashaar behaf khoob hai.. Vaah vaaah

shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2012, 08:10:12 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 17, 2012, 11:20:04 AM


                             baad  muddat  ke  jo  unse  mulaaqaat hui..!
                             rahe khamosh labb, ankho.N se barsaat hui..!

                             younn to kai paighaam tajalliyo.N ke aate rahe..,
                             saath  unke hi buss  musarrat  meri  raat  hui..,

                             jhoom uthi fizaa bhi dekh mere mehboob ko..,
                             muskurayaa qamar aur kahkasho.N ki baraat hui..,

                             khushi uss  pal ne diya mujhe fatah sab pe..,
                             saare  gile-shiqwo.N  ki  phir  maat  hui..,

                            hua qissa tamaam sheba jalne-jalaane ka abb..!
                             raat bhar shamaa ki parwaane se baat hui...!
waah waah bahut badhiyaaa... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley har sher pe chilla chilla ke waah karne ka dil kar raha hai..mind blowing... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #18 on: April 18, 2012, 08:12:23 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sheba ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2012, 10:52:57 AM »
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Quote from: dolly on April 17, 2012, 11:37:35 AM
awesome sheba.....bahut bahut khoob..badiya......Usual Smile

thanks dolly
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2012, 07:23:55 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


Kia baat hai Mohtarmaa bahut khoob... badi dilkash aur umdaa kalaam
kahi hai... ahsaas O khayaal to behad gazab ke rahe... Usual Smile

Behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile



Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile    



Quote from: Sheba on April 17, 2012, 11:20:04 AM


                             baad  muddat  ke  jo  unse  mulaaqaat hui..!
                             rahe khamosh labb, ankho.N se barsaat hui..!


Kia baat hai jee waaH bahut khoob behad pur asar ahsaas ko bayaaN kiya hai daad daad daad Usual Smile    

                             younn to kai paighaam tajalliyo.N ke aate rahe..,
                             saath  unke hi buss  musarrat  meri  raat  hui..,

Ohhh ho kia baat hai bahut khoob daad Usual Smile    


                             jhoom uthi fizaa bhi dekh mere mehboob ko..,
                             muskurayaa qamar aur kahkasho.N ki baraat hui..,

Achcha hume kia pataa aapka mehboob kitna khoob hai...  NaNaNa
Par ashaar behad umdaa hai bahut khoob daad daad daad    


                             khushi uss  pal ne diya mujhe fatah sab pe..,
                             saare  gile-shiqwo.N  ki  phir  maat  hui..,

WaaH kia baat hai behad khoob aur behad achcha khayaal hai daad ...
HaaN khushi feminine hai.. so diyaa" lafz wahaaN suitable nahi hai... gour kar
lijiye...  


                            hua qissa tamaam sheba jalne-jalaane ka abb..!
                             raat bhar shamaa ki parwaane se baat hui...!

Waah waaH waaH kia baat hai Shebaa sahibaa behad umdaa Maqta raha
behad khoob daad daad daad... Usual Smile

Par yeH toH sara sar jhooth hai ke raat bhar baat huyi...  Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Ai9se kuch bhi mat kaha kijiye....  NaNaNa    
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«Reply #21 on: April 20, 2012, 05:41:13 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on April 17, 2012, 11:38:57 AM
boht khub sheba ji kamal ka likhti hain ap

shukriya sahill
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«Reply #22 on: April 24, 2012, 06:43:50 PM »
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Quote from: Anahita on April 17, 2012, 11:45:15 AM
Bahut khoob sheba jee
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you anahita ji
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«Reply #23 on: May 03, 2012, 07:01:03 PM »
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Quote from: Jagan Kishan on April 17, 2012, 12:54:49 PM
bahut khub shebaji...makta aur bhi lajawaab

shukriya
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«Reply #24 on: May 03, 2012, 07:30:16 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: October 16, 2012, 06:34:58 PM »
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Quote from: Quateel Ahmad on April 17, 2012, 12:57:31 PM
Applause Applause Bahot khoob Shebaji! Applause

shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: January 17, 2013, 07:52:25 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 17, 2012, 01:03:53 PM
Bahut  hi  khubsurat  ghazal  hai . Har  sher  haseen  hai
Khas taur  se  maqta .  Aap  ki  tarah  khubsurat  tabsire  
to  nahin  kar  sakta  , phir  bhi  Maqta  parh  kar  samajh  
nahi  aa   raha  hai  ki  parwaane  ki  qismat  per  rashk  
karoon  ya  hasad . Dheron  daad  hazir  hai .
                              Khair  andesh , Hasan

bahut shukria fazal sahab....!
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«Reply #27 on: January 17, 2013, 08:22:04 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 17, 2012, 11:20:04 AM


                             baad  muddat  ke  jo  unse  mulaaqaat hui..!
                             rahe khamosh labb, ankho.N se barsaat hui..!

                             younn to kai paighaam tajalliyo.N ke aate rahe..,
                             saath  unke hi buss  musarrat  meri  raat  hui..,

                             jhoom uthi fizaa bhi dekh mere mehboob ko..,
                             muskurayaa qamar aur kahkasho.N ki baraat hui..,

                             khushi uss  pal ne diya mujhe fatah sab pe..,
                             saare  gile-shiqwo.N  ki  phir  maat  hui..,

                            hua qissa tamaam sheba jalne-jalaane ka abb..!
                             raat bhar shamaa ki parwaane se baat hui...!


Wow...Soooooooooo Poetic...

Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob Sheba Ji...

Just beautiful  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: May 13, 2013, 02:33:04 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 17, 2012, 01:05:32 PM
waah waah kyaa haseen mulaakaat hui behtreen ghazal pesh kee ab aap jaisee khoobsoorat daad to hamaare pass naheen hain to bas samjhiye daad daad daad

shukria dr ji....!
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«Reply #29 on: June 20, 2013, 04:40:33 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 17, 2012, 03:44:41 PM
toooo goood .... wah wah wah .... i was just recalling the entire event in your poem ... so beautifully written ... wah wah

jasbir singh

shukria jassi.......!
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