Mohabbat Ki Bas Itni Meri Dastaan Hai..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on February 19, 2013, 05:16:12 PM
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She Said:

Mohabbat Ki Bas Itni Meri Dastaan Hai,
Khaali Hai Jism Aur Door Meri Jaan Hai..!!

Adhuri HaiN YeH Meri RaateiN Tum Bin,
Jaise Lagta Bin Chand Ke Aasmaan Hai..!!

Kehne Ko Hai Paas Saari Duniya YahaaN,
Phir Bhi Bohat Tanha Dil Ka Jahaan Hai..!!

Dhoondu KahaaN MaiN Tumhe Dar-Badar,
Paas Mere Tera Pata Na Koi Nishaan Hai..!!

Mil Bhi Jao Ab Hum Se Aye Jaan-E-Jaan,
Guzarta Ja Raha Zindagi Ka Karwaan Hai..!!

He Said:

Tere Naam Se Hi Mohabbat Ki Dastaan Hai,
Tu Hi Meri Zindagi Aur Tu Hi Meri Jaan Hai..!!

YeH Aks Hai Tera Yaa Hai Chand Falak MeiN,
Bohat HaseeN Har Raat Mera Aasmaan Hai..!!

Teri YaadoN Se Basi Hai Saari Duniya Meri,
Kabhi Tanha Nahi Lagta Mujhe Jahaan Hai..!!

Meri Manzil Ka Pata Tum Apne Dil Se Pucho,
Is Dil MeiN Tere Hi KadmoN Ke Nishaan Hai..!!

Zinda Hai Sirf Teri Mohabbat Ki Hasrat MeiN,
Tere Liye Hi Meri SaasoN Ka Karwaan Hai..!!          

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2013, 06:38:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob..
wah wah wah
Zabardast likha hai aapne..
Tere Naam Se Hi Mohabbat Ki Dastaan Hai,
Tu Hi Meri Zindagi Aur Tu Hi Meri Jaan Hai..!!
Yeh Aks Hai Tera Ya Hai Chand Falak Mein,
Bohat Haseen Har Raat Mera Aasmaan Hai..!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2013, 06:44:05 PM »
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Mohabbat Ki Bas Itni Meri Dastaan Hai,                                         
Khaali Hai Jism Aur Door Meri Jaan Hai..!!                                     

Adhuri Hain Yeh Meri Raatein Tum Bin,                                       
Jaise Lagta Bin Chand Ke Aasmaan Hai..!!                                     

Kehne Ko Hai Paas Saari Duniya Mere,                                         
Phir Bhi Bohat Tanha Dil Ka Jahaan Hai..!!                                     

Dhoondu Kahaan Main Tumhe Dar-Badar,                                       
Paas Mere Tera Pata Na Koi Nishaan Hai..!!                                   

Mil Bhi Jao Ab Hum Se Aye Jaan-E-Jaan,                                     
Guzarta Ja Raha Zindagi Ka Karwaan Hai..!!   

He Said:                             

Tere Naam Se Hi Mohabbat Ki Dastaan Hai,
Tu Hi Meri Zindagi Aur Tu Hi Meri Jaan Hai..!!

Yeh Aks Hai Tera Ya Hai Chand Falak Mein,
Bohat Haseen Har Raat Mera Aasmaan Hai..!!

Teri Yaadon Se Basi Hai Saari Duniya Meri,
Kabhi Tanha Nahi Lagta Mujhe Jahaan Hai..!!

Meri Manzil Ka Pata Tum Apne Dil Se Pucho,
Is Dil Mein Tere Hi Kadmon Ke Nishaan Hai..!!

Zinda Hai Sirf Teri Mohabbat Ki Hasrat Mein,
Tere Liye Hi Meri Saason Ka Karwaan Hai..!!

Shireen Hakani

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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2013, 08:12:58 PM »
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mohtarma bahut mehnat ka kaam hai ek poori conversation dono taraf se is format men keh pana, par aapne ye bakhubi kar dikhaya hai, iske liye mubaraqbaad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2013, 09:59:40 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shireen ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2013, 01:03:00 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2013, 03:01:26 AM »
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 Yeh Aks Hai Tera Ya Hai Chand Falak
Mein,
Bohat Haseen Har Raat Mera Aasmaan
Hai..!!

Bahut  badiya likha hai...shireen jee, bas mujhe is sher kee last line samajh mein nahin aayee..
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2013, 05:18:26 AM »
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Waah shireen ji bahut khoob andaaz hai aapke likhne ka. hum ek nahi likh paate aap bakhubi apne ghazal ka jawab bhi de dete ho. bahut khoob .dheron daad
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2013, 05:38:53 AM »
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Bahoot khub,
           shireen ji,
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2013, 06:16:46 AM »
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