"mohabbat mai ab wo pehli si baat kahan"

by aaina on February 14, 2009, 10:09:13 AM
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angel4u
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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2009, 03:30:38 PM »
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Arre wah hasina dear... do line mein bahut kuch keh diya
aapne..


thanks re roja...
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aaina
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«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2009, 01:49:16 PM »
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Applause Applause

Wah wah aaina.. bahut badiya likha hai aapne...Aapka likha padte padte
bahut si baatein dil mein uber aayi.



thnx so much roja ji........................

aaj phir meri yaadon se usne ghar ko sajaya hoga
meri tasveer ko dewaar pe usne phir lagya hoga

na jaane kitni baar rait pe likha hoga mera naam usne
har baar kisi leher ne aa kar usse mitaya hoga

ey hawa tu ja ke us ke ghar se meri yaadain lai aa
kiya pata aaj phir un yaadon ne us ko rulaya hoga

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«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2009, 04:20:26 PM »
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thnx so much roja ji........................

aaj phir meri yaadon se usne ghar ko sajaya hoga
meri tasveer ko dewaar pe usne phir lagya hoga

na jaane kitni baar rait pe likha hoga mera naam usne
har baar kisi leher ne aa kar usse mitaya hoga

ey hawa tu ja ke us ke ghar se meri yaadain lai aa
kiya pata aaj phir un yaadon ne us ko rulaya hoga



behad khoobsurat...


Meri yaadein hi rehti hogi uska humsafar banke,
tanhaiyon mein isne har zarra mehkaya hoga,
toot ke chaha tha kabhi jis butt ko humne,
apne khwaabon ko kabhi mere armaanose sajaya hoga...
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aaina
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«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2009, 07:44:53 PM »
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behad khoobsurat...


Meri yaadein hi rehti hogi uska humsafar banke,
tanhaiyon mein isne har zarra mehkaya hoga,
toot ke chaha tha kabhi jis butt ko humne,
apne khwaabon ko kabhi mere armaanose sajaya hoga...

kia baat hai angel bhut khooob........................
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #19 on: February 17, 2009, 06:14:06 AM »
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WOw. Superp Girls... aaina , Anjel & slma.. bahoot bahoot khoob. kya baat hai
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salma786
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«Reply #20 on: February 17, 2009, 06:51:35 AM »
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behad khoobsurat...


Meri yaadein hi rehti hogi uska humsafar banke,
tanhaiyon mein isne har zarra mehkaya hoga,
toot ke chaha tha kabhi jis butt ko humne,
apne khwaabon ko kabhi mere armaanose sajaya hoga...


Wo mohabaat ke humse dawe the karte ,
Tabhi humne bhi khudko bhulaya hoga,
Ab hum se anjaan ban kar hai rehte,
Log kehte hai humse dil behlaya hoga!
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salma786
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«Reply #21 on: February 17, 2009, 06:56:29 AM »
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thnx so much roja ji........................

aaj phir meri yaadon se usne ghar ko sajaya hoga
meri tasveer ko dewaar pe usne phir lagya hoga

na jaane kitni baar rait pe likha hoga mera naam usne
har baar kisi leher ne aa kar usse mitaya hoga

ey hawa tu ja ke us ke ghar se meri yaadain lai aa
kiya pata aaj phir un yaadon ne us ko rulaya hoga



Bahoot khoob aina ji
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salma786
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«Reply #22 on: February 17, 2009, 06:57:20 AM »
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Shukriya sophi ji Usual Smile
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aaina
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«Reply #23 on: February 18, 2009, 06:47:42 AM »
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Bahoot khoob aina ji

thnxxx salm ji...........



Wo mohabaat ke humse dawe the karte ,
Tabhi humne bhi khudko bhulaya hoga,
Ab hum se anjaan ban kar hai rehte,
Log kehte hai humse dil behlaya hoga!

nice work..............

aksar meri aakho ko wo jheel bana daita hai
yaad aata hai is qadar ke mujhko rula daita hai
bhool jana to nahi aasaan mujh ko
jaane wo kis tarhan mujh ko bhula daita hai
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Roja
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«Reply #24 on: February 18, 2009, 06:49:49 AM »
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thnx so much roja ji........................

aaj phir meri yaadon se usne ghar ko sajaya hoga
meri tasveer ko dewaar pe usne phir lagya hoga

na jaane kitni baar rait pe likha hoga mera naam usne
har baar kisi leher ne aa kar usse mitaya hoga

ey hawa tu ja ke us ke ghar se meri yaadain lai aa
kiya pata aaj phir un yaadon ne us ko rulaya hoga



Love sharing Aaina... Bahut khoob  Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #25 on: February 18, 2009, 06:50:57 AM »
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Wo mohabaat ke humse dawe the karte ,
Tabhi humne bhi khudko bhulaya hoga,
Ab hum se anjaan ban kar hai rehte,
Log kehte hai humse dil behlaya hoga!

Well expressed lines... Salma
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salma786
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«Reply #26 on: February 18, 2009, 07:06:19 AM »
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Shukriya Roja Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #27 on: February 18, 2009, 07:13:25 AM »
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thnxxx salm ji...........


nice work..............

aksar meri aakho ko wo jheel bana daita hai
yaad aata hai is qadar ke mujhko rula daita hai
bhool jana to nahi aasaan mujh ko
jaane wo kis tarhan mujh ko bhula daita hai

Thanks aaina ji

Wo meri yadoon ke samandar me,
Har pal lehar banke uth ne laga,
Na jane kab is bhawar me mai kho jau,
K ab rishta saans ka zindegi se toot ne laga !!
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Roja
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«Reply #28 on: February 18, 2009, 07:15:35 AM »
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Welcome dear.

Kaise kahu ke tum apna bana lo mujhe
Apni bahon mein tum sama lo mujhe

Tum bin ek pal bi ab katna hai mushkil
Aakar tum, apne sang le chalo mujhe

Kal ki baat aaj nahi, mohabbat beri juban nahi
Teri Mohabbat mein pehli jaisi wo baat nahi

Na jane kaise guzarenge tumbin zindagi
Phir ek bar apne dil se apnalo mujhe

 

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salma786
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«Reply #29 on: February 18, 2009, 07:24:07 AM »
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Welcome dear.

Kaise kahu ke tum apna bana lo mujhe
Apni bahon mein tum sama lo mujhe

Tum bin ek pal bi ab katna hai mushkil
Aakar tum, apne sang le chalo mujhe

Kal ki baat aaj nahi, mohabbat beri juban nahi
Teri Mohabbat mein pehli jaisi wo baat nahi

Na jane kaise guzarenge tumbin zindagi
Phir ek bar apne dil se apnalo mujhe

 




very nice Roja sis!
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