-----/// Mohabbat nibhaataa hoon main ///----- Hriday

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ret  pe  uskaa naam likhtaa hoon, mitaataa hoon main
aur  kuch  is tarhaa se mohabbat nibhaataa hoon main

din  jo  kabhi beete  the  gungunaate  huye uske saath
un haseen yaadon  se apnaa  dil  behlaataa  hoon main

kabhi kehtaa hoon itnaa naa ho  khatam  baatein meri
kabhi  kuch  kehte huye chup saa ho jaataa hoon main

kabhi  dard  jo  badh jaataa hai hadd se zyaadaa meraa
uske naam pe likhe geeton ko gungunaataa hoon main

ek  dil  hai,  kuch  dhadkan,  bas  aur  kuch bhi nahi hai
bas  inhi ke  kisse  mehfilon  mein  sunaataa hoon main

maine haste  rehne  kaa  waadaa usse kiyaa thaa kabhi
ek  yahi  wajah  hai  ki aaj  bhi muskuraataa hoon main


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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2013, 09:40:45 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2013, 09:51:43 PM »
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ret  pe  uskaa naam likhtaa hoon, mitaataa hoon main
aur  kuch  is tarhaa se mohabbat nibhaataa hoon main

din  jo  kabhi beete  the  gungunaate  huye uske saath
un haseen yaadon  se apnaa  dil  behlaataa  hoon main

kabhi kehtaa hoon itnaa naa ho  khatam  baatein meri
kabhi  kuch  kehte huye chup saa ho jaataa hoon main

kabhi  dard  jo  badh jaataa hai hadd se zyaadaa meraa
uske naam pe likhe geeton ko gungunaataa hoon main

ek  dil  hai,  kuch  dhadkan,  bas  aur  kuch bhi nahi hai
bas  inhi ke  kisse  mehfilon  mein  sunaataa hoon main

maine haste  rehne  kaa  waadaa usse kiyaa thaa kabhi
ek  yahi  wajah  hai  ki aaj  bhi muskuraataa hoon main


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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2013, 09:58:02 PM »
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bahut samay baad apka koi qalam  padh raha hoon kapil bhai uske liye mafi chahunga...

bahut hee khubsurat qalaam wahi andaz wahi mohabbat ka jaadu bar bar padhne par majbur karne wale khubsurat lafz.........

bahut khub bahut khub aur bahut khub...
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2013, 03:13:01 AM »
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din  jo  kabhi beete  the  gungunaate  huye uske saath
un haseen yaadon  se apnaa  dil  behlaataa  hoon main

maine haste  rehne  kaa  waadaa usse kiyaa thaa kabhi
ek  yahi  wajah  hai  ki aaj  bhi muskuraataa hoon main

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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2013, 03:55:43 AM »
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ret  pe  uskaa naam likhtaa hoon, mitaataa hoon main
aur  kuch  is tarhaa se mohabbat nibhaataa hoon main

din  jo  kabhi beete  the  gungunaate  huye uske saath
un haseen yaadon  se apnaa  dil  behlaataa  hoon main

kabhi kehtaa hoon itnaa naa ho  khatam  baatein meri
kabhi  kuch  kehte huye chup saa ho jaataa hoon main

kabhi  dard  jo  badh jaataa hai hadd se zyaadaa meraa
uske naam pe likhe geeton ko gungunaataa hoon main

ek  dil  hai,  kuch  dhadkan,  bas  aur  kuch bhi nahi hai
bas  inhi ke  kisse  mehfilon  mein  sunaataa hoon main

maine haste  rehne  kaa  waadaa usse kiyaa thaa kabhi
ek  yahi  wajah  hai  ki aaj  bhi muskuraataa hoon main


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bahut khoob......!
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.....!!!

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thanks a lot M_B ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji....!!!

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bahut samay baad apka koi qalam  padh raha hoon kapil bhai uske liye mafi chahunga...

bahut hee khubsurat qalaam wahi andaz wahi mohabbat ka jaadu bar bar padhne par majbur karne wale khubsurat lafz.........

bahut khub bahut khub aur bahut khub...
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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