Mohabbat Se Apni Maang Sajaa LooN..!!..Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on June 28, 2013, 04:49:01 PM
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Saare Jahaan Se Tum Ko Churaa LooN,
Dil Chahe Tujhe MaiN Apna Banaa LooN..!!

Banaa Kar Tujhe Apna Muqaddar MaiN,
Mohabbat Se Apni Maang Sajaa LooN..!!

Har Lamha, Har Waqt Tasveer Tumhari,
MaiN Apni AankhoN MeiN Basaa LooN..!!

Chahe Mile Khushi Ya Ho Gum Sanam,
Har Ehsaas Apne Gale Se Lagaa LooN..!!

Utar Naa Paaye Pyaar Ka Rang Kabhi,
Tujh Pe Apna WoH Rang Chadaa LooN..!!

Lag Kar Tumhare Seene Se MaiN Jaana,
DarmiyaaN Saari DooriyaaN Mitaa LooN..!!

Kho JaaoN Is Kadar MaiN Chahat MeiN,
Paa Kar Tumhe Khud Ko Bhulaa LooN..!!

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2013, 05:21:03 PM »
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bht khoob
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2013, 05:48:09 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on June 28, 2013, 04:49:01 PM
Saare Jahaan Se Tum Ko Churaa LooN,
Dil Chahe Tujhe MaiN Apna Banaa LooN..!!

Banaa Kar Tujhe Apna Muqaddar MaiN,
Mohabbat Se Apni Maang Sajaa LooN..!!

Har Lamha, Har Waqt Tasveer Tumhari,
MaiN Apni AankhoN MeiN Basaa LooN..!!

Chahe Mile Khushi Ya Ho Gum Sanam,
MaiN Unhe Apne Gale Se Lagaa LooN..!!

Utar Naa Paaye Pyaar Ka Rang Kabhi,
Tujh Pe Apna WoH Rang Chadaa dooN..!!

Lag Kar Tumhare Seene Se MaiN Jaana,
DarmiyaaN Saari DooriyaaN Mitaa dooN..!!

Kho JaaoN Is Kadar MaiN Chahat MeiN,
Paa Kar Tumhe Khud Ko Bhulaa dooN..!!

Shireen Hakani


good,ma'am nice written but if you don't mind to correct the highlighted which are technically  sounding incorrect
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 07:36:10 PM »
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 Applause
  nice,shireenji.
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 07:58:46 PM »
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So Cute.
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 08:37:58 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah.Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 09:22:25 PM »
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wah wah wah bahut khub shireen ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2013, 09:49:54 PM »
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excellent
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2013, 02:36:21 AM »
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Shireen jee Aadaab .... !


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob ... badi achchi kalaam rahi ...
Kafi khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafzoN
meiN dhalaa hai aapne ...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... Mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2013, 02:50:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause bhut khub ma'am
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2013, 04:36:26 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2013, 06:38:51 PM »
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Laajawab Shireenji ...............
"Mohabbat Se Aap Apni Maang Saja Lo
Jasbaato ki heena Haatho par racha lo
Surkh Joda Unke pyar ka pehan
Haqeeqat mei Unki Dulhan Ban jao....Ameen
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2013, 01:45:39 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 29, 2013, 06:38:51 PM
Laajawab Shireenji ...............
"Mohabbat Se Aap Apni Maang Saja Lo
Jasbaato ki heena Haatho par racha lo
Surkh Joda Unke pyar ka pehan
Haqeeqat mei Unki Dulhan Ban jao....Ameen
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Aameen! Thanq U So Much!
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2013, 02:19:34 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob shireenji. pata nahi aapki yeh post mujhse kaise chhoot gayi. bahut achchi kalaam hai. har baar ki tarah is baar bhi mujhe bahut pasand aayi. hazaron dili daad qubool ho...
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waah! bahut pyaara likha hai!
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