Mohabbat

by klaskar on March 25, 2010, 09:23:17 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 01, 2010, 11:01:39 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Rahim bhai hamari kavita k taarifon k liye. Humne to kavita likha .. aapne kaha ki har labz behta gaya aur nadi bana gaya .. aur aapne uspe apne taarifon ka pul (bridge) khada kar diya ...aur dost hume wo aur kabhi nahi mil sakti... tabhi maine likha ki "wo ab bas ek yaad banke reh gayi".....aapki duwaon k liye bahut bahut shukriya .... bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai....!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 07:24:16 PM
Hmm main kya bolun Kapil jee...Apne intro main hi rula dia...'yaad banke rehgaya'..bahaut khoob...Ab baat nazm ki toh itna kehna chahta hoon...main parrte gaya aur har kadi ke baad, i felt yeh best hai phir dusri phir teesri karte karte nazm puri hogayi...Bahaut acha likha hai...Har lavz behta gaya aur ek nadi bangayi... Applause Applause Applause Applause My salutes to u nazm aur bahaut bahaut dil se nikli duaein...tumhe woh miljaye...Jisse na mile wohi janta hai dard kitna hota hai... sad5
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«Reply #16 on: April 01, 2010, 05:22:50 PM »
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Behad Hi Khubsoorat Rachna Hai Klaskar Ji.. Behad Hi Khubsoorti Se Yaadon Ko Aur Ehsaason Ko Kaagaz Par Utaara Hai Mere dost.. Aisa laga Jaise Dil Nikaal Kar Hi Rakh diya..!! Applause

Har ek Sher se Mohabbat aur Yaad Dono Ki Mahak Aa rahi hai... aur aapko In Rachna Ka intro.. Relly Amazing.. Aisa laga Jaise Nazm wahan se nahi Yahan se Shuru Hoti Hai.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai..! icon_thumleft

Aji Klaskar Jiiiiiiiii.. Aaj se Hum Aapki Qalam Ke Deewane ho Gaye Dost.. !!! Daad Kubool Karen..!!
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«Reply #17 on: April 01, 2010, 11:20:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aapka Mann ji. Shayad utni pyaari ye kavita nahi likhi maine jitni taarif aapne kar di. Haan dil se hi nikli thi ye kavita. Aur agar mere is kavita ki mahak aap tak pahuch pai to isse badi khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai mere liye.

Bahut bahut shukriya aapki duwaon k liye. Aur aap hume sharminda kar rahe hain itni jyada taarif se. Hum aap jaisa achcha nahi likh sakte. Bas kabhi kabhi kalam chala lete hain. Ek baar fir se aapka shukriya ada karna chahunga. bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji.

Thanx a lot dear

Quote from: Mann on April 01, 2010, 05:22:50 PM
Behad Hi Khubsoorat Rachna Hai Klaskar Ji.. Behad Hi Khubsoorti Se Yaadon Ko Aur Ehsaason Ko Kaagaz Par Utaara Hai Mere dost.. Aisa laga Jaise Dil Nikaal Kar Hi Rakh diya..!! Applause

Har ek Sher se Mohabbat aur Yaad Dono Ki Mahak Aa rahi hai... aur aapko In Rachna Ka intro.. Relly Amazing.. Aisa laga Jaise Nazm wahan se nahi Yahan se Shuru Hoti Hai.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai..! icon_thumleft

Aji Klaskar Jiiiiiiiii.. Aaj se Hum Aapki Qalam Ke Deewane ho Gaye Dost.. !!! Daad Kubool Karen..!!
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«Reply #18 on: April 02, 2010, 05:58:37 AM »
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Kapil Ji really awsome ... Applause Applause
Wakayi yeh mohabbat hai ... har shair me basi mohabbat ...



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«Reply #19 on: April 02, 2010, 08:46:15 AM »
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Thanx a lot Saba ji... many many thanx... maine to bas ek chhoti si koshish ki thi kuch likhne ki... bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aap hamari mohabbat ko samajh paayi warna aajkal mohabbat ki koi kadar nahi is duniya me

Mohabbat kya hai ,
Ye to bas ek ehsaas hai,
Kabhi mere kareeb thi,
Aaj nahi mere paas hai...!!!
 
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Kapil Ji really awsome ... Applause Applause
Wakayi yeh mohabbat hai ... har shair me basi mohabbat ...



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«Reply #20 on: December 28, 2012, 06:01:05 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: December 28, 2012, 06:04:45 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: December 28, 2012, 06:43:54 PM »
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ye kahaan se dhund nikaalaa aapne Poojaa ji... ye to bahut puraani post hai... bahut bahut shukriyaa itni saaari taaliyon ke liye aur is rachna ko pasakd karne ke liye.....!!!

 
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«Reply #23 on: December 28, 2012, 06:44:21 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saahill ji....!!!

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ye kahaan se dhund nikaalaa aapne Poojaa ji... ye to bahut puraani post hai... bahut bahut shukriyaa itni saaari taaliyon ke liye aur is rachna ko pasakd karne ke liye.....!!!

 
bas yu hi...aapki kahani mein mil gya
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«Reply #25 on: January 10, 2013, 07:39:45 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on January 10, 2013, 06:15:33 AM
bas yu hi...aapki kahani mein mil gya
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«Reply #26 on: January 13, 2013, 02:54:41 PM »
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nice.
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«Reply #27 on: January 13, 2013, 02:59:13 PM »
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thanks a lot....!!!

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on January 13, 2013, 02:54:41 PM
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