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muhabat abbsharoon ki rawaani hai muhabat khud deewangi ki deewani hai
muhabat sitaroon ki khamoosh gazal hai muhabat zindagi ki shabnum liye ik kanwal hai
muhabat main sir jhukey tu pather ko adam ker dain muhabat main sir jhukey tu adam ko khuada ker dain
muhabat woh kashish ki jiss se kashish sitaroon main muhabat woh rooshani ki rooshani jiss se sitaroon main
muhabat key jazbey liye phoota hai gul muhabat main hi kissey key gata hai bulbul
jiss main jhoot ka sar-a-paa such ho mohubata woh ayeena aur ubhar ker jo kabhi na totey muhabat woh abbegeena
muhabat jo miley tu bas sakoon hi sakoon muhabat na miley tu bas janoon hi janoon
muhabat firishtoon ki sanahat hai muhabat jugnoowoon ki jagmagahat hai
muhabat mujnoo ki dewaangi bhi muhabat laila ki pakizeegi bhi
muhabat wahshatoon ki tashnagi bhi muhabat phooloon ki shagaftgi bhi
muhabat sawanoon ki pyaari se thandak muhabat sehrawoon ki khushak dastak bhi
muhabat rooh se rooh ka gahra rishta muhabat key dil main app khuda hai basta
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rohit30002
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2005, 08:37:29 PM » |
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muhabat abbsharoon ki rawaani hai muhabat khud deewangi ki deewani hai
muhabat sitaroon ki khamoosh gazal hai muhabat zindagi ki shabnum liye ik kanwal hai
muhabat main sir jhukey tu pather ko adam ker dain muhabat main sir jhukey tu adam ko khuada ker dain
muhabat woh kashish ki jiss se kashish sitaroon main muhabat woh rooshani ki rooshani jiss se sitaroon main
muhabat key jazbey liye phoota hai gul muhabat main hi kissey key gata hai bulbul
jiss main jhoot ka sar-a-paa such ho mohubata woh ayeena aur ubhar ker jo kabhi na totey muhabat woh abbegeena
muhabat jo miley tu bas sakoon hi sakoon muhabat na miley tu bas janoon hi janoon
muhabat firishtoon ki sanahat hai muhabat jugnoowoon ki jagmagahat hai
muhabat mujnoo ki dewaangi bhi muhabat laila ki pakizeegi bhi
muhabat wahshatoon ki tashnagi bhi muhabat phooloon ki shagaftgi bhi
muhabat sawanoon ki pyaari se thandak muhabat sehrawoon ki khushak dastak bhi
muhabat rooh se rooh ka gahra rishta muhabat key dil main app khuda hai basta
Bahut badiya likha hai aapne humtum ji
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2005, 08:41:37 PM » |
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so... very beautifull....bahut bahut achi hai......................
tune to mohabbat ko jaan liya hai tujhe behtreen shayar humne maan liya hai
kijiye hamari waah waah kabool hum to hain shairon ke paon ki dhool.
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2005, 08:45:38 PM » |
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muhabat abbsharoon ki rawaani hai muhabat khud deewangi ki deewani hai
muhabat sitaroon ki khamoosh gazal hai muhabat zindagi ki shabnum liye ik kanwal hai
muhabat main sir jhukey tu pather ko adam ker dain muhabat main sir jhukey tu adam ko khuada ker dain
muhabat woh kashish ki jiss se kashish sitaroon main muhabat woh rooshani ki rooshani jiss se sitaroon main
muhabat key jazbey liye phoota hai gul muhabat main hi kissey key gata hai bulbul
jiss main jhoot ka sar-a-paa such ho mohubata woh ayeena aur ubhar ker jo kabhi na totey muhabat woh abbegeena
muhabat jo miley tu bas sakoon hi sakoon muhabat na miley tu bas janoon hi janoon
muhabat firishtoon ki sanahat hai muhabat jugnoowoon ki jagmagahat hai
muhabat mujnoo ki dewaangi bhi muhabat laila ki pakizeegi bhi
muhabat wahshatoon ki tashnagi bhi muhabat phooloon ki shagaftgi bhi
muhabat sawanoon ki pyaari se thandak muhabat sehrawoon ki khushak dastak bhi
muhabat rooh se rooh ka gahra rishta muhabat key dil main app khuda hai basta
Bahut badiya likha hai aapne humtum ji bahoot bahoot shukriya Rohit ji .. :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2005, 08:48:38 PM » |
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so... very beautifull....bahut bahut achi hai......................
tune to mohabbat ko jaan liya hai tujhe behtreen shayar humne maan liya hai
kijiye hamari waah waah kabool hum to hain shairon ke paon ki dhool. kabool hai Choti ji ..... lekin yeh aapney kya likh diya !!!
aap ki qalam se niiklley Ashaar to kamal hai padney ko aap ki shayri beqraar rehtey hai hum shayrna mehfil mein hai uncha naam aapka yhi har jagah har gadhi kehtey hai hum !!
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nikki
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2005, 08:52:51 PM » |
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thanx a lot Humtum.....
mohabbat ka jazba khuda ki den hai jiske dil mein jaage woh khushnaseeb
badal jaata pal mein uska naseeb lagta hai jaise khudara hai kareeb
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2005, 08:56:37 PM » |
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waah waah .....
muhoobat to shai hi assi hai iss dast o dariya mein mil jaye agar to rageen ye nazarey lagtey hai dewangi se chaa jati hai kuch dil ko iss kadar mehboob ki ankhien chamktey sitarey lagtey hai !
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SINGROHA
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2005, 09:00:35 PM » |
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very well written hum tum ji hum tum ki jodi khoob chlegi
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2005, 09:04:20 PM » |
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hmmm very nice....
dil ko milti hai jisse khushi kissi ka gum bante ko ji karta hai
kissi ki yaad aati hai pal pal kissi ki jhalak ko tadafti hain nigahein
kissi ko mehsoos karna chahta hai mann kissi ka wajood dharkata hai dil ko
kissi ka na milna gawara na ho uski surat se badhkar koi aur nazara na ho
uske do bol sun-ne ko bekraar raho uski awaaz se bekabo ho jaye dil
agar aisa ho to samajh lo ...rah-e-mohabbat par nikal pade ho
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2005, 09:10:13 PM » |
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bhoot khoob nikki ji ... bahut hi achey tareejey se byaaN kiya aapney !!! ab hamari waah waah kabool kijie !!!
kahin kisi ke kehne se koi pyyar ruka hai mana ke jis ne bhi kya uska dil dukha hai har roz ek nai arzoo hai ye meri zindagi her su vo jane jahhan ka manzar hai zindagi is sal nau ki duaon may jalwa usi ka tha dil ki dhadkano may bhi aahat usi ki thi kaun rok paya hai sailab mohabbaton ke kaun rok paya hai tufaan chahaton ke !!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2005, 09:11:21 PM » |
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very well written hum tum ji hum tum ki jodi khoob chlegi Thanx a lot SINGROHA !!! ab jodi chalegi ya nhi yeh to nhi pta :wink:
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2005, 09:15:20 PM » |
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wah wah wah HumTum..........kya comparison kiya hai mohabaat ka......well done dude!!!! .......bahut sachi likhi hai.....GOOD GOOD!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2005, 09:20:34 PM » |
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Thank u hai ji aapka Humtum ji...............................................
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