mohobbat main dhushwar hona acha laga...!

by roshni246 on July 03, 2006, 06:06:13 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 04, 2006, 09:19:44 AM »
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bahut khoob Neer and Roshu ......superbbbbbb :D
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«Reply #16 on: July 04, 2006, 09:23:10 AM »
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thxx mommmmmmmm!
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«Reply #17 on: July 04, 2006, 09:37:31 AM »
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oye hoeee ... kya baat hai ... chotti bahut accha :D
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«Reply #18 on: July 04, 2006, 09:43:08 AM »
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thankuuuuu
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«Reply #19 on: July 04, 2006, 09:49:53 AM »
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Door reh kar bhi tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga
tu bata ,aakhir tujhe yeh waaqiaa kaisa laga?

Itne fasle mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke maze
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga

Silsale teri yaadon ke phaile hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga

Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhale teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga

Kaise kahoon tere bin dasti hai mujhko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein ratton-jagna mujhe acha laga

Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gayi
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga

Faasle mittna paayenge inn dooriyon ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga

Cheen li neend jab aa ke tere khayaalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se chumna mujhe acha laga.


~rosh~


 Shocked Kya baat hai Sis.....IShq parwaan chadd raha hai :lol: ...and ranju....neer and all.....sabhi na Chand sitaare laga diye mehfil me :wink:
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«Reply #20 on: July 06, 2006, 11:01:00 AM »
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Mere Dil ki awaaz tere Dil ko lagii aacha lagaa
Silsila dil se dil ka badna lagaa … aacha lagaa..

Tumse pyar paaya, tumne mujhe apnaya aacha lagaa
Iss dil ko bhi pyar karna aaya … aacha lagaa

Teri masumiyat ko rang chaya mere zehan pe to aacha lagaa
Silsile mein fhir immtihaan bhi aaya to aacha lagaa

Dekar dil hum to zehan mein junoon jagaa baithey
Sambhalkar chaltey rahe bahut, abb ladkhadaya to aacha lagaa

Kasie karun wafaa mujhe itilaah nahi
Fhir bhi teri wafaa ka silsila mujhe aacha lagaa

Yoon to miltey rehenge milne ke waqt par..
Intezar mein tera naam yaad aaya to aacha lagaa

Logg puchtey rahe tumhein kalam karne ki adaawat
Teri shayari mein mera naam aaya to aacha lagaa.....

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Thankyou so much for the appreciation Ranju Mom. Tosha and BAdnaam bhai ...
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ranjana
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«Reply #21 on: July 06, 2006, 11:19:13 AM »
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too good neer ......bahut sunder likha hai......accha laga ...... :D
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«Reply #22 on: July 06, 2006, 04:23:42 PM »
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Mere Dil ki awaaz tere Dil ko lagii aacha lagaa
Silsila dil se dil ka badna lagaa … aacha lagaa..

Tumse pyar paaya, tumne mujhe apnaya aacha lagaa
Iss dil ko bhi pyar karna aaya … aacha lagaa

Teri masumiyat ko rang chaya mere zehan pe to aacha lagaa
Silsile mein fhir immtihaan bhi aaya to aacha lagaa

Dekar dil hum to zehan mein junoon jagaa baithey
Sambhalkar chaltey rahe bahut, abb ladkhadaya to aacha lagaa

Kasie karun wafaa mujhe itilaah nahi
Fhir bhi teri wafaa ka silsila mujhe aacha lagaa

Yoon to miltey rehenge milne ke waqt par..
Intezar mein tera naam yaad aaya to aacha lagaa

Logg puchtey rahe tumhein kalam karne ki adaawat
Teri shayari mein mera naam aaya to aacha lagaa.....

========================================

Thankyou so much for the appreciation Ranju Mom. Tosha and BAdnaam bhai ...


Kya baat hai Neer bhai....ek aur mast Post Shocked
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roshni246
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«Reply #23 on: July 06, 2006, 05:38:30 PM »
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dosti ka anjaam mohobbat hua...
teri ankhon ne mujhe chuna...jaan kar acha laga...

ehsaas e dil kab bara e sanam hum nahi jante...
tera wo mujhe bar bar izhaar e ishq sunana acha laga...

wo tera mujhe satana...naam kisi aur ka lekar tarpana
phir ankhon main ansoon dekh k pighal jaana acha laga...

ab to bas chaha hai tujhe khuda samaj kar...
tera meri har dua kabool karna acha laga...

wafa ki rah main wo kasme wadeein karna...
phir unhe har pal nibhana acha laga...

mera naam jab sunte ho tum kisi aur k labon se
wo tera maan hi maan jalna acha laga...

dil ka haal teh e dil se bayan karte hain ....
tu bata tujhe yeh pyaar bhara Afsana kaisa laga???

sab rishte naate ab tumse shuru aur tumhi se khatam
in sabko tujhpe nishar karna acha laga...!


~rosh~
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ranjana
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«Reply #24 on: July 07, 2006, 02:45:43 AM »
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good reply Roshu  dear............ :D
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nirbhay
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«Reply #25 on: July 07, 2006, 12:23:49 PM »
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Bohat Shukriya Ranju mom & Badnam bhai....

Good One Roshni..
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«Reply #26 on: July 08, 2006, 10:12:33 AM »
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Tere Dedaar pe aaya mousam dillagi ka aacha lagaa
Chaane lagaa khumaar tere pyar ka aacha lagaa

Do baaton mein hua tumse judaii ka intelaja aacha lagaa
Ek humsafar mila humko bhi, tanhai mitaa ke dil ko aacha lagaa

Hoti rahi justju beet ti gayi raatein aacha lagaa
Jalta rahaa kaajal mere dil mein, tere naino ka jalta diya aacha lagaa

Badhti rahi betaabi tumse izhar karne ki dil mein..
Badta dil mein kasak ka hisaaa aacha lagaa..

Dil mein aag lagaane ka ye tera nakhra aacha lagaa
Bahana mujhko yoon chu jaane acha lagaa…

Yoon to dhondtey rahe aas paas tumhein harr rozz
Kal Shyahi mein dooba paaya tera naam to aacha lagaa..
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«Reply #27 on: July 08, 2006, 12:29:18 PM »
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Door reh kar bhi tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga
tu bata ,aakhir tujhe yeh waaqiaa kaisa laga?

Itne fasle mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke maze
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga

Silsale teri yaadon ke phaile hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga

Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhale teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga

Kaise kahoon tere bin dasti hai mujhko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein ratton-jagna mujhe acha laga

Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gayi
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga

Faasle mittna paayenge inn dooriyon ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga

Cheen li neend jab aa ke tere khayaalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se chumna mujhe acha laga.


~rosh~


excellent roshni ji
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«Reply #28 on: July 08, 2006, 12:30:56 PM »
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Tere Dedaar pe aaya mousam dillagi ka aacha lagaa
Chaane lagaa khumaar tere pyar ka aacha lagaa

Do baaton mein hua tumse judaii ka intelaja aacha lagaa
Ek humsafar mila humko bhi, tanhai mitaa ke dil ko aacha lagaa

Hoti rahi justju beet ti gayi raatein aacha lagaa
Jalta rahaa kaajal mere dil mein, tere naino ka jalta diya aacha lagaa

Badhti rahi betaabi tumse izhar karne ki dil mein..
Badta dil mein kasak ka hisaaa aacha lagaa..

Dil mein aag lagaane ka ye tera nakhra aacha lagaa
Bahana mujhko yoon chu jaane acha lagaa…

Yoon to dhondtey rahe aas paas tumhein harr rozz
Kal Shyahi mein dooba paaya tera naam to aacha lagaa..


bahut khoob neer......
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«Reply #29 on: July 08, 2006, 12:32:06 PM »
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Mere Dil ki awaaz tere Dil ko lagii aacha lagaa
Silsila dil se dil ka badna lagaa … aacha lagaa..

Tumse pyar paaya, tumne mujhe apnaya aacha lagaa
Iss dil ko bhi pyar karna aaya … aacha lagaa

Teri masumiyat ko rang chaya mere zehan pe to aacha lagaa
Silsile mein fhir immtihaan bhi aaya to aacha lagaa

Dekar dil hum to zehan mein junoon jagaa baithey
Sambhalkar chaltey rahe bahut, abb ladkhadaya to aacha lagaa

Kasie karun wafaa mujhe itilaah nahi
Fhir bhi teri wafaa ka silsila mujhe aacha lagaa

Yoon to miltey rehenge milne ke waqt par..
Intezar mein tera naam yaad aaya to aacha lagaa

Logg puchtey rahe tumhein kalam karne ki adaawat
Teri shayari mein mera naam aaya to aacha lagaa.....

========================================

Thankyou so much for the appreciation Ranju Mom. Tosha and BAdnaam bhai ...


wah wah!!!!
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