Muhabbat Ki Jali Jot

by syednaami on May 05, 2008, 02:59:41 AM
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Pehli mulaaqat men dil ko lagi aisi chot, -
Muhabbat ki jali mann men ajab si ik jot. -

Dil ko sambhaalun ya tadapta rahun aise, -
jaise koi bejaan jism aur bhatakti rooh, -
Uske Har lafz men samaaya jaadu tha aise, -
jaise koi peeye sharaab aur mile suroor. -

Pehli mulaaqat men dil ko lagi aisi chot, -
Muhabbat ki jali mann men ajab si ik jot. -

Sunaai de na ab koi awaaz siwa uske kahin, -
Kaisi hai laggi yeh agan tan man men tabhi, -
Jabhi se goonje mere kaanon men uski hansi, -
Samjhaaun bhi to kaise hosh men ab nahin. -

Pehli mulaaqat men dil ko lagi aisi chot, -
Muhabbat ki jali mann men ajab si ik jot. -

Chanchal adaayen uski tadpaayen har waqt, -
Chheen liya chain-o-sukoon ud gayi neend, -
Har ghadi sataaye shor machaaye har pal, -
Milan ki aas men yaadon se bahlaata hun dil. -

Pehli mulaaqat men dil ko lagi aisi chot, -
Muhabbat ki jali mann men ajab si ik jot. -


(Syed Naami)


                     
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2008, 10:29:57 AM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai syed ji ... Clapping Smiley
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syednaami
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2008, 10:40:45 AM »
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Buhat shukriya amad ka aur padne ki nawaazish ka.
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2008, 12:41:57 PM »
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wowow kaya baat hai Sami ji!!! bahoot achi, bahoot hi chanchal c aor bahoot saral bhasha main apne yah kavita ki rachna ki hai!!! Bahoot khoob!!

Dil khush ho gaya!!

Dil mai jali jot ki, madham madham anch jalaye hai
Kab hogi agali mulakaat, ab to yahi baat staye hai

Tadpate hue dil ko, wo muskaan thundak pahunchaye hai
Yaadon mai uski baatein, ek bansuri si bajaye hai

Ek ussi ke awaz gunje ab to her pal mere kaano main
Wo terdi najar ki muskaan, her pal dil lubhaye hai

Dil mai jali jot, Tan-man mai agan lagaye hai
Kab hogi agali mulakaat, ab to yahi baat satye hai!!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2008, 12:54:23 PM »
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bahot khoob syed ji...hmmm kya baat hai...?

pooja di bahot hi acha reply diye aap ne...bahot acha laga...
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2008, 01:10:56 PM »
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wah wah syed ji bahut umda kalam pesh ki aapne.
and pooja di lovely reply  Applause
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syednaami
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2008, 01:42:35 PM »
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Pooja ji aap ke munh men ghee shakar, mulaaqat hogi zaroor hogi uss se.
Punam ji, baat hai to likhte hain na. Thanks so much for your questions.

Roja Ma'am, aap ka behad mamnoon hun, aap ke aane se jo ujala aaya yeh bazm khil uthtee, Shukriya.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2008, 08:02:31 PM »
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Syed naami sa. aap ki tahrir kardah nazm hame bohot pasand aai, bhohot khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2008, 08:06:12 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 12:41:57 PM
wowow kaya baat hai Sami ji!!! bahoot achi, bahoot hi chanchal c aor bahoot saral bhasha main apne yah kavita ki rachna ki hai!!! Bahoot khoob!!

Dil khush ho gaya!!

Dil mai jali jot ki, madham madham anch jalaye hai
Kab hogi agali mulakaat, ab to yahi baat staye hai

Tadpate hue dil ko, wo muskaan thundak pahunchaye hai
Yaadon mai uski baatein, ek bansuri si bajaye hai

Ek ussi ke awaz gunje ab to her pal mere kaano main
Wo terdi najar ki muskaan, her pal dil lubhaye hai

Dil mai jali jot, Tan-man mai agan lagaye hai
Kab hogi agali mulakaat, ab to yahi baat satye hai!!!!



bohot hi umda... pooja ji aap ke filbadeeh likhe huwe ash'aar bohot hi sundar he.
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2008, 08:07:24 PM »
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shukaria Punam and Roja!!!

Sami ji.. dil se dua hai ki apki mulaaqat hogi zaroor hogi uss se.

bahoot bahoot shukaria sayyid ji.   ek apki hi kami thi Urdu ki kami yaha poori karne ke liye..

filbadeeh  BangHead
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2008, 01:10:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 05, 2008, 08:02:31 PM
Syed naami sa. aap ki tahrir kardah nazm hame bohot pasand aai, bhohot khoob.
Randeri Miyan,
Bas kuchh taghayyur hai, jo iss tarah ka likhna hota hai, warna kon jaane shayri kya hai. Shukriya

Quote from: Roja on May 05, 2008, 01:10:56 PM
wah wah syed ji bahut umda kalam pesh ki aapne.
and pooja di lovely reply  Applause
Roja jee, buhat shukriya jo aap ne hosla afzai ki.

Quote from: honeyrose on May 05, 2008, 10:29:57 AM
Bohat khoob likha hai syed ji ... Clapping Smiley

Honeyrose, Thanks for being here and appreciation.
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2008, 02:12:09 PM »
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sab log liye sang-e-malaamat nikal aaye
kis shahar mein ham ahal-e-muhabbat nikal aaye

ab dil kii tamannaa hai to ai kaash yahii ho
aansuu kii jagah aankh se hasarat nikal aaye

har ghar kaa diyaa gul na karo tum ke na jaane
kis baam se Khurashiid-e-qayaamat nikal aaye

jo dar_paa-e-pindaar hain un qatl_gahon se
jaan deke bhii samajho ke salaamat nikal aaye

ai ham_nafason kuchh to kaho ahad-e-sitam kii
ik harf se mumkin hai hikaayat nikal aaye

yaaro mujhe masaluub karo tum ke mere baad
shaayad ke tumhaaraa qad-o-qaamat nikal aaye
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2008, 02:16:56 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 08:07:24 PM
shukaria Punam and Roja!!!

Sami ji.. dil se dua hai ki apki mulaaqat hogi zaroor hogi uss se.
bahoot bahoot shukaria sayyid ji.   ek apki hi kami thi Urdu ki kami yaha poori karne ke liye..

filbadeeh  BangHead

Pooja saahiba, Shukriya, aap ne humen izzat bakhshi apni filbadeeh nazm jawaaban likh kar. Maherbaani.
Sir ko mat peeto, yeh hai meaning....  DOH
Filbadeeh = Bina soche samjhe, jaldbaazi men, foran, ek saans men, bina ruke

Quote from: punam on May 05, 2008, 12:54:23 PM
bahot khoob syed ji...hmmm kya baat hai...?
pooja di bahot hi acha reply diye aap ne...bahot acha laga...

Thanks a lot Punam jee, aap bhi kuchh likhye please...
Baat kya hogi bhai, bas sirf nazm to hai.  Giggle

Quote from: nikss on May 11, 2008, 02:12:09 PM
sab log liye sang-e-malaamat nikal aaye
kis shahar mein ham ahal-e-muhabbat nikal aaye

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yaaro mujhe masaluub karo tum ke mere baad
shaayad ke tumhaaraa qad-o-qaamat nikal aaye

Thanks Nikss, you have made this mahfil once again enlightened, wonderful poem, Bravo!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2008, 02:05:07 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 08:07:24 PM
shukaria Punam and Roja!!!

Sami ji.. dil se dua hai ki apki mulaaqat hogi zaroor hogi uss se.

bahoot bahoot shukaria sayyid ji.   ek apki hi kami thi Urdu ki kami yaha poori karne ke liye..

filbadeeh  BangHead

Filbadeeh???  icon_scratch icon_scratch
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2008, 02:36:41 AM »
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Click here for the meaning. Thanks
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