MUJHAY SAMEAT LO KHUD MEI

by SUMBUL QAISER on December 15, 2008, 07:24:50 PM
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        "KUCH TOH MERI WAFAON KA MUQARAR INAM KAR DO.
         MUJH PAY BENAAM SI MOHABAT AAM KAR DO.
         MUJHAY NAHE TALAB TERE SATH KI UMAR BHAR K LIAY.
         MAGAR KUCH PAL ZINDAGI KA APNE MERE NAAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY TOOTH K CHAHO TUM.
         MAGAR YEH BHI NAHI CHAHTI K MUJHAY BADNAAM KAR DO.
         MUJAHY DAAR HAI K KAHIN LOG NA MUJHAY TERE NAAM SE PUKARAY.
         MUJHAY KAID KAR LO AANKHO MEI MUJHAY APNA GHULAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY AB TUM SAY CHAHAT NAHI RAHI.
         CHAHO TOH MERE AZMAISH SAR-E -AAM KAR DO.
         MEI BUS CHAHTI HUN REHNA TERE WAJOOD K DAEARY MEI,
         SAMEAT LO KHUD MEI MUJHAY YA MUJHAY NEELAM KAR DO."
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2008, 08:15:49 PM »
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Another nice one Qaiser Ji
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Deepati
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2008, 03:51:40 AM »
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        "KUCH TOH MERI WAFAON KA MUQARAR INAM KAR DO.
         MUJH PAY BENAAM SI MOHABAT AAM KAR DO.
         MUJHAY NAHE TALAB TERE SATH KI UMAR BHAR K LIAY.
         MAGAR KUCH PAL ZINDAGI KA APNE MERE NAAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY TOOTH K CHAHO TUM.
         MAGAR YEH BHI NAHI CHAHTI K MUJHAY BADNAAM KAR DO.
         MUJAHY DAAR HAI K KAHIN LOG NA MUJHAY TERE NAAM SE PUKARAY.
         MUJHAY KAID KAR LO AANKHO MEI MUJHAY APNA GHULAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY AB TUM SAY CHAHAT NAHI RAHI.
         CHAHO TOH MERE AZMAISH SAR-E -AAM KAR DO.
         MEI BUS CHAHTI HUN REHNA TERE WAJOOD K DAEARY MEI,
         SAMEAT LO KHUD MEI MUJHAY YA MUJHAY NEELAM KAR DO."

Very nice, Sumbul Ji
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javedarshad
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2010, 04:46:17 PM »
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        "KUCH TOH MERI WAFAON KA MUQARAR INAM KAR DO.
         MUJH PAY BENAAM SI MOHABAT AAM KAR DO.
         MUJHAY NAHE TALAB TERE SATH KI UMAR BHAR K LIAY.
         MAGAR KUCH PAL ZINDAGI KA APNE MERE NAAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY TOOTH K CHAHO TUM.
         MAGAR YEH BHI NAHI CHAHTI K MUJHAY BADNAAM KAR DO.
         MUJAHY DAAR HAI K KAHIN LOG NA MUJHAY TERE NAAM SE PUKARAY.
         MUJHAY KAID KAR LO AANKHO MEI MUJHAY APNA GHULAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY AB TUM SAY CHAHAT NAHI RAHI.
         CHAHO TOH MERE AZMAISH SAR-E -AAM KAR DO.
         MEI BUS CHAHTI HUN REHNA TERE WAJOOD K DAEARY MEI,
         SAMEAT LO KHUD MEI MUJHAY YA MUJHAY NEELAM KAR DO."

bahut khoob


dad qubool ho


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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2010, 05:14:02 PM »
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Sumbul Ji behter likha hai. Nice creation but zara mafhoom par tawjjo farmayen. Qafia milane ka ye matlab nahi ke kuchh bhi likh do. Please dont mind. Aapki poem ke mizaaj se wabasta kuch ash-aar pesh hain.

Roye Hain Bohot Tab Qaraar Mila Hai
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Ek Khatam Hua To Dusra Tayyar Mila Hai

Mere Daman Ko Khushiyon Ka Nahin Malal
Gham Ka Khazana To Ise Beshumar Mila Hai
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2010, 07:48:39 PM »
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        "KUCH TOH MERI WAFAON KA MUQARAR INAM KAR DO.
         MUJH PAY BENAAM SI MOHABAT AAM KAR DO.
         MUJHAY NAHE TALAB TERE SATH KI UMAR BHAR K LIAY.
         MAGAR KUCH PAL ZINDAGI KA APNE MERE NAAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY TOOTH K CHAHO TUM.
         MAGAR YEH BHI NAHI CHAHTI K MUJHAY BADNAAM KAR DO.
         MUJAHY DAAR HAI K KAHIN LOG NA MUJHAY TERE NAAM SE PUKARAY.
         MUJHAY KAID KAR LO AANKHO MEI MUJHAY APNA GHULAM KAR DO.
         MEI YEH NAHI KEHTI K MUJHAY AB TUM SAY CHAHAT NAHI RAHI.
         CHAHO TOH MERE AZMAISH SAR-E -AAM KAR DO.
         MEI BUS CHAHTI HUN REHNA TERE WAJOOD K DAEARY MEI,
         SAMEAT LO KHUD MEI MUJHAY YA MUJHAY NEELAM KAR DO."

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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2010, 01:04:57 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Sambul ji,very touching and lovely creation.Riyaz ji aapne bhi kamaal ke likha hai.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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