<>*Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai*<>

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<>*Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai*<>

Dekha tha use jis pal me Lamha wo aaj bhi yaad hai
Uska wo jai shree Krishna kehna Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Har roz aake banana baatein  Har roz ki wo bahane baazi
Mujhe dekhne ki chahat uski Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Wo ghanto ki mulakatein Wo na khatm hone wali baatein
Wo raaton ko unka phone karna Mujhe aaj bhi yad hai

Wo jhute mute jhagde Wo ruthna manana
Yunhi chup chap chale jana Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Wo raat raat bhar rona Wo kanha k saamne gidgidana
Wo teri aankhon se lahu behna Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Kisi aur se mera baatein karna Tera mujhe rokna tokna
Wo roz roz ki takraarein Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Mere wo jhute wade Wo teri nibhai kasmein
Wo sare  ankahe afsane Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Har baar tujhe khona Fir khoke paa lena
Wo kanha ki saugaatein Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Wo pehli mulakat  Jab the humtum sath
Wo pehle pyaar ka sparsh Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Tera muskurana, wo aankhein dikhana
Wo gusaa tera , wo tera ruth jana
Wo pyaar ki barsaatein, wo din, wo raatein
Mere janu mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Haan janu mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai…!!!


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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 07:27:10 PM »
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<>*Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai*<>

Dekha tha use jis pal me Lamha wo aaj bhi yaad hai
Uska wo jai shree Krishna kehna Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Har roz aake banana baatein  Har roz ki wo bahane baazi
Mujhe dekhne ki chahat uski Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Wo ghanto ki mulakatein Wo na khatm hone wali baatein
Wo raaton ko unka phone karna Mujhe aaj bhi yad hai

Wo jhute mute jhagde Wo ruthna manana
Yunhi chup chap chale jana Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Wo raat raat bhar rona Wo kanha k saamne gidgidana
Wo teri aankhon se lahu behna Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Kisi aur se mera baatein karna Tera mujhe rokna tokna
Wo roz roz ki takraarein Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Mere wo jhute wade Wo teri nibhai kasmein
Wo sare  ankahe afsane Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Har baar tujhe khona Fir khoke paa lena
Wo kanha ki saugaatein Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Wo pehli mulakat  Jab the humtum sath
Wo pehle pyaar ka sparsh Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Tera muskurana, wo aankhein dikhana
Wo gusaa tera , wo tera ruth jana
Wo pyaar ki barsaatein, wo din, wo raatein
Mere janu mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Haan janu mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai…!!!


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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 07:27:59 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB

thnx manoj ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 07:32:19 PM »
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Straight from the heart..... kavita kya hoti bas feelings.... kuch yaadein... kuch ehsaas... kuch jasbaat... bas ban gayi kavita... kavita likhne ke liye issse jyaada kuch nahi chahiye.... aur aapne apni yaadon ko itni khoobsurti se sameta hai aur use shabdon ka roop diya hai ki main kya kahun... maine is kavita ko ek baar padha... just padha.... dusri baar padha visualize karke.... aur teesri baar padha feel leke... aur sach kahun to ye mere aankhon ke saamne aa gaya.... main ise padh kar kuch kuch apni kahaani me kho gaya ... bahut bahut pyaara likha hai aapne.... sach... and it's straight from the heart... aur dil se nikli baatein hamesha dil ko chhoo jaati hain..... too good....!!!

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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 07:35:26 PM »
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Straight from the heart..... kavita kya hoti bas feelings.... kuch yaadein... kuch ehsaas... kuch jasbaat... bas ban gayi kavita... kavita likhne ke liye issse jyaada kuch nahi chahiye.... aur aapne apni yaadon ko itni khoobsurti se sameta hai aur use shabdon ka roop diya hai ki main kya kahun... maine is kavita ko ek baar padha... just padha.... dusri baar padha visualize karke.... aur teesri baar padha feel leke... aur sach kahun to ye mere aankhon ke saamne aa gaya.... main ise padh kar kuch kuch apni kahaani me kho gaya ... bahut bahut pyaara likha hai aapne.... sach... and it's straight from the heart... aur dil se nikli baatein hamesha dil ko chhoo jaati hain..... too good....!!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 08:17:22 PM »
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   Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia tasveer ubhari hai aapne tehreer se,
Behad achche khaloN ki malik hai aap...
behad khoob rahi aapki yeh kalaam per aapne humare bataye huye.....
Tarike per amal nahi kiya hia... icon_scratch

Khair aap likhti rhaiye....
Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez.       
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 08:42:45 PM »
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<>*Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai*<>

Dekha tha use jis pal me Lamha wo aaj bhi yaad hai
Uska wo jai shree Krishna kehna Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Har roz aake banana baatein  Har roz ki wo bahane baazi
Mujhe dekhne ki chahat uski Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Wo ghanto ki mulakatein Wo na khatm hone wali baatein
Wo raaton ko unka phone karna Mujhe aaj bhi yad hai

Wo jhute mute jhagde Wo ruthna manana
Yunhi chup chap chale jana Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Wo raat raat bhar rona Wo kanha k saamne gidgidana
Wo teri aankhon se lahu behna Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Kisi aur se mera baatein karna Tera mujhe rokna tokna
Wo roz roz ki takraarein Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Mere wo jhute wade Wo teri nibhai kasmein
Wo sare  ankahe afsane Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Har baar tujhe khona Fir khoke paa lena
Wo kanha ki saugaatein Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Wo pehli mulakat  Jab the humtum sath
Wo pehle pyaar ka sparsh Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Tera muskurana, wo aankhein dikhana
Wo gusaa tera , wo tera ruth jana
Wo pyaar ki barsaatein, wo din, wo raatein
Mere janu mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai

Haan janu mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai…!!!



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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 05:01:21 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Ji

thnx raja harish ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 05:02:30 AM »
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   Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia tasveer ubhari hai aapne tehreer se,
Behad achche khaloN ki malik hai aap...
behad khoob rahi aapki yeh kalaam per aapne humare bataye huye.....
Tarike per amal nahi kiya hia... icon_scratch

Khair aap likhti rhaiye....
Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez.       


parwaz ji koshish ki thi..par flow me likhti gai and wo dhayn nahin raha ji....
aapne khyal pasand kiye uske liye shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 06:26:46 AM »
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Kuch lamhon ki yaad diladi apne hume..Kuch lamhein jisne meri zindagi kabhi behad rangeen kardi thi..bahaut bahaut khoob likha hai Anamika di..Dil choo ne wali kavita hai yeh apki..Dil bahaut kuch kehna chahta hai yeh parr kar bas lavz nahin mil rahe hai..Mager itna keh sakta hoon "Haan mujhe aj bhi yaad hai.."
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2010, 06:49:59 AM »
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Kuch lamhon ki yaad diladi apne hume..Kuch lamhein jisne meri zindagi kabhi behad rangeen kardi thi..bahaut bahaut khoob likha hai Anamika di..Dil choo ne wali kavita hai yeh apki..Dil bahaut kuch kehna chahta hai yeh parr kar bas lavz nahin mil rahe hai..Mager itna keh sakta hoon "Haan mujhe aj bhi yaad hai.."

rahim.....ye yad hain isily aaj hum wo hain jo hum hain.....
ise hamesha dil me yunhi sajaye rakhna bhai
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2010, 10:36:22 AM »
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Aapne Bakhoobi Apne Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon mein Utaara Hai,Padhkar Yuh Mehsoos Hua Jaise Yeh Koi Kalpana Nahi Hai Balki Ek Haqeeqat hai..

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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2010, 12:00:26 PM »
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bahut khoob kasak ji bahut pyar se likhi hai apne ye kavita kisi k bepanah pyar ki jhalak apki rachna mein saaf nazar aa rahi hai...keep it up...
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2010, 01:26:47 PM »
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Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat Hai..!!!!! Anamika Ji Ek ek Lafz Mohabbat Me Bheega Nazar aaya... Pyaar Bhare Lamhaaton ko Utni Hi Mohabbat Ke Sath Kaagaz Par utaara hai aapne.. Bahut Pyaari Lagi mujhe aapki Yeh Rachna.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2010, 03:15:25 PM »
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I am speechless .. I can see the true feelings behind this such fantastic poetry.... Its awesome .. super

Jai Shree Krishna se Mujhe kuch kuch koi koi dyaan mein aa raha hai.. anyways///

Best of luck and have a lovely future!
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