<>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<> :Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!

Apne Ehsaas Se Mujhe Sparsh
Kar Jao Na
Tum Mujhe Chhu K Kundan
Bana Jao Na!!!

Sajna Sawarna Bhul Chuki Hun
Yaadon Mein Teri
Tum Apne Haathon Se Mujhe
Saja Jao Na !!!

Ye Hawaein Udake Le Jati Hain
Aanchal Mera
Isse Thamlo... Mujhe Mehfuuz
Kar Jao Na !!!

Main Shama Ban Jal Rahi Hun
Kabse Tere Liye
Tum Bhi Parwane Ban Mujh
Par Mandrao Na !!!

Naam Ret Par Nahin Apne Dil
Par Likha Hai Maine
Tum Bhi Apne Dil Par Meri
Tasveer Sajao Na !!!

Raatein Kat Rahi Hain Sirf
Tere Intezar Mein
Tum Aa Jao Aur Mujhe Apna
Bana Jao Na !!!


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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 11:02:33 AM »

sach me aap ne kamal ke ehsason ko piroya hai shabdon me
itne aasan hai in shabdon ke bol ke bacha bhi padh jaye
maja aagaya itnaa aasan kaise likh leti hain aap
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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 11:06:29 AM »

jo baat saral sidhe shabdon me kahi ja sakti hai use complicated kyun karna ji.....meri life simple mera likhna simple.....
bas isily likh liya jo dil me aaya wo....

pasand karne k liye shukriya janaab.....


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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2010, 11:18:48 AM »

han sahi kaha ji

aapne bilkul sahi kaha

ham aap ka bilkul bhi sath nahi chhodengy
han agar wo aagai to.................

ehehehehhehe
chodna padega na .........


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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2010, 11:19:28 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI kASK-DI....Very ROMAANTIC CREATION.... Applause

Mujhe chhoo k mere paas hone ka ehsaas dilao na
Mein hu tumhaari, tum mere ho vishwaas dilao na

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 15, 2010, 10:32:50 AM

Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!


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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2010, 11:22:36 AM »

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ka Kasak Ji


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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2010, 12:41:55 PM »

Ek aur umda peshkash kasak ji...


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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2010, 04:00:12 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Anamaikaji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas!!!!

har ek lafz Dil Ko Chuuta Hua..

Bahut Ache


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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2010, 05:01:22 PM »

achi kaawish hai aapki, andaaz bhi acha hai........daad hazir hai qubool keejiye

aslam


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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2010, 07:55:26 AM »

Waah Kasak ji waah...!!! Lajaawaab likha hai aapne... bahut hi khoobsurat... bahut hi umda... mohabbat me doobi hui aapki ye kavita bahut achchi lagi humein... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

Koshish ki hai humne bhi kush likhne ki iske jawaab me... aap jaisa achcha to nahi likh sakte par ek chhoti si koshish ki hai bas...!!!

kuch tumhaari mohabbat ka asar yun humpe bhi hai,
   betabi wahan hai to kuch bekarari yahaan bhi hai,

sambhala tha arse se dil ko kisi khaas ke liye,
   talash thi jis dil ki wo shayad tumhaara hi hai,

tasveer tumhaari is dil me bana to rakhi hai humne,
   use chahat se rangne ki tamanna kuch hamari bhi hai,

fizaaon me mohabbat ki mehek kuch is tarha si hai,
   ki shama pe mar mitne ko tayyar ye parwana bhi hai,

tum aajao ki ab nahi sahi jati ye doori aur humse,
   tumhe baahon me bharne ki tamanna hamari bhi hai,

tadap rahe hain tumhe paane ke liye hum barso se,
   tumhe apna banane ki aarzoo dil me hamare bhi hai...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2010, 08:14:02 AM »

aahhhaaaaaa.........Hriday ji.....kya khub kaha hai.... accha laga k aapki meri kavita pasand aai.......shukriya ji itna pyara reply dene k liye....jab iss tarah k reply milte hain apne aap likha hua accha ban jata hai....

ab to khul gai hain aapke dil ki baatein saari
ab to ye doori mita dijiye

chhup chup dekha karte ho aap hume har pal
ye nazrein to ab mila lijiye

aah bharna hamare naam se ab to rehne do
ab apne naam sath mera naam jod lijiye

khamosh bht reh liye aap dard e dil sehkar
aaj apne pyaar ka izhaar kar dijiye

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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2010, 08:33:32 AM »

U r welcome Kasak ji... kya karein itni pyaari rachna padhke kuch likhe bina raha nahi gaya to likh diya tha... aur aapka itna pyaara jawaab milte hi hum fir mazboor ho gaye kuch aur likhne ko...

izhaar-e-mohabbat ko kar chuke hum kabse,
aapse hamari yeh nazar mili hai jabse,

kuch baatein hothon se bayan nahi karte,
chaha hai aapko jahaan me badhke sabse,

khwaabon me bhi tab se bas aap hi ho,
dil hi dil chaha hai humne apko jabse,

milan ki wo ghadi ab to kareeb hi hai,
le jayenge tab churake hum apko sabse,

lo aaj ye sach hum kehte hain aapse,
ki aapko chahte hain hum kai barso se....

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2010, 08:47:56 AM »

uffffffffff.........kya khubbb kaha hai ji......mahobbat ka izhaar bhi aur issraar bhi...badhiya ji bht badhiya....

aaj aapki nazar kuch beimaan hui hai
jab se aapki nazrein humse char hui hai

keh rahi hain ye kai aise afsaane
jinse hamari palkein sharm se bezaar hui hai

hothon ka kampkampana kuch iss tarah ka hai
jaise hamare labon se inki kai baat hui hai

ab to churalo hume apne aap se k
hamari har dhadkan ab tumhare naam hui hai

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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2010, 09:12:28 AM »

Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... maafi chahenge abhi waqt ki kami ke kaaran jawaab nahi de paaye... jald hi hum jawaab denge ...!!!

Take care. Bye for now.


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Re: <>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2010, 09:38:07 AM »

will b waiting Hriday ji...jab waqt ho reply dijiyega ...take ur time


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