<>*Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 15, 2010, 10:32:50 AM
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«Reply #30 on: July 18, 2010, 08:56:30 PM »
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Ji shukriya Kasak ji... aur aapki shayari bhi kamaal ki hai... bas padh padh ke akele hi akele muskura rahe hain hum... sahi kahaa hai aapne itne pyaar bhare nazm padh ke sach mein gudgudi si hi hoti hai... aadat si chhoot gayi thi hamari likhne ki... ab fir se flow ban gaya hai... sach... shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

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haal kuch aisa hai apna,
lagta hai jaisa koi sapna,
tha main tanha is safar me,
ab koi ban gaya hai apna,

saath tera paake o jaana,
khwaab poore ho gaye hain,
har ghadi bas tera chehra,
bas wahi laage hai apna,

dhup me bhi tu hi tu hai.
os ki boondon me tu hai,
tu hai barkha, tu hai baadal,
tu hi sach hai tu hi sapna,

aaine me khud ko dekhun,
sochta hoon lagta hoon kaisa,
khwaab me socha na aisa,
ki khud ko bhi chaunga itna,

teri khaatir khud ko dekhun,
khud ko behtar karna chahun,
tha main tanha is safar me,
ab koi ban gaya hai apna...


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«Reply #31 on: July 19, 2010, 06:50:28 AM »
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Kasak Ji! Aadaab!
Aapki tehreer hi kuchh aisi hai k jo bhi ise paRhega beqaraar ho jaayega. Aapke ehsaasaat ko kuchh is tarah se pesh karne ki jasaarat kar raha hooN:

ToR kar sab zamaane ki rasmeN
Apni dulhan mujhe banaao na

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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 16, 2010, 12:15:14 PM
ufffffffffff........itni tareeffff.....
iss layak main hun kabhi socha nahin tha....lagta hai aaj udne lagungi.....bht bht shukruya aapka waquif ji k aapne itna pasand kiya mere likhe ko.....
aapki tareef ne to hausla badha diya ji....

aakne jo gazalpesh ki hai  usi andaaz me kehna chahungi kuch.....

rasmon ko chhod k tod k tum
mujhe ab apne ghar le jao na

mujhe mang lo zaalim zamane se
na maane zamana to isse lad jao na

ye  paak mahobbat hai mere sanam
aaj iski ibaadat tum kar jao na

khuda ki neymat se mile ho tum mujhe
ab karo na ruswa aao mere ban jao na...!![/color]
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«Reply #32 on: March 30, 2011, 07:54:26 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne ANamika JI
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«Reply #33 on: March 30, 2011, 08:08:30 PM »
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bht pyari jugalbani chal rahi thi hamari kapil ji.....kahan gayab ho gaye hain aap aajkal.....
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«Reply #34 on: March 30, 2011, 08:23:58 PM »
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main to yahin hoon sarkaar. bas net pe kam time de paa raha hoon. waise is thread pe likhne ki baari ab aapki thi. aapka reply hi nahi aaya.
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«Reply #35 on: March 30, 2011, 08:40:24 PM »
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Bahut miss kiya hai ye sab meine tou.......Dil se daad.....khumaar he khumaar bhara hai ess pure thread mai..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #36 on: March 30, 2011, 08:49:19 PM »
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Quote from: ~~HRIDAY~~ on March 30, 2011, 08:23:58 PM
main to yahin hoon sarkaar. bas net pe kam time de paa raha hoon. waise is thread pe likhne ki baari ab aapki thi. aapka reply hi nahi aaya.
continue karun ...agar aap sath do to...Huh??
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«Reply #37 on: March 30, 2011, 09:18:59 PM »
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KARLO CONTINUE.....Kapil ko hum manaa lenge.....par aysaa kuchh mat likhna k padh kar Mrs.Kapil.....kuchh ka kuchh samajh baithe.....
Aur Dhoni ban jaaye......he he he he he....just joking...

Aap dono mast likhte ho.....aapki jugalbandi band hone se Yo ki jaan he chali gayi......Kapil what you say yaar.....?
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«Reply #38 on: March 31, 2011, 04:46:13 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on March 30, 2011, 08:40:24 PM
Bahut miss kiya hai ye sab meine tou.......Dil se daad.....khumaar he khumaar bhara hai ess pure thread mai..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
Quote from: ANAAM on March 30, 2011, 09:18:59 PM
KARLO CONTINUE.....Kapil ko hum manaa lenge.....par aysaa kuchh mat likhna k padh kar Mrs.Kapil.....kuchh ka kuchh samajh baithe.....
Aur Dhoni ban jaaye......he he he he he....just joking...

Aap dono mast likhte ho.....aapki jugalbandi band hone se Yo ki jaan he chali gayi......Kapil what you say yaar.....?

sahi me humnaam me too miss writing wid him ...but he has his own time probs re.... waise bhi i too dnt get much time nowadays ....but ya would love to feel that magic again....words and thoughts aise aate the k .....
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«Reply #39 on: March 31, 2011, 05:46:50 AM »
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wowwwwwwww.........nicely written poetry anamika ji...some true feelings from heart........hriday ji apne bhi bahot aacha likha he......really anamika ji as u told it is magic....i agree.....i can see magic....keep it up
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«Reply #40 on: March 31, 2011, 12:54:12 PM »
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Yahi tou problem hai....Main actors k saamne supporting actor ko koi yaad nahi karta.....Chalo ess thread ka re-make shuru karo...aur puraane sabhi artist ko yaad rakhnaa......

Anouncing the remake of movie..
"Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!"
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«Reply #41 on: April 09, 2011, 05:41:46 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 16, 2010, 02:28:05 PM
Beintehaan Khubsoorat aur Dil ko Chhoo Jane wali Peshkash Hai Kasak Ji.. Ek Ek Lafz Mohabbat Ke Ehasaason se Bhara hai.. ek Behad hu Pyaar bhari Peshkash hai aapki.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen Dil se..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Kapil Bhai & Waquif Ji.. aapne Bhi Kamal likha hai.. Applause Applause



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mann ji aapne meri koshish ko pasand kiya isse badi baat mere liye kya ho sakti hain.....aapke tareef ka andaaz bas lubha jata hai dil ko........
yunhi aate rahiye aur mujhe hausla dete rahiye aur aapki tarah khumaar me likhne ka...always waiting for ur comments........
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«Reply #42 on: April 09, 2011, 05:42:45 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 31, 2011, 05:46:50 AM
wowwwwwwww.........nicely written poetry anamika ji...some true feelings from heart........hriday ji apne bhi bahot aacha likha he......really anamika ji as u told it is magic....i agree.....i can see magic....keep it up

thnx rajaji......aapne pasand kiya bht badi baat hai mere liye...plz b wid me always....
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«Reply #43 on: April 09, 2011, 05:43:28 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 31, 2011, 12:54:12 PM
Yahi tou problem hai....Main actors k saamne supporting actor ko koi yaad nahi karta.....Chalo ess thread ka re-make shuru karo...aur puraane sabhi artist ko yaad rakhnaa......

Anouncing the remake of movie..
"Mujhe Apna Bana Jao Na !!!"

heheheheh pagal koyu.......
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«Reply #44 on: April 09, 2011, 06:40:03 PM »
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oy Koyal ji Director-Producer main hu mujh se puchhe bina announce kar diya remake....kya autonomy aa gayee hai re....
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