Mujhe Apna Banaane Aaye Ho.......Koyal

by KOYAL46 on October 28, 2010, 07:27:25 PM
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Mujhe Apna Banaane Aaye Ho.......

Chahat ka khumaar
tum
Mohbaat ka paigaam liye
aaye ho........

Bhor ka ye sandesh
tum
usha ki lalima liye
aaye ho........

Chehre pe muskan
tum
pyaar ka uphaar liye
aaye ho........

Khushbooyon ka kaarvaan
tum
Phuloon ki baraat liye
aaye ho........

Sajee dulhan ban baithee hu
tum
Kahaar aur doli liye
aaye ho.....

O-Mere Rajkumaar
tum
Aaj mujhe apni banaane k liye
aaye ho........
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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2010, 09:39:35 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB
Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 28, 2010, 07:27:25 PM
[/color][/b]Mujhe Apna Banaane Aaye Ho.......

Chahat ka khumaar
tum
Mohbaat ka paigaam liye
aaye ho........

Bhor ka ye sandesh
tum
usha ki lalima liye
aaye ho........

Chehre pe muskan
tum
pyaar ka uphaar liye
aaye ho........

Khushbooyon ka kaarvaan
tum
Phuloon ki baraat liye
aaye ho........

Sajee dulhan ban baithee hu
tum
Kahaar aur doli liye
aaye ho.....

O-Mere Rajkumaar
tum
Aaj mujhe apni banaane k liye
aaye ho........
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2010, 07:13:22 AM »
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Hmmmmmmm kya baat hai sweetu bahut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2010, 07:40:51 AM »
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hahahahah..bahut sundar ...likha hae ek alag andaz me dikha aaj..eisa laga jaise kisi chhoti bachchi ne likha hooo..

shehnaii ki madhur taan ho
swar-vyanjanon ki muskaan ho
saje pushpa haar tere mere gale me
unchi sapno ki udaan ho
doli saji rakhi ho tere dware
ghode par ham bhi virajmaan ho
ek dulhan sundar si tum bano
eisi khubsurat apni koi shaam ho~ hihihii
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2010, 08:27:47 AM »
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laaajawabbbbbbbbbbbbbbb gudiya rani..........maza aagay ye tumhare sapno k rajkumar se milke.......par ye hai kaun ...aaya kaun hai zara bata bhi to de......
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2010, 08:33:45 AM »
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bahut bahut too good likha hai Koyal.. mast ....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2010, 09:51:55 AM »
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beautiful lines,
zaroor aaega rajkumar,
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2010, 10:06:24 AM »
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Manoj-bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya.... icon_flower

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on October 28, 2010, 09:39:35 PM
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2010, 10:08:04 AM »
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bahut khooob Koyalji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2010, 10:09:41 AM »
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Tahe dil se aapka aabhaar....Geet-di... icon_flower

Ye teri he seekhayee hui vidha hai
Mere khayaal kab tujhse judaa hain
Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 29, 2010, 07:13:22 AM
Hmmmmmmm kya baat hai sweetu bahut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2010, 11:01:01 AM »
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Thanks Abhi hosla-afzahi k liye..... icon_flower

Yaar ek Ad diya aur tum......
Ghode pe sawaar ho gaye,........ NaNaNa NaNaNa Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 29, 2010, 07:40:51 AM
hahahahah..bahut sundar ...likha hae ek alag andaz me dikha aaj..eisa laga jaise kisi chhoti bachchi ne likha hooo..

shehnaii ki madhur taan ho
swar-vyanjanon ki muskaan ho
saje pushpa haar tere mere gale me
unchi sapno ki udaan ho
doli saji rakhi ho tere dware
ghode par ham bhi virajmaan ho
ek dulhan sundar si tum bano
eisi khubsurat apni koi shaam ho~ hihihii
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2010, 11:09:30 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     KOYAL JI.....



AAJ FIR KOI NAYA

SAPNA DIKHANE TUM

    AAYE HO


YA HAQEEKAT MEIN

MUJHE APNA BANAANE

     AAYE HO
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