Mujhe apne dil mei basakar to dekho

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ग़ज़ल
मात्रा : 122 122 122 122 ( फऊलुन )
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मुझे दिल में अपने बसा कर तो देखो
मेरे दिल से दिल को लगा कर तो देखो

सफर ज़िंदगी का सुहाना लगेगा
मेरे साथ राहों पे आकर तो देखो

ये कांटें तुम्हें फूल जैसे लगेंगें
ज़रा मेरे पीछे ही आकर तो देखो

तुम्हारे ख्यालों की दुनियाँ बदल दूँ
निगाहों में अपनी बसाकर तो देखो

ग़मों से जो अबतक बहायें हैं आंसू
ख़ुशी के भी मोती गिराकर तो देखो

खुदा की क़सम मैं भुला दूँ जहाँ को
मुझे तुम गले से लगाकर तो देखो

तुम्हारे लिए जान दे दूँ ख़ुशी से
मुझे बात दिल की बता कर तो देखो

नहीं बेवफ़ा मैं बता दूँगा तुमको
मुझे तुम कभी आज़माकर तो देखो

है मैंने मुहब्ब्त वफ़ा से निभाई
मेरे साथ तुम भी निभाकर तो देखो

तुम्हें आरज़ू सा न दूजा मिलेगा
मेरे साथ दुनियां बसाकर तो देखो  

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mujhe dil mei apne basaakar to dekho..,
mere dil se dil ko lagaakar to dekho..,

safar zindgee ka suhaana lagega ......,
mere sath raaho.n pe aakar to dekho ..,

ye kaantei.n tumhe phool jaise lagenge,
zaraa mere peeche hi aakar to dekho...,

tumhare khyaalo.n ki duniya badal dun.,
nigaaho.n me apni basaakar to dekho...,

gamo.n se jo abtak bahaaye.n hai aansu,
khushi ke bhi motee giraakar to dekho.,

khuda ki kasam main bhula dun jahan ko,
mujhe tum gale se lagaakar to dekho...,

tumhaare liye jaan de dun khushi se...,
mujhe baat dil ki bataakar to dekho...,

nahin bewafa main bata dunga tumko....,
mujhe tum kabhi aajmaakar to dekho....,

hai maine muhabbat wafa se nibhayi....,
mere sath tum bhi nibhakar to dekho...,

tumhe aarzoo sa na dujaa milega.......,
mere sath duniya basaakar to dekho....,

AARZOO

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Kya baat hai .. Wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2016, 08:45:43 PM »
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ग़ज़ल
मात्रा : 122 122 122 122 ( फऊलुन )
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मुझे दिल में अपने बसा कर तो देखो
मेरे दिल से दिल को लगा कर तो देखो
Mujhe dil mein apne basaa ke to dekho
Mere dil se apnaa dil milaa ke to dekho

सफर ज़िंदगी का सुहाना लगेगा
मेरे साथ राहों पे आकर तो देखो
Safar zindagi kaa suhaanaa naa lage
Apni rah meri rah se milaa ke to dekho

ये कांटें तुम्हें फूल जैसे लगेंगें
ज़रा मेरे पीछे ही आकर तो देखो
Yeh kaante tujhe chubne naa paayen ge
Zaraa mere pichhe pichhe aa ke to dekho

तुम्हारे ख्यालों की दुनियाँ बदल दूँ
निगाहों में अपनी बसाकर तो देखो
Tumhaare khayaalo kee duniya badal doon
Apni nigah meri nigah se milaa ke to dekho

ग़मों से जो अबतक बहायें हैं आंसू
ख़ुशी के भी मोती गिराकर तो देख
Ghamon ke jo abbtak bahaaye hain aansu
Khushi ke bhi kabhi moti giraa ke to dekho

खुदा की क़सम मैं भुला दूँ जहाँ को
मुझे तुम गले से लगाकर तो देखो
Qasam khuda kee bhool jaao gi jahan bhi
Kabhi mujhe gale se lagaa ke to dekho

तुम्हारे लिए जान दे दूँ ख़ुशी से
मुझे बात दिल की बता कर तो देखो
Tere liye jaan bhi de doon khushi khushi
Mujhe baat dil kee kabhi bataa ke to dekho

नहीं बेवफ़ा मैं बता दूँगा तुमको
मुझे तुम कभी आज़माकर तो देखो
Main bewafaa nahin samajh jaao gee ek din
Aao jaan-e-man kabhi aazmah ke to dekho

है मैंने मुहब्ब्त वफ़ा से निभाई
मेरे साथ तुम भी निभाकर तो देखो
Mohabbat kaa nibhaanaa kise kehte hain
Mere qadam se qadam milaa ke to dekho

तुम्हें आरज़ू सा न दूजा मिलेगा
मेरे साथ दुनियां बसाकर तो देखो
Tujhe bashar aarzoo saa aur naa mile gaa
Mere saath apni duniya basaa ke to dekho  

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mujhe dil mei apne basaakar to dekho..,
mere dil se dil ko lagaakar to dekho..,

safar zindgee ka suhaana lagega ......,
mere sath raaho.n pe aakar to dekho ..,

ye kaantei.n tumhe phool jaise lagenge,
zaraa mere peeche hi aakar to dekho...,

tumhare khyaalo.n ki duniya badal dun.,
nigaaho.n me apni basaakar to dekho...,

gamo.n se jo abtak bahaaye.n hai aansu,
khushi ke bhi motee giraakar to dekho.,

khuda ki kasam main bhula dun jahan ko,
mujhe tum gale se lagaakar to dekho...,

tumhaare liye jaan de dun khushi se...,
mujhe baat dil ki bataakar to dekho...,

nahin bewafa main bata dunga tumko....,
mujhe tum kabhi aajmaakar to dekho....,

hai maine muhabbat wafa se nibhayi....,
mere sath tum bhi nibhakar to dekho...,

tumhe aarzoo sa na dujaa milega.......,
mere sath duniya basaakar to dekho....,

AARZOO


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Bahut khoob Arjun Jee. Main ne apni tarf se kuchh likhaa hai, dekh ke bataao ke kyaa yeh aapko behtar lagtaa hai. To me it makes it more clear and rhyes better.
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Bahut khoob Arjun Jee. Main ne apni tarf se kuchh likhaa hai, dekh ke bataao ke kyaa yeh aapko behtar lagtaa hai. To me it makes it more clear and rhyes better.


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Hriday sahib khamosh na raha kare....  Mujhe taliyon se jayada khushi apne baare ya likhe huye me sirf sach ko jaan kar hoti hai..

Aap jaise gunijano ke sachhe vichaar mere liye lesson hote hai..  Plz meri rachnon pe koi sudhaar ho to unhe plz bataayen...  Ye meri help hogi...
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वाह वाह बहुत खूब,अर्ज है --हमे भी अपने दिल में बसा कर देखो
निकलती है क्या आवाज उसे सुन कर देखो
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Kya baat hai sir.. Aap direct hi suna deejiye...  Hum to bekraar se baithe hai....  Shukriya rastogi g...
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