”” mujhe apni yaadon me gumsum kar de ””

by nirala on March 31, 2011, 05:02:48 PM
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nirala
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mujhe apni yadon me
besoodh, gumsuum kar de…

kho na jaaoon raat ki
khamoshi me kahin…

kuchh iss qadar tu mujhe
khud me guum kar de…!!!

wo dekh, ab to intehaan ho rahi
meri tadapptti sooni raaton ki…

ab der na kar jara kadmon ko aaghaaz de
baahen pasaar aur mujhe, mai se tum aor tumm se ‘ hum ’ kar de…‘!!!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2011, 06:27:40 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Bhai Mast Likha Hai
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2011, 07:55:14 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Akhri line toh oho kamal hai bas..
Khush rahiye..!
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Manish Kumar Khedawat
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2011, 08:07:49 PM »
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bahut khoob ji ..
specially last1
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Intezar
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2011, 08:20:22 PM »
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kya baat hai... nirala ji...

chhaaya hai phir se khumaar ishq ka...
aaj phir teri yaad mujhme samaayi hai... !!!

Intezar !
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Tamnna
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2011, 05:14:54 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

nice one.......
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2011, 05:52:02 AM »
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bht umda nirala ji....
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manjum
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2011, 06:45:52 AM »
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bahut khub kaha hai niralaji....

main se tuma aur tum se 'ham' kar de......
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2011, 06:51:36 AM »
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thanx dosto…
risi…
rahim…
manish…
tamanna…
manzil…
aap sab ka teh dil se sukragujaar hu ki aapne meri utpatang si soch ko parha aur saraha. thanx again
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2011, 06:57:56 AM »
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good poem Niralaaji....
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2011, 06:58:10 AM »
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intezaar …
aapko apni thread par dekh acha ldga…
aapki lines kamaal hai
thanx for cmnt
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2011, 07:05:11 AM »
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thanx manjum…
wese me apni post par cmnt karna pasand nai karta kuki mujhe na laaz aati gjai Usual Smile
lekin aplojo ka saath b acha lagta hai.
aapne apna waqt dia aur saraha iske lie thanx…dil se Usual Smile
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nirala
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2011, 07:22:58 AM »
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koyal sahiba…
aapse aisi rukhi sukhee cmnt ki ummeed nhi karta me.
by d way thanx ki aapki bhi nazren inayat hui…
me dhanya hua ji Usual Smile
thanx
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2011, 10:31:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob Nirala jee daad ..
Last line behad perfect kahi hai Usual Smile

Keep it Up keep writting Usual Smile         
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nirala
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2011, 04:20:38 PM »
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thanx parwaaz sahab.
aapko apni thread par dekh khusi hui.
thanx
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