-----/// Mujhe hadd se guzar jaane do naa ///----- Hriday

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mere ishq  mein khud ko tum aaj  aur thodaa sanwar jaane do naa
aake meri baahon mein khud ko aaj toot  kar  bikhar  jaane do naa

chhoo  lo   geele  labon   se  apne  mere labon  ko  is tarhaa  se aaj
ki  mere  sukhey  labon  to  tum  aaj  thodaa  nikhar  jaane  do naa

dekho  meri  aankhon  mein  nasheeley aakhon se is tarhaa  se aaj
aankhon ke raste se nashe ko mere jism  mein  utar  jaane  do naa

badhaake tezi mere  dhadkanao ki apni garam saanson se tum aaj
kuch  pal  ke  liye  hi  sahi  meri  saanson  ko  thahar  jaane do naa

naa  roko  khud  ko  aaj  tum, naa  hi roko  mujhe kisi baat par tum
jo hai dil  mein  kar jaane do, mujhe  hadd se  guzar  jaane  do naa




मेरे  इश्क़  में  खुदको  तुम  आज  थोड़ा  और  संवर  जाने   दो  ना
आके  मेरी  बाहों में खुद  को  आज  टूट  कर  बिखर  जाने   दो  ना

छू  लो  गीले   लबों से  अपने  मेरे  लबों  को  इस  तरहा  से आज
कि   मेरे  सूखे  लबों  को  तुम  आज  थोड़ा   निखर   जाने  दो  ना

देखो   मेरी   आँखों  में  नशीले   आँखों   से  इस   तरहा  से आज
आखों  के  रस्ते  से  नशे  को  मेरे  जिस्म  में  उत्तर  जाने दो ना

बढ़ाके तेज़ी  मेरे धड़कनो  की  अपनी  गरम  साँसों  से तुम  आज
कुछ  पल  के  लिए  ही  सही  मेरी  साँसों  को  ठहर  जाने  दो ना

ना रोको खुद को तुम आज , ना ही रोको मुझे किसी  बात पर तुम
जो  है  दिल  में  कर  जाने  दो,  मुझे  हद्द  से  गुज़र  जाने  दो ना





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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2015, 05:36:03 PM »
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mere ishq  mein khud ko tum aaj  aur thodaa sanwar jaane do naa
aake meri baahon mein khud ko aaj toot  kar  bikhar  jaane do naa

chhoo  lo   geele  labon   se  apne  mere labon  ko  is tarhaa  se aaj
ki  mere  sukhey  labon  to  tum  aaj  thodaa  nikhar  jaane  do naa

dekho  meri  aankhon  mein  nasheeley aakhon se is tarhaa  se aaj
aankhon ke raste se nashe ko mere jism  mein  utar  jaane  do naa

badhaake tezi mere  dhadkanao ki apni garam saanson se tum aaj
kuch  pal  ke  liye  hi  sahi  meri  saanson  ko  thahar  jaane do naa

naa  roko  khud  ko  aaj  tum, naa  hi roko  mujhe kisi baat par tum
jo hai dil  mein  kar jaane do, mujhe  hadd se  guzar  jaane  do naa




मेरे  इश्क़  में  खुदको  तुम  आज  थोड़ा  और  संवर  जाने   दो  ना
आके  मेरी  बाहों में खुद  को  आज  टूट  कर  बिखर  जाने   दो  ना

छू  लो  गीले   लबों से  अपने  मेरे  लबों  को  इस  तरहा  से आज
कि   मेरे  सूखे  लबों  को  तुम  आज  थोड़ा   निखर   जाने  दो  ना 

देखो   मेरी   आँखों  में  नशीले   आँखों   से  इस   तरहा  से आज
आखों  के  रस्ते  से  नशे  को  मेरे  जिस्म  में  उत्तर  जाने दो ना

बढ़ाके तेज़ी  मेरे धड़कनो  की  अपनी  गरम  साँसों  से तुम  आज
कुछ  पल  के  लिए  ही  सही  मेरी  साँसों  को  ठहर  जाने  दो ना

ना रोको खुद को तुम आज , ना ही रोको मुझे किसी  बात पर तुम
जो  है  दिल  में  कर  जाने  दो,  मुझे  हद्द  से  गुज़र  जाने  दो ना





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mere ishq  mein khud ko tum aaj  aur thodaa sanwar jaane do naa
aake meri baahon mein khud ko aaj toot  kar  bikhar  jaane do naa

chhoo  lo   geele  labon   se  apne  mere labon  ko  is tarhaa  se aaj
ki  mere  sukhey  labon  to  tum  aaj  thodaa  nikhar  jaane  do naa

dekho  meri  aankhon  mein  nasheeley aakhon se is tarhaa  se aaj
aankhon ke raste se nashe ko mere jism  mein  utar  jaane  do naa

badhaake tezi mere  dhadkanao ki apni garam saanson se tum aaj
kuch  pal  ke  liye  hi  sahi  meri  saanson  ko  thahar  jaane do naa

naa  roko  khud  ko  aaj  tum, naa  hi roko  mujhe kisi baat par tum
jo hai dil  mein  kar jaane do, mujhe  hadd se  guzar  jaane  do naa




मेरे  इश्क़  में  खुदको  तुम  आज  थोड़ा  और  संवर  जाने   दो  ना
आके  मेरी  बाहों में खुद  को  आज  टूट  कर  बिखर  जाने   दो  ना

छू  लो  गीले   लबों से  अपने  मेरे  लबों  को  इस  तरहा  से आज
कि   मेरे  सूखे  लबों  को  तुम  आज  थोड़ा   निखर   जाने  दो  ना

देखो   मेरी   आँखों  में  नशीले   आँखों   से  इस   तरहा  से आज
आखों  के  रस्ते  से  नशे  को  मेरे  जिस्म  में  उत्तर  जाने दो ना

बढ़ाके तेज़ी  मेरे धड़कनो  की  अपनी  गरम  साँसों  से तुम  आज
कुछ  पल  के  लिए  ही  सही  मेरी  साँसों  को  ठहर  जाने  दो ना

ना रोको खुद को तुम आज , ना ही रोको मुझे किसी  बात पर तुम
जो  है  दिल  में  कर  जाने  दो,  मुझे  हद्द  से  गुज़र  जाने  दो ना





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