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khalidrawat
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mujhe he sabr ki aadat tujhe jafa ki he
So mujh ko unsiyat tujh se sanam bala ke he
Karoo.N tu kaise karoo.N aitbaar mai.N iska
Qasam uthai bhi tu ne sanam khuda ki he
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Kiya he jis ki sada ne asar tere dil per
Sada wo mere nahi.N mere hamnawa ki he
Tu saamne bhi ager hu tu deed mushkil he
Ke tere husn mai.N ye rooshni bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
Abhi bhi wehshatai.N saya figan hai.N sir pe mere
Abhi bhi ishq ko hasrat tere wafa ki he
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2008, 10:55:01 AM » |
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Bahut khoob bhaijaan ...
Achhe shabd likhe hai aapne ...
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2008, 12:53:48 PM » |
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Bohat khoob likha hai khalidrawat ji..  |
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2008, 02:43:56 PM » |
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mujhe he sabr ki aadat tujhe jafa ki he
So mujh ko unsiyat tujh se sanam bala ke he
Karoo.N tu kaise karoo.N aitbaar mai.N iska
Qasam uthai bhi tu ne sanam khuda ki he
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Kiya he jis ki sada ne asar tere dil per
Sada wo mere nahi.N mere hamnawa ki he
Tu saamne bhi ager hu tu deed mushkil he
Ke tere husn mai.N ye rooshni bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
Abhi bhi wehshatai.N saya figan hai.N sir pe mere
Abhi bhi ishq ko hasrat tere wafa ki he
Khalid Jamil Rawat
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2008, 03:10:48 PM » |
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bahoot khoob khalidrawat ji!!
Abhi bhi wehshatai.N saya figan hai.N sir pe mere
Abhi bhi ishq ko hasrat tere wafa ki he
bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2008, 08:10:53 PM » |
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awesome
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2008, 08:12:33 PM » |
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keep it up
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2008, 12:39:47 AM » |
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Subhanallah!!!
Bohot khoob Khalid Jamil Sahab
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
be-shak ye ash'aar kisibhi mushaere ko lootne ke lye kaafi he,
isi tarha likhte rahye Khalid sa.!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2008, 02:59:18 AM » |
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mujhe he sabr ki aadat tujhe jafa ki he
So mujh ko unsiyat tujh se sanam bala ke he
Karoo.N tu kaise karoo.N aitbaar mai.N iska
Qasam uthai bhi tu ne sanam khuda ki he
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Kiya he jis ki sada ne asar tere dil per
Sada wo mere nahi.N mere hamnawa ki he
Tu saamne bhi ager hu tu deed mushkil he
Ke tere husn mai.N ye rooshni bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
Abhi bhi wehshatai.N saya figan hai.N sir pe mere
Abhi bhi ishq ko hasrat tere wafa ki he
Khalid Jamil Rawat
Wah wah Jamil Rawat sb.. bahut umda likha hai aapne |
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«Reply #9 on: March 08, 2008, 08:05:56 AM » |
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bohut shukriya aap ki pasand ka Bahut khoob bhaijaan ...
Achhe shabd likhe hai aapne ...
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«Reply #10 on: March 08, 2008, 08:07:07 AM » |
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mujhe he sabr ki aadat tujhe jafa ki he
So mujh ko unsiyat tujh se sanam bala ke he
Karoo.N tu kaise karoo.N aitbaar mai.N iska
Qasam uthai bhi tu ne sanam khuda ki he
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Kiya he jis ki sada ne asar tere dil per
Sada wo mere nahi.N mere hamnawa ki he
Tu saamne bhi ager hu tu deed mushkil he
Ke tere husn mai.N ye rooshni bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
Abhi bhi wehshatai.N saya figan hai.N sir pe mere
Abhi bhi ishq ko hasrat tere wafa ki he
Khalid Jamil Rawat
Wah wah Jamil Rawat sb.. bahut umda likha hai aapne bohut shukriya aap ki tawajjah ka, |
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«Reply #11 on: March 08, 2008, 08:08:11 AM » |
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Bohat khoob likha hai khalidrawat ji.. bohut shukriya ke aap ne ye ghazal pasand ki |
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«Reply #12 on: March 08, 2008, 08:09:19 AM » |
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Subhanallah!!!
Bohot khoob Khalid Jamil Sahab
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
be-shak ye ash'aar kisibhi mushaere ko lootne ke lye kaafi he,
isi tarha likhte rahye Khalid sa.!!
bohut bohut shukriya janaab, riwayaat ki taraf tawajjah dilana ka aur ,ghazal pasand kerne ka |
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«Reply #13 on: March 08, 2008, 08:10:35 AM » |
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mujhe he sabr ki aadat tujhe jafa ki he
So mujh ko unsiyat tujh se sanam bala ke he
Karoo.N tu kaise karoo.N aitbaar mai.N iska
Qasam uthai bhi tu ne sanam khuda ki he
Kisi ne maar ke khanger alag kiya he inhai.N
miyaan-e-ishq-o-khirad dushmani bala ki he
Kiya he jis ki sada ne asar tere dil per
Sada wo mere nahi.N mere hamnawa ki he
Tu saamne bhi ager hu tu deed mushkil he
Ke tere husn mai.N ye rooshni bala ki he
Abhi bhi haal mera he wohi mohabbat mai.N
Abhi bhi zakhm ko haajat kisi dawa ki he
Abhi bhi wehshatai.N saya figan hai.N sir pe mere
Abhi bhi ishq ko hasrat tere wafa ki he
Khalid Jamil Rawat
Wah wah Jamil Rawat sb.. bahut umda likha hai aapne Bohut shukriya roja ji aap ki pasand ka, |
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«Reply #14 on: March 08, 2008, 08:11:41 AM » |
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keep it up
bohut shukriya janaab ke aap ne hoosla barhaya |
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