-----/// Mujhe pyaar nazar aa jaata hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 02, 2012, 03:26:39 PM
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tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe pyaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe pyaar nazar aata hai,

sambhaale se sambhalta nahi hai dil apna kya karen,
tumhaari aankhon ko dekh humein nasha ho jaata hai,
sheeshe me jaam le ke hothon se lagaa lete hain,
jaam ko dekh tumhaara chehra nazar aa jaata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....

mujhe kuch hosh nahi aaj kal jo bhi main karta hoon,
kisliye jeeta hoon aur kis baat pe main marta hoon,
meri neendon me tumhaara khwaab nazar aa jaata hai,
har kahin julfon ka tumhaare sringaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....

barasti har boond ko dekh mera dil gungunaata hai,
bheege baarish me ye bas pyaar ke geet gaata hai,
tumhaari chaahat me mujhe aetbaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaari aankhon me mera chehra nazar aajaata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....

tumse milke main kabhi tumse duur na jaa paaunga,
na mili tum kabhi to main sach me hi mar jaaunga,
tumse duur hoke mera aankh hi bhar aata hai,
tumhaare har baat me iqraar nazar aa jaata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....


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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 03:31:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee

mujhe kuch hosh nahi aaj kal jo bhi main karta hoon,
kisliye jeeta hoon aur kis baat pe main marta hoon,
meri neendon me tumhaara khwaab nazar aa jaata hai,
har kahin julfon ka tumhaare sringaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe.... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2012, 04:09:30 PM »
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waah brother cha gaye aap to.
Kya saandar composition h.
Bhut khobsurat h
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2012, 05:31:29 PM »
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tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe pyaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe pyaar nazar aata hai,

sambhaale se sambhalta nahi hai dil apna kya karen,
tumhaari aankhon ko dekh humein nasha ho jaata hai,
sheeshe me jaam le ke hothon se lagaa lete hain,
jaam ko dekh tumhaara chehra nazar aa jaata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....

mujhe kuch hosh nahi aaj kal jo bhi main karta hoon,
kisliye jeeta hoon aur kis baat pe main marta hoon,
meri neendon me tumhaara khwaab nazar aa jaata hai,
har kahin julfon ka tumhaare sringaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....

barasti har boond ko dekh mera dil gungunaata hai,
bheege baarish me ye bas pyaar ke geet gaata hai,
tumhaari chaahat me mujhe aetbaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaari aankhon me mera chehra nazar aajaata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....

tumse milke main kabhi tumse duur na jaa paaunga,
na mili tum kabhi to main sach me hi mar jaaunga,
tumse duur hoke mera aankh hi bhar aata hai,
tumhaare har baat me iqraar nazar aa jaata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe....


*****HRIDAY*****
last para ke 2nd aur 3rd line bht commn hain
all total its a goodn sweet poetry dear
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2012, 06:44:48 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2012, 03:50:04 AM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2012, 01:49:20 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa MKV ji....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee

mujhe kuch hosh nahi aaj kal jo bhi main karta hoon,
kisliye jeeta hoon aur kis baat pe main marta hoon,
meri neendon me tumhaara khwaab nazar aa jaata hai,
har kahin julfon ka tumhaare sringaar nazar aata hai,
tumhaare har ek ada pe mujhe....
tumhaare har andaaz me mujhe.... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2012, 02:25:25 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Masoom ji....!!!


waah brother cha gaye aap to.
Kya saandar composition h.
Bhut khobsurat h

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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2012, 02:27:16 PM »
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Aaye haye Kya Baat Hai Kapil Bhai.. Behad Mohabbat Bhari kavita hai aapki.. Mohabbat bhare yeh Alfaaz Dil Ko Chhoo Gaye.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2012, 04:25:03 PM »
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Thanks a lot hai ji...!!!

last para ke 2nd aur 3rd line bht commn hain
all total its a goodn sweet poetry dear
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Waah Hriday ji.. Ak aur Khumaar se bhari kavita.. Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Umda...

Lagta hai aajkal aapko ishq ho gaya hai.. ak ke baad ak behtareen ishq se sarabor kavita.. kuch tho baat hai !!!
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Aatish ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2012, 04:04:40 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

bahut khoob Hriday ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2012, 04:21:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mann ji.... main dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiyaaa.... !!!

Aaye haye Kya Baat Hai Kapil Bhai.. Behad Mohabbat Bhari kavita hai aapki.. Mohabbat bhare yeh Alfaaz Dil Ko Chhoo Gaye.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2012, 04:23:09 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooo much Nysha ji.... main dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon.... aur humein kaun pyaar karega ... hum to ishq jaisi cheezn se bahut duur hain... hamaari aisi kismat kahaan ... tongue3

Waah Hriday ji.. Ak aur Khumaar se bhari kavita.. Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Umda...

Lagta hai aajkal aapko ishq ho gaya hai.. ak ke baad ak behtareen ishq se sarabor kavita.. kuch tho baat hai !!!
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